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Date:      Sat, 24 Nov 2012 23:15:50 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Glen Barber <gjb@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject:   svn commit: r40151 - in projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1: articles/committers-guide articles/contributing articles/portbuild books/arch-handbook/driverbasics books/developers-handbook/kernelbuild boo...
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Author: gjb
Date: Sat Nov 24 23:15:50 2012
New Revision: 40151
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40151

Log:
  Merged /head/en_US.ISO8859-1:r39915,39994-40000,40002-40010,
  40017-40150 from ^/head/en_US.ISO8859-1

Added:
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/2012-compromise/
     - copied from r40150, head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/2012-compromise/
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/2012-compromise.xml
     - copied unchanged from r40150, head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/2012-compromise.xml
Modified:
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.xml
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/portbuild/article.xml
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/driverbasics/chapter.xml
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/kernelbuild/chapter.xml
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/policies/chapter.xml
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/tools/chapter.xml
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/cgi/cvsweb.cgi
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/cgi/ports.cgi
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/developers/cvs.xml
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/Makefile
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security/security.xml
Directory Properties:
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/   (props changed)

Modified: projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Sat Nov 24 22:57:41 2012	(r40150)
+++ projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Sat Nov 24 23:15:50 2012	(r40151)
@@ -3943,57 +3943,11 @@ U    stable/9/share/man/man4/netmap.4
 		</step>
 
 		<step>
-		  <para>Update the instructions for &man.cvsup.1;:</para>
-
-		  <itemizedlist>
-		    <listitem>
-		      <para>
-			add the category to
-			<filename>distrib/cvsup/sup/README</filename>
-		      </para>
-		    </listitem>
-
-		    <listitem>
-		      <para>
-			adding the following files into
-			<filename>distrib/cvsup/sup/ports-<replaceable>categoryname</replaceable></filename>:
-			<filename>list.cvs</filename> and
-			<filename>releases</filename>.</para>
-		    </listitem>
-
-		    <listitem>
-		      <para>
-			add the category to
-			<filename>src/share/examples/cvsup/ports-supfile</filename>
-		      </para>
-		    </listitem>
-		  </itemizedlist>
-
-		  <para>
-		    (Note: these are
-		    in the src, not the ports, repository).  If you
-		    are not a src committer, you will need to submit
-		    a PR for this.</para>
-		</step>
-
-		<step>
-		  <para>
-		    Update the list of categories used by &man.sysinstall.8;
-		    in <filename>src/usr.sbin/sysinstall</filename>.</para>
-		</step>
-
-		<step>
 		  <para>Update the documentation by modifying the
 		    following:</para>
 
 		  <itemizedlist>
 		    <listitem>
-		      <para>the section of the Handbook that lists the
-			<ulink url="&url.books.handbook;/cvsup.html#CVSUP-COLLEC">
-			cvsup collections</ulink>.</para>
-		    </listitem>
-
-		    <listitem>
 		      <para>the
 		    <ulink url="&url.books.porters-handbook;/makefile-categories.html#PORTING-CATEGORIES">
 		    list of categories</ulink> in the Porter's Handbook</para>
@@ -4043,10 +3997,6 @@ U    stable/9/share/man/man4/netmap.4
 
 	    <itemizedlist>
 	      <listitem>
-		<para><filename>src/usr.sbin/sysinstall</filename></para>
-	      </listitem>
-
-	      <listitem>
 		<para>the
 		  <ulink url="&url.books.porters-handbook;/makefile-categories.html#PORTING-CATEGORIES">
 		  list of categories</ulink> in the Porter's Handbook</para>

Modified: projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.xml	Sat Nov 24 22:57:41 2012	(r40150)
+++ projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.xml	Sat Nov 24 23:15:50 2012	(r40151)
@@ -234,7 +234,8 @@
       <title>Pick one of the items from the <quote>Ideas</quote>
 	page</title>
 
-      <para>The <ulink url="&url.base;/projects/ideas/">&os; list of
+      <para>The <ulink url="http://wiki.freebsd.org/IdeasPage">&os;
+	  list of
 	  projects and ideas for volunteers</ulink> is also available
 	for people willing to contribute to the &os; project.  The
 	list is being regularly updated and contains items for both

Modified: projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/portbuild/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/portbuild/article.xml	Sat Nov 24 22:57:41 2012	(r40150)
+++ projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/portbuild/article.xml	Sat Nov 24 23:15:50 2012	(r40151)
@@ -66,19 +66,23 @@
       otherwise specified, all paths will be relative to
       this location.  <replaceable>${arch}</replaceable> will
       be used to specify one of the package architectures
-      (amd64, &i386;, ia64, powerpc, and &sparc64;), and
+      (e.g., amd64, arm, &i386;, ia64, powerpc, &sparc64;), and
       <replaceable>${branch}</replaceable> will be used
-      to specify the build branch (7, 7-exp, 8, 8-exp, 9, 9-exp, 10, 10-exp).
+      to specify the build branch (e.g., 7, 7-exp, 8, 8-exp, 9, 9-exp, 10, 10-exp).
+      The set of branches that <username>portmgr</username> currently
+      supports is the same as those that the &os;
+      <ulink url="http://www.freebsd.org/security/index.html#supported-branches">security team</ulink>
+      supports.
     </para>
 
     <note>
-      <para>Packages are no longer built for Releases 4, 5, or 6, nor
+      <para>Packages are no longer built for branches 4, 5, or 6, nor
 	for the alpha architecture.</para>
     </note>
 
     <para>The scripts that control all of this live in
       <filename class="directory">/var/portbuild/scripts/</filename>.
-      These are the checked-out copies from the Subversion repository
+      These are the checked-out copies from the Subversion repository at
       <ulink url="http://svnweb.freebsd.org/base/projects/portbuild/scripts/">;
       <filename class="directory">base/projects/portbuild/scripts/</filename>
       </ulink>.</para>
@@ -95,16 +99,19 @@
 	<literal>-CURRENT</literal>
 	</para></listitem>
 
