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Date:      Thu, 16 Jul 2015 20:08:27 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Matthew Seaman <matthew@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r46998 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/internal
Message-ID:  <201507162008.t6GK8Rfm059564@repo.freebsd.org>

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Author: matthew (ports committer)
Date: Thu Jul 16 20:08:27 2015
New Revision: 46998
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46998

Log:
  Improve wording.
  
  With hat:	core-secretary
  Submitted by:	jonathan
  Approved by:	core (gnn)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/internal/code-of-conduct.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/internal/code-of-conduct.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/internal/code-of-conduct.xml	Thu Jul 16 19:01:25 2015	(r46997)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/internal/code-of-conduct.xml	Thu Jul 16 20:08:27 2015	(r46998)
@@ -48,8 +48,7 @@
       that what may seem to you to be a very mild statement can be
       deeply shocking to another.  Avoid contentious topics (unless
       directly technically relevant).  These things all have their
-      places, but not when they are out of context
-      here.</p>
+      places, but not here, where they are out of context.</p>
 
     <p>Try not to take offense where no offense was intended.  Not
       everyone speaks or writes English fluently.  Not everyone can



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