-      <listitem><para>for experimental builds</para></listitem>
+      <listitem><para>for experimental (<literal>"exp-"</literal>) builds</para></listitem>
+
     </itemizedlist>
 
+    <para>Packages from experimental builds are not uploaded.</para>
+
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 id="codebase-notes">
       <title>Notes on the codebase</title>
 
       <para>Until mid-2010, the scripts were completely specific to
-	<hostid>pointyhat</hostid> as the head (dispatch) node.  During
+	<hostid>pointyhat.FreeBSD.org</hostid> as the head (dispatch) node.  During
 	the summer of 2010, a significant rewrite was done in order to allow
 	for other hosts to be head nodes.  Among the changes were:</para>
 
@@ -136,9 +143,11 @@
 	to <literal>old codebase:</literal>.</para>
 
       <note>
-	<para>As of December 2010, <hostid>pointyhat</hostid> is still
-	  running on the old codebase, until the new codebase is considered
-	  rock-solid.</para>
+	<para>Up until November 2012, <hostid>pointyhat</hostid> had still
+	  been running the old codebase.  That installation has now been
+	  permanently offlined.  Therefore, all the instructions having
+	  to do with the old codebase are <emphasis>obsolete</emphasis>,
+	  and will be removed in the near future.</para>
       </note>
 
       <note>
@@ -167,7 +176,7 @@
       interesting data (ports and src trees, bindist tarballs,
       scripts, etc.) to disconnected nodes during the node-setup
       phase.  Then, the disconnected portbuild directory is
-      nullfs-mounted for chroot builds.</para>
+      nullfs-mounted for jail builds.</para>
 
     <para>The
       <username>ports-<replaceable>${arch}</replaceable></username>
@@ -179,41 +188,32 @@
     <para>The <command>scripts/allgohans</command> script can
       be used to run a command on all of the
       <replaceable>${arch}</replaceable> clients.</para>
-
-    <para>The <command>scripts/checkmachines</command> script
-      is used to monitor the load on all the nodes of the
-      build cluster, and schedule which nodes build which ports.
-      This script is not very robust, and has a tendency to die.
-      It is best to start up this script on the build master
-      (e.g. <hostid>pointyhat</hostid>)
-      after boot time using a &man.while.1; loop.
-    </para>
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 id="setup">
-    <title>Chroot Build Environment Setup</title>
+    <title>Jail Build Environment Setup</title>
 
     <para>Package builds are performed in a
-      <literal>chroot</literal> populated by the
+      <literal>jail</literal> populated by the
       <filename>portbuild</filename> script using the
       <filename><replaceable>${arch}</replaceable>/<replaceable>${branch}</replaceable>/builds/<replaceable>${buildid}</replaceable>/bindist.tar</filename>
       file.</para>
 
-    <para>The following command builds a world from the
+    <para>The <command>makeworld</command> command builds a world from the
       <filename><replaceable>${arch}</replaceable>/<replaceable>${branch}</replaceable>/builds/<replaceable>${buildid}</replaceable>/src/</filename>
       tree and installs it into
-      <replaceable>${worlddir}</replaceable>.  The tree will
-      be updated first unless <literal>-nocvs</literal> is
-      specified.</para>
+      <filename><replaceable>${arch}</replaceable>/<replaceable>${branch}</replaceable>/builds/<replaceable>${buildid}</replaceable>/bindist.tar</filename>.
+      The tree will
+      be updated first unless <literal>-novcs</literal> is
+      specified.  It should be run as <username>root</username>:</para>
 
-    <screen>/var/portbuild&prompt.root; <userinput>scripts/makeworld <replaceable>${arch}</replaceable> <replaceable>${branch}</replaceable> <replaceable>${buildid}</replaceable> [-nocvs]</userinput></screen>
+    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>/var/portbuild/scripts/makeworld <replaceable>${arch}</replaceable> <replaceable>${branch}</replaceable> <replaceable>${buildid}</replaceable> [-novcs]</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>The <filename>bindist.tar</filename> tarball is created from the
       previously installed world by the <command>mkbindist</command>
-      script.  It should be run as <username>root</username> with the following
-      command:</para>
+      script.  It should be also be run as <username>root</username>:</para>
 
-    <screen>/var/portbuild&prompt.root; <userinput>scripts/mkbindist <replaceable>${arch}</replaceable> <replaceable>${branch}</replaceable> <replaceable>${buildid}</replaceable></userinput></screen>
+    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>/var/portbuild/scripts/mkbindist <replaceable>${arch}</replaceable> <replaceable>${branch}</replaceable> <replaceable>${buildid}</replaceable></userinput></screen>
 
     <para>The per-machine tarballs are located in
       <filename><replaceable>${arch}</replaceable>/clients</filename>.</para>
@@ -280,7 +280,7 @@
       <para>(For this case, the contents are identical for both server
 	and client.)</para>
 
-      <screen>RUBY_DEFAULT_VER= 1.9</screen>
+      <programlisting>RUBY_DEFAULT_VER= 1.9</programlisting>
     </example>
 
     <example>
@@ -291,7 +291,7 @@
       <para>(For this case, the contents are also identical for both
 	server and client.)</para>
 
-      <screen>
+      <programlisting>
 .if !defined(CC) || ${CC} == "cc"
 CC=clang
 .endif
@@ -304,41 +304,42 @@ CPP=clang-cpp
 # Don't die on warnings
 NO_WERROR=
 WERROR=
-</screen>
+</programlisting>
     </example>
 
     <example>
       <title>Sample <filename>make.conf.server</filename> for
 	<application>pkgng</application></title>
 
-      <screen>WITH_PKGNG=yes
-PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</screen>
+      <programlisting>WITH_PKGNG=yes
+PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</programlisting>
     </example>
 
     <example>
       <title>Sample <filename>make.conf.client</filename> for
 	<application>pkgng</application></title>
 
-      <screen>WITH_PKGNG=yes</screen>
+      <programlisting>WITH_PKGNG=yes</programlisting>
     </example>
 
     <example>
       <title>Sample <filename>src.conf.server</filename>
 	to test new <application>sort</application> codebase</title>
 
-      <screen>WITH_BSD_SORT=yes</screen>
+      <programlisting>WITH_BSD_SORT=yes</programlisting>
     </example>
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 id="starting">
     <title>Starting the Build</title>
 
-    <para>Several separate builds for each architecture - branch combination
+    <para>Separate builds for various combinations of architecture and branch
       are supported.  All data private to a build (ports tree, src tree,
-      packages, distfiles, log files, bindist, Makefile, etc) are located under
-      <filename><replaceable>${arch}</replaceable>/<replaceable>${branch}</replaceable>/builds/<replaceable>${buildid}</replaceable></filename>.
-      The last created build can be alternatively referenced under buildid
-      <literal>latest</literal>, the one before is called
+      packages, distfiles, log files, bindist, Makefile, etc) are located under the
+      <filename><replaceable>${arch}</replaceable>/<replaceable>${branch}</replaceable>/builds/<replaceable>${buildid}</replaceable>/</filename>
+      directory.
+      The most recently created build can be alternatively referenced using buildid
+      <literal>latest</literal>, and the one before using
       <literal>previous</literal>.</para>
 
     <para>New builds are cloned from the <literal>latest</literal>, which is
@@ -425,7 +426,7 @@ PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</screen>
       <para>The symlinks go away, and you just use
         <command>dopackages.wrapper</command> directly.  For example:</para>
 
-    <screen><command>dopackages.wrapper <replaceable>${arch}</replaceable> <replaceable>${branch}</replaceable> <replaceable>${buildid}</replaceable> <literal>[-options]</literal></command></screen>
+    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>dopackages.wrapper <replaceable>${arch}</replaceable> <replaceable>${branch}</replaceable> <replaceable>${buildid}</replaceable> <literal>[-options]</literal></userinput></screen>
 
     </sect3>
 
@@ -443,7 +444,7 @@ PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</screen>
 	<para><literal>-keep</literal> - Do not delete this build in the
 	  future, when it would be normally deleted as part of the
 	  <literal>latest</literal> - <literal>previous</literal> cycle.
-	  Don't forget to clean it up manually when you no longer need it.
+	  Do not forget to clean it up manually when you no longer need it.
 	</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -451,8 +452,8 @@ PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</screen>
 	<para><literal>-nofinish</literal> - Do not perform
 	  post-processing once the build is complete.  Useful
 	  if you expect that the build will need to be restarted
-	  once it finishes.  If you use this option, don't forget to cleanup
-	  the clients when you don't need the build anymore.
+	  once it finishes.  If you use this option, do not forget to cleanup
+	  the clients when you do not need the build any more.
 	</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -519,7 +520,7 @@ PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</screen>
       <listitem>
 	<para><literal>-noduds</literal> - Do not rebuild the
 	  <filename>duds</filename> file (ports that are never
-	  built, e.g.  those marked <literal>IGNORE</literal>,
+	  built, e.g., those marked <literal>IGNORE</literal>,
 	  <literal>NO_PACKAGE</literal>, etc.) during
 	  preprocessing.
 	</para>
@@ -558,9 +559,9 @@ PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</screen>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para><literal>-srccvs</literal> - Do not update the
+	<para><literal>-srcvcs</literal> - Do not update the
 	  <literal>src</literal> tree from the ZFS snapshot, update it with
-	  <literal>cvs update</literal> instead.
+	  a fresh checkout instead.
 	</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -572,9 +573,9 @@ PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</screen>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para><literal>-portscvs</literal> - Do not update the
+	<para><literal>-portsvcs</literal> - Do not update the
 	  <literal>ports</literal> tree from the ZFS snapshot, update it with
-	  <literal>cvs update</literal> instead.
+	  a fresh checkout instead.
 	</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -600,7 +601,7 @@ PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</screen>
       <listitem>
 	<para><literal>-fetch-original</literal> - Fetch the
 	  distfile from the original <literal>MASTER_SITES</literal>
-	  rather than <hostid>ftp-master</hostid>.
+	  rather than any cache such as on <hostid>ftp-master</hostid>.
 	</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -628,9 +629,9 @@ PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</screen>
       <literal>-nocleanup</literal>, you need to clean up clients by running
     </para>
 
-    <para><command>build cleanup <replaceable>${arch}</replaceable> <replaceable>${branch}</replaceable> <replaceable>${buildid}</replaceable> -full</command></para>
+    <para>&prompt.user; <userinput>build cleanup <replaceable>${arch}</replaceable> <replaceable>${branch}</replaceable> <replaceable>${buildid}</replaceable> -full</userinput></para>
 
-    <para><filename>errors/</filename>,
+    <para>When a new build is created, the directories <filename>errors/</filename>,
       <filename>logs/</filename>, <filename>packages/</filename>, and so
       forth, are cleaned by the scripts.  If you are short of space,
       you can also clean out <filename>ports/distfiles/</filename>.
@@ -653,7 +654,7 @@ PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</screen>
 
     <note><para>The actual package build itself occurs in two
       identical phases.  The reason for this is that sometimes
-      transient problems (e.g. NFS failures, FTP sites being
+      transient problems (e.g., NFS failures, FTP sites being
       unreachable, etc.) may halt a build.  Doing things
       in two phases is a workaround for these types of
       problems.</para></note>
@@ -664,10 +665,10 @@ PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</screen>
       process encounters an empty subdirectory, both package build
       phases will stop short, and an error similar to the following
       will be written to
-      <filename><replaceable>${arch}</replaceable>/<replaceable>${branch}</replaceable>/make.[0|1]</filename>:
+      <filename><replaceable>${arch}</replaceable>/<replaceable>${branch}</replaceable>/journal</filename>:
     </para>
 
-    <screen><literal>don't know how to make dns-all(continuing)</literal></screen>
+    <programlisting><literal>don't know how to make dns-all(continuing)</literal></programlisting>
 
     <para>To correct this problem, simply comment out or remove
       the <literal>SUBDIR</literal> entries that point to empty
@@ -685,22 +686,22 @@ PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</screen>
     <example>
       <title>Update the i386-7 tree and do a complete build</title>
 
-      <para><command>dopackages.7 i386 -nosrc -norestr -nofinish</command></para>
-      <para><command>dopackages.wrapper i386 7 -nosrc -norestr -nofinish</command></para>
+      <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>dopackages.7 i386 -nosrc -norestr -nofinish</userinput>
+&prompt.user; <userinput>dopackages.wrapper i386 7 -nosrc -norestr -nofinish</userinput></screen>
     </example>
 
     <example>
       <title>Restart an interrupted amd64-8 build without updating</title>
 
-      <para><command>dopackages.8 amd64 -nosrc -noports -norestr -continue -noindex -noduds -nofinish</command></para>
-      <para><command>dopackages.wrapper amd64 8 -nosrc -noports -norestr -continue -noindex -noduds -nofinish</command></para>
+      <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>dopackages.8 amd64 -nosrc -noports -norestr -continue -noindex -noduds -nofinish</userinput>
+&prompt.user; <userinput>dopackages.wrapper amd64 8 -nosrc -noports -norestr -continue -noindex -noduds -nofinish</userinput></screen>
     </example>
 
     <example>
       <title>Post-process a completed sparc64-7 tree</title>
 
-      <para><command>dopackages.7 sparc64 -finish</command></para>
-      <para><command>dopackages.wrapper sparc64 7 -finish</command></para>
+      <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>dopackages.7 sparc64 -finish</userinput>
+&prompt.user; <userinput>dopackages.wrapper sparc64 7 -finish</userinput></screen>
     </example>
 
     <para>Hint: it is usually best to run the <command>dopackages</command>
@@ -741,7 +742,7 @@ PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</screen>
 	  <para><literal>build srcupdate <replaceable>arch</replaceable>
 	    <replaceable>branch</replaceable>
 	    <replaceable>buildid</replaceable></literal> - Replaces the src
-	    tree with a new ZFS snapshot.  Don't forget to use
+	    tree with a new ZFS snapshot.  Do not forget to use
 	    <literal>-nosrc</literal> flag to <command>dopackages</command>
 	    later!
 	  </para>
@@ -751,7 +752,7 @@ PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</screen>
 	  <para><literal>build portsupdate <replaceable>arch</replaceable>
 	    <replaceable>branch</replaceable>
 	    <replaceable>buildid</replaceable></literal> - Replaces the ports
-	    tree with a new ZFS snapshot.  Don't forget to use
+	    tree with a new ZFS snapshot.  Do not forget to use
 	    <literal>-noports</literal> flag to <command>dopackages</command>
 	    later!
 	  </para>
@@ -767,7 +768,7 @@ PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</screen>
 	package set.  This can be accomplished with the following
 	invocation:</para>
 
-      <para><command><replaceable>path</replaceable>/qmanager/packagebuild <replaceable>amd64</replaceable> <replaceable>7-exp</replaceable> <replaceable>20080904212103</replaceable> <replaceable>aclock-0.2.3_2.tbz</replaceable></command></para>
+      <para>&prompt.root; <command><replaceable>path</replaceable>/qmanager/packagebuild <replaceable>amd64</replaceable> <replaceable>7-exp</replaceable> <replaceable>20080904212103</replaceable> <replaceable>aclock-0.2.3_2.tbz</replaceable></command></para>
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
 
@@ -846,9 +847,9 @@ PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</screen>
       <filename><replaceable>${arch}</replaceable>/<replaceable>${branch}</replaceable>/journal</filename> (new codebase).
       Individual ports will write
       their build logs to
-      <filename><replaceable>${arch}</replaceable>/<replaceable>${branch}</replaceable>/logs</filename>
+      <filename><replaceable>${arch}</replaceable>/<replaceable>${branch}</replaceable>/logs/</filename>
       and their error logs to
-      <filename><replaceable>${arch}</replaceable>/<replaceable>${branch}</replaceable>/errors</filename>.
+      <filename><replaceable>${arch}</replaceable>/<replaceable>${branch}</replaceable>/errors/</filename>.
     </para>
 
     <para>Formerly the docs tree was also checked out, however, it has
@@ -886,7 +887,7 @@ PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</screen>
       identify the tty in which it's running (either record the output
       of &man.tty.1; when you start the build, or use <command>ps x</command>
       to identify it.  You need to make sure that nothing else important
-      is running in this tty, e.g. <command>ps -t p1</command> or whatever.
+      is running in this tty, e.g., <command>ps -t p1</command> or whatever.
       If there is not, you can just kill off the whole term easily with
       <command>pkill -t pts/1</command>; otherwise issue a
       <command>kill -HUP</command> in there by, for example,
@@ -911,11 +912,11 @@ PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</screen>
     <title>Cleaning up a Build</title>
 
     <para>To free up resources, you will need to clean up client machines by
-      running <command>build cleanup</command> command.  For example:
-      <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>/var/portbuild/scripts/build cleanup i386 8-exp 20080714120411 -full</userinput></screen></para>
+      running <command>build cleanup</command> command.  For example:</para>
+      <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>/var/portbuild/scripts/build cleanup i386 8-exp 20080714120411 -full</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>If you forget to do this, then the old build
-      <literal>chroot</literal>s will not be cleaned up for 24 hours, and no
+      <literal>jail</literal>s will not be cleaned up for 24 hours, and no
       new jobs will be dispatched in their place since
       <hostid>pointyhat</hostid> thinks the job slot is still occupied.</para>
 
@@ -924,21 +925,21 @@ PKG_BIN=/usr/local/sbin/pkg</screen>
       it thinks is running, and this should be roughly concordant
       with the load average.  <literal>loads</literal> is refreshed
       every 2 minutes.  If you do <command>ps x | grep pdispatch</command>
-      and it's less than the number of jobs that <literal>loads</literal>
-      thinks are in use, you're in trouble.</para>
+      and it is less than the number of jobs that <literal>loads</literal>
+      thinks are in use, you are in trouble.</para>
 
     <para>You may have problem with the <command>umount</command>
       commands hanging.  If so, you are going to have to use the
       <command>allgohans</command> script to run an &man.ssh.1;
-      command across all clients for that buildenv.  For example:
-<screen>ssh -l root gohan24 df</screen>
+      command across all clients for that buildenv.  For example:</para>
+<screen>&prompt.user; ssh gohan24 df</screen>
 
-      will get you a df, and
+    <para>will get you a df, and</para>
 
-<screen>allgohans "umount -f pointyhat.freebsd.org:/var/portbuild/i386/8-exp/ports"
-allgohans "umount -f pointyhat.freebsd.org:/var/portbuild/i386/8-exp/src"</screen>
+<screen>&prompt.user; allgohans "umount -f pointyhat.freebsd.org:/var/portbuild/i386/8-exp/ports"
+&prompt.user; allgohans "umount -f pointyhat.freebsd.org:/var/portbuild/i386/8-exp/src"</screen>
 
-      are supposed to get rid of the hanging mounts.  You will have to
+    <para>are supposed to get rid of the hanging mounts.  You will have to
       keep doing them since there can be multiple mounts.</para>
 
     <note>
@@ -1006,8 +1007,8 @@ umount: Cleanup of /x/tmp/8-exp/chroot/5
     <para>You can use <command>qclient</command> command to monitor the status
       of build nodes, and to list the currently scheduled jobs:</para>
 
-    <para><command>python <replaceable>path</replaceable>/qmanager/qclient jobs</command></para>
-    <para><command>python <replaceable>path</replaceable>/qmanager/qclient status</command></para>
+    <screen>&prompt.user; <command>python <replaceable>path</replaceable>/qmanager/qclient jobs</command>
+&prompt.user; <command>python <replaceable>path</replaceable>/qmanager/qclient status</command></screen>
 
     <para>The
       <command>scripts/stats <replaceable>${branch}</replaceable></command>
@@ -1038,7 +1039,7 @@ umount: Cleanup of /x/tmp/8-exp/chroot/5
       directory.  The next time the cluster tries to build this port,
       it will tar, compress, and copy the <literal>WRKDIR</literal>
       to
-      <filename><replaceable>${arch}</replaceable>/<replaceable>${branch}</replaceable>/wrkdirs</filename>.
+      <filename><replaceable>${arch}</replaceable>/<replaceable>${branch}</replaceable>/wrkdirs/</filename>.
     </para>
 
     <para>If you find that the system is looping trying to build the
@@ -1055,16 +1056,16 @@ umount: Cleanup of /x/tmp/8-exp/chroot/5
       then <trademark>Bad Things</trademark> happen.
     </para>
 
-    <para>The status of all current builds is generated twice an hour
+    <para>The status of all current builds is generated periodically
       and posted to
       <ulink url="http://pointyhat.FreeBSD.org/errorlogs/packagestats.html"></ulink>.
       For each <literal>buildenv</literal>, the following is displayed:</para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-	<para><literal>cvs date</literal> is the contents of
-	  <filename>cvsdone</filename>.  This is why we recommend that you
-	  update <filename>cvsdone</filename> for <literal>-exp</literal>
+	<para><literal>updated</literal> is the contents of
+	  <filename>.updated</filename>.  This is why we recommend that you
+	  update <filename>.updated</filename> for <literal>-exp</literal>
 	  runs (see below).</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -1095,7 +1096,7 @@ umount: Cleanup of /x/tmp/8-exp/chroot/5
       <listitem>
 	<para><literal>missing</literal> shows the difference between
 	  <filename>INDEX</filename> and the other columns.  If you have
-	  restarted a run after a <command>cvs update</command>, there
+	  restarted a run after a ports tree update, there
 	  will likely be duplicates in the packages and error columns,
 	  and this column will be meaningless.  (The script is naive).</para>
       </listitem>
@@ -1137,8 +1138,8 @@ umount: Cleanup of /x/tmp/8-exp/chroot/5
     <para>When building packages for a release, it may be
       necessary to manually update the <literal>ports</literal>
       and <literal>src</literal> trees to the release tag and use
-      <literal>-nocvs</literal> and
-      <literal>-noportscvs</literal>.</para>
+      <literal>-novcs</literal> and
+      <literal>-noportsvcs</literal>.</para>
 
     <para>To build package sets intended for use on a CD-ROM,
       use the <literal>-cdrom</literal> option to
@@ -1259,7 +1260,7 @@ umount: Cleanup of /x/tmp/8-exp/chroot/5
 	one of the symlinks that points to it.</para>
     </note>
 
-    <para>If you are doing a completely new package set (e.g. for
+    <para>If you are doing a completely new package set (e.g., for
       a new release), copy packages to the staging area on
       <hostid>ftp-master</hostid> with something like the following:</para>
 
@@ -1270,7 +1271,7 @@ umount: Cleanup of /x/tmp/8-exp/chroot/5
       the package set was transferred successfully, remove the
       package set that the new package set is to replace (in
       <filename>~/w/ports/<replaceable>${arch}</replaceable></filename>),
-      and move the new set into place.  (<literal>w/</literal> is
+      and move the new set into place.  (<filename>w/</filename> is
       merely a shortcut.)</para>
 
     <para>For incremental builds, packages should be uploaded
@@ -1311,12 +1312,17 @@ umount: Cleanup of /x/tmp/8-exp/chroot/5
     <para>In general, an experimental patches build is run the same
       way as any other build, except that you should first update the
       ports tree to the latest version and then apply your patches.
-      To do the former, you can use the following:
+      To do the former, you can use the following:</para>
 
+    <note>
+      <para>The following example is obsolete</para>
+    </note>
+
+    <para>
       <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>cvs -R update -dP > update.out</userinput>
-&prompt.user; <userinput>date > cvsdone</userinput></screen>
+&prompt.user; <userinput>date > .updated</userinput></screen>
       This will most closely simulate what the <literal>dopackages</literal>
-      script does.  (While <filename>cvsdone</filename> is merely
+      script does.  (While <filename>.updated</filename> is merely
       informative, it can be a help.)</para>
 
     <para>You will need to edit <filename>update.out</filename> to look
@@ -1330,7 +1336,7 @@ umount: Cleanup of /x/tmp/8-exp/chroot/5
       tested.</para>
 
     <para>Since the machine is shared, someone else may delete your
-      changes by mistake, so keep a copy of them in e.g. your home
+      changes by mistake, so keep a copy of them in e.g., your home
       directory on <hostid>freefall</hostid>.  Do not use
       <filename>tmp/</filename>; since <hostid>pointyhat</hostid>
       itself runs some version of <literal>-CURRENT</literal>, you
@@ -1411,7 +1417,7 @@ umount: Cleanup of /x/tmp/8-exp/chroot/5
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>Port was broken due to a transient error (e.g. FTP site
+	<para>Port was broken due to a transient error (e.g., FTP site
 	  down, package client error, etc.)
 	</para>
       </listitem>
@@ -1424,6 +1430,10 @@ umount: Cleanup of /x/tmp/8-exp/chroot/5
 
     <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>cd /var/portbuild/i386/8/ports</userinput></screen>
 
+    <note>
+      <para>The following example is obsolete</para>
+    </note>
+
     <note><para>Be sure to <literal>cvs update</literal> this tree to the same date as
       the experimental patches tree.</para></note>
 
@@ -1431,11 +1441,11 @@ umount: Cleanup of /x/tmp/8-exp/chroot/5
     <para>The following command will set up the control branch for
       the partial build (old codebase):</para>
 
-    <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>/var/portbuild/scripts/dopackages.8 -noportscvs -nobuild -nocvs -nofinish</userinput></screen>
+    <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>/var/portbuild/scripts/dopackages.8 -noportsvcs -nobuild -novcs -nofinish</userinput></screen>
 
     <!-- XXX MCL obsolete -->
     <para>The builds must be performed from the
-      <literal>packages/All</literal> directory.  This directory should
+      <filename>packages/All</filename> directory.  This directory should
       initially be empty except for the Makefile symlink.  If this
       symlink does not exist, it must be created:</para>
 
@@ -1451,7 +1461,7 @@ umount: Cleanup of /x/tmp/8-exp/chroot/5
     <para>The list of packages to build should be a list of package
       names (including versions) as they appear in
       <filename>INDEX</filename>.  The <literal>PKGSUFFIX</literal>
-      (i.e. .tgz or .tbz) is optional.</para></note>
+      (i.e., .tgz or .tbz) is optional.</para></note>
 
     <para>This will build only those packages listed as well as all
       of their dependencies.</para>
@@ -1564,9 +1574,13 @@ umount: Cleanup of /x/tmp/8-exp/chroot/5
 
 	<step>
 	  <para>Pick a directory to hold ports configuration and
-	    <command>chroot</command> subdirectories.  It may be
+	    <filename>chroot</filename> subdirectories.  It may be
 	    best to put it this on its own partition.  (Example:
 	    <filename>/usr2/</filename>.)</para>
+	  <note>
+	    <para>The filename <filename>chroot</filename> is a
+	      historical remnant.</para>
+	  </note>
 	</step>
       </procedure>
 
@@ -1611,12 +1625,13 @@ umount: Cleanup of /x/tmp/8-exp/chroot/5
 	    3.5G on &i386;, <literal>PAE</literal>).
 	  </para>
 	  <para>
-	    Required options:<screen>
+	    Required options:</para>
+	  <programlisting>
 options         NULLFS
-options         TMPFS</screen>
-	  </para>
+options         TMPFS</programlisting>
 	  <para>
-	    Suggested options:<screen>
+	    Suggested options:</para>
+	  <programlisting>
 options         GEOM_CONCAT
 options         GEOM_STRIPE
 options         SHMMAXPGS=65536
@@ -1625,30 +1640,29 @@ options         SEMMNS=240
 options         SEMUME=40
 options         SEMMNU=120
 
-options         ALT_BREAK_TO_DEBUGGER</screen>
-	  </para>
+options         ALT_BREAK_TO_DEBUGGER</programlisting>
 
 	  <para>For <literal>PAE</literal>, it is not currently possible
 	    to load modules.  Therefore, if you are running an architecture
-	    that supports Linux emulation, you will need to add:<screen>
+	    that supports Linux emulation, you will need to add:</para>
+	  <programlisting>
 options         COMPAT_LINUX
-options         LINPROCFS</screen>
-	  </para>
+options         LINPROCFS</programlisting>
 
 	  <para>Also for <literal>PAE</literal>, as of 20110912 you need
-	    the following.  This needs to be investigated:<screen>
+	    the following.  This needs to be investigated:</para>
+	  <programlisting>
 nooption        NFSD                    # New Network Filesystem Server
 options         NFSCLIENT               # Network Filesystem Client
-options         NFSSERVER               # Network Filesystem Server</screen>
-	  </para>
+options         NFSSERVER               # Network Filesystem Server</programlisting>
 	</step>
 
 	<step>
 	  <para>As root, do the usual build steps, e.g.:<screen>
-<userinput>make -j4 buildworld</userinput>
-<userinput>make buildkernel KERNCONF=<replaceable>${kernconf}</replaceable></userinput>
-<userinput>make installkernel KERNCONF=<replaceable>${kernconf}</replaceable></userinput>
-<userinput>make installworld</userinput></screen>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>make -j4 buildworld</userinput>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>make buildkernel KERNCONF=<replaceable>${kernconf}</replaceable></userinput>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>make installkernel KERNCONF=<replaceable>${kernconf}</replaceable></userinput>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>make installworld</userinput></screen>
 	    The install steps use <makevar>DESTDIR</makevar>.
 	  </para>
 	</step>
@@ -1690,10 +1704,10 @@ options         NFSSERVER               
 	    </listitem>
 
 	    <listitem>
-	      <para>Also add the following users:<screen>
+	      <para>Also add the following users:</para>
+	      <programlisting>
 squid:*:100:100::0:0:User &amp;:/usr/local/squid:/bin/sh
-ganglia:*:102:102::0:0:User &amp;:/usr/local/ganglia:/bin/sh</screen>
-	      </para>
+ganglia:*:102:102::0:0:User &amp;:/usr/local/ganglia:/bin/sh</programlisting>
 	      <para>Add them to <filename>etc/group</filename> as well.</para>
 	    </listitem>
 
@@ -1703,9 +1717,8 @@ ganglia:*:102:102::0:0:User &amp;:/usr/l
 	    </listitem>
 
 	    <listitem>
-	      <para>In <filename>etc/crontab</filename>: add
-		<screen>*       *       *       *       *       root    /var/portbuild/scripts/client-metrics</screen>
-	      </para>
+	      <para>In <filename>etc/crontab</filename>: add</para>
+		<programlisting>*       *       *       *       *       root    /var/portbuild/scripts/client-metrics</programlisting>
 	    </listitem>
 
 	    <listitem>
@@ -1716,14 +1729,14 @@ ganglia:*:102:102::0:0:User &amp;:/usr/l
 	    </listitem>
 
 	    <listitem>
-	      <para>In <filename>etc/inetd.conf</filename>: add
-		<screen>infoseek        stream  tcp     nowait  nobody  /var/portbuild/scripts/reportload</screen>
-	      </para>
+	      <para>In <filename>etc/inetd.conf</filename>: add</para>
+		<programlisting>infoseek        stream  tcp     nowait  nobody  /var/portbuild/scripts/reportload</programlisting>
 	    </listitem>
 
 	    <listitem>
-	      <para>We run the cluster on UTC:
-		<screen>cp /usr/share/zoneinfo/Etc/UTC etc/localtime</screen>
+	      <para>You should run the cluster on UTC.  If you have not set the clock
+		to UTC:
+		<programlisting>&prompt.root; cp -p /usr/share/zoneinfo/Etc/UTC etc/localtime</programlisting>
 	      </para>
 	    </listitem>
 
@@ -1808,7 +1821,7 @@ squid_pidfile="<filename>/<replaceable>u
 > kern.maxfiles=40000
 > kern.maxfilesperproc=30000
 >
-> # Since the NFS root is static we don't need to check frequently for file changes
+> # Since the NFS root is static we do not need to check frequently for file changes
 > # This saves >75% of NFS traffic
 > vfs.nfs.access_cache_timeout=300
 > debug.debugger_on_panic=1
@@ -1959,8 +1972,8 @@ touch /tmp/.boot_finished</screen>
 
 	    <listitem>
 	      <para>Configure <command>ssh</command>: copy
-		<filename>/etc/ssh</filename> to
-		<filename>/usr/local/etc/ssh</filename> and add
+		<filename>etc/ssh</filename> to
+		<filename>usr/local/etc/ssh</filename> and add
 		<literal>NoneEnabled yes</literal> to
 		<filename>sshd_config</filename>.</para>
 	    </listitem>
@@ -2011,7 +2024,7 @@ touch /tmp/.boot_finished</screen>
 	    between boots then they must either preserve their
 	    <filename>/tmp</filename>, or revalidate their available
 	    builds at boot time (see the script on the <literal>amd64</literal>
-	    machines).  They must also clean up stale chroots from previous
+	    machines).  They must also clean up stale jails from previous
 	    builds before creating <filename>/tmp/.boot_finished</filename>.
 	  </para>
 	</step>
@@ -2091,7 +2104,7 @@ MASTER_SITE_OVERRIDE= \
 
 	  <para>Hint: you will need one of these for each machine;
 	    however, if you have multiple machines at one site, you
-	    should create a site-specific one (e.g. in
+	    should create a site-specific one (e.g., in
 	    <filename>/var/portbuild/conf/clients/</filename>)
 	    and symlink to it.</para>
 	</step>
@@ -2156,20 +2169,24 @@ ssh_cmd="/usr/local/bin/ssh"
       <title>Enabling the node</title>
 
       <para>These steps need to be taken by a <literal>portmgr</literal>
-	acting as <literal>ports-<replaceable>arch</replaceable></literal>
-	on <hostid>pointyhat</hostid>.
+	acting as <literal>ports-<replaceable>arch</replaceable></literal>:
       </para>
 
       <procedure>
 	<step>
-	  <para>Ensure that <literal>ssh</literal> is working by executing
-	    <command>ssh <replaceable>hostname</replaceable></command>.
+	  <para>Ensure that <literal>ssh</literal> to the client
+	    is working by executing
+	    <command>ssh <replaceable>hostname</replaceable> uname -a</command>.
+	    The actual command is not important; what is important is to
+	    confirm the setup, and also add an entry into
+	    <filename>known_hosts</filename>, once you have confirmed the
+	    node's identity.
 	  </para>
 	</step>
 
 	<step>
-	  <para>Populate <filename>/var/portbuild/scripts/</filename>
-	    by something like
+	  <para>Populate the client's copy of
+	    <filename>/var/portbuild/scripts/</filename> by something like
 	    <command>/var/portbuild/scripts/dosetupnode <replaceable>arch</replaceable> <replaceable>major</replaceable> latest <replaceable>hostname</replaceable></command>.
 	    Verify that you now have files in that directory.
 	  </para>
@@ -2187,7 +2204,7 @@ ssh_cmd="/usr/local/bin/ssh"
       </procedure>
 
       <para>This step needs to be taken by a <literal>portmgr</literal>
-	acting as <literal>root</literal> on <hostid>pointyhat</hostid>.
+	acting as <literal>root</literal>:
       </para>
 
       <procedure>
@@ -2209,17 +2226,34 @@ ssh_cmd="/usr/local/bin/ssh"
 	    </command></para>
 	</step>
       </procedure>
+
+      <para>Finally, again as <literal>portmgr</literal>
+	acting as <literal>ports-<replaceable>arch</replaceable></literal>:
+      </para>
+
+      <procedure>
+	<step>
+	  <para>Once you are sure that the client is working, tell
+	    <application>pollmachine</application> about it by adding
+	    it to
+	    <filename>/var/portbuild/<replaceable>${arch}</replaceable>/mlist</filename>.
+	  </para>
+	</step>
+      </procedure>
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 id="new-branch">
     <title>How to configure a new &os; branch</title>
 
+    <sect2 id="new-branch-pre-qmanager">
+      <title>Steps necessary before <application>qmanager</application> is started</title>
+
+<!-- start of whitespace-broken area -->
+
     <para>When a new branch is created, some work needs to
       be done to specify that the previous branch is no longer
-      equivalent to <literal>HEAD</literal>.  The following
-      instructions apply to the <emphasis>previous</emphasis>
-      branch number:</para>
+      equivalent to <literal>HEAD</literal>.</para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
@@ -2233,16 +2267,30 @@ ssh_cmd="/usr/local/bin/ssh"
 	  </listitem>
 
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para>For what was previously head, change
+	    <para>(Old codebase) For what was previously head, change
 	      <makevar>SRC_BRANCH_<replaceable>branch</replaceable>_TAG</makevar> to
-	      <literal>RELENG_<replaceable>branch</replaceable>_0</literal>.</para>
+	      <literal>RELENG_<replaceable>branch</replaceable>_0</literal>
+	      (literal zero).</para>
 	  </listitem>
 
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para>Add
+	    <para>(Old codebase) Add
 	      <makevar>SRC_BRANCH_<replaceable>new-branch</replaceable>_TAG</makevar>
 	      <literal>=.</literal> (literal period).</para>
 	  </listitem>
+
+	  <listitem>
+	    <para>(New codebase) For what was previously head, change
+	      <makevar>SRC_BRANCH_<replaceable>branch</replaceable>_SUBDIR</makevar> to
+	      <literal>releng/<replaceable>branch</replaceable>.0</literal>
+	      (literal zero).</para>
+	  </listitem>
+
+	  <listitem>
+	    <para>(New codebase) Add
+	      <makevar>SRC_BRANCH_<replaceable>new-branch</replaceable>_SUBDIR</makevar>
+	      <literal>=head</literal>.</para>
+	  </listitem>
 	</itemizedlist>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -2317,16 +2365,44 @@ ln -s ../<replaceable>arch</replaceable>
 	</para>
       </listitem>
 
-      <listitem>
-	<para>Kick-start the build for the branch with
-	  <screen>build create <replaceable>arch</replaceable> <replaceable>branch</replaceable></screen></para>
-      </listitem>
+    </itemizedlist>
+
+<!-- end of whitespace-broken area -->
+    </sect2>
+
+    <sect2 id="new-branch-post-qmanager">
+      <title>Steps necessary after <application>qmanager</application> is started</title>
+
+<!-- start of whitespace-broken area -->
+
+    <note>
+      <para>Again, as
+	<literal>ports-<replaceable>arch</replaceable></literal>:</para>
+    </note>
 
+    <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-	<para><link linkend="setup">Create <filename>bindist.tar</filename>
-	  </link>.</para>
+	<para>For each branch that will be supported, do the following:
+	</para>
+
+	<itemizedlist>
+	  <listitem>
+	    <para>Kick-start the build for the branch with:</para>
+	      <screen>build create <replaceable>arch</replaceable> <replaceable>branch</replaceable></screen>
+	  </listitem>
+
+	  <listitem>
+	    <para><link linkend="setup">Create
+	      <filename>bindist.tar</filename></link>.</para>
+	  </listitem>
+	</itemizedlist>
+
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
+
+<!-- end of whitespace-broken area -->
+    </sect2>
+
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 id="old-branch">
@@ -2347,8 +2423,8 @@ ln -s ../<replaceable>arch</replaceable>
 
 	    <listitem>
 	      <para>Delete
-		<makevar>SRC_BRANCH_<replaceable>old-branch</replaceable>_TAG</makevar>
-		<literal>=<replaceable>whatever</replaceable></literal></para>
+		<makevar>SRC_BRANCH_<replaceable>old-branch</replaceable>_SUBDIR</makevar><literal>=</literal>
+		  <replaceable>whatever</replaceable></para>
 	    </listitem>
 	  </itemizedlist>
       </listitem>
@@ -2418,9 +2494,9 @@ zfs destroy -r a/snap/src-<replaceable>o
 	  with the following changes:</para>
 	  <itemizedlist>
 	    <listitem>
-	      <para>Change
-	        <makevar>SRC_BRANCH_<replaceable>branch</replaceable>_TAG</makevar> to

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