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Author: bjk
Date: Tue Oct 14 20:35:16 2014
New Revision: 45828
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/45828

Log:
  Further edits to the Q3 report for grammar and readability
  
  Approved by:	hrs (mentor, blanket)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-07-2014-09.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-07-2014-09.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-07-2014-09.xml	Tue Oct 14 16:03:36 2014	(r45827)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-07-2014-09.xml	Tue Oct 14 20:35:16 2014	(r45828)
@@ -400,23 +400,23 @@
       </task>
 
       <task>
-	<p>Improve delegation section</p>
+	<p>Improve the delegation section</p>
       </task>
 
       <task>
-	<p>Improve tuning section, add recently added sysctls</p>
+	<p>Improve the tuning section, and cover recently added sysctls</p>
       </task>
 
       <task>
-	<p>Add section on jails and the jailed property</p>
+	<p>Add a section on jails and the jailed property</p>
       </task>
 
       <task>
-	<p>Add FAQ section</p>
+	<p>Add an FAQ section</p>
       </task>
 
       <task>
-	<p>Add Use Cases section</p>
+	<p>Add a Use Cases section</p>
       </task>
 
       <task>
@@ -590,16 +590,14 @@
 	of LLVM is known to pass all of the tests in the LLVM and Asan
 	test suites without unexpected failures on &os; 10.0.</p>
 
-      <p>A buildbot running sanitizers tests under &os; stable/10
+      <p>A buildbot running sanitizer tests under &os; stable/10
 	has been established.  See the Links section.</p>
 
-      <p>To make it possible to run programs with sanitizers
-	checks enabled on &os; a new kernel state named
+      <p>To make it possible to run programs with sanitizer
+	checks enabled on &os;, a new sysctl named
 	<tt>kern.proc_vmmap_skip_resident_count</tt> has been added.
-	See the Links section.</p>
-
-      <p>Note that running Asan tests on stable/10 requires that state
-	to be set to 1.</p>
+	See the Links section.  Running the address sanitizer checks
+	on stable/10 requires this sysctl to be set to 1.</p>
 
       <p>A similar work is in progress to add &os; support to the
 	thread sanitizer (Tsan), which detects data races in parallel
@@ -702,7 +700,7 @@
 
     <help>
       <task>
-	<p>Finish GNOME 3.12 merge, and start tracking GNOME 3.15
+	<p>Finish the GNOME 3.12 merge, and start tracking GNOME 3.15
 	  (development series).</p>
       </task>
     </help>
@@ -729,7 +727,7 @@
 
     <body>
 
-      <p>The newest graphics stack (that is, ports behind the
+      <p>The newest graphics stack (that is, the set of ports conditional on the
 	<tt>WITH_NEW_XORG</tt> knob) was enabled on all architectures.
 	The only regression is for users of Intel GPUs and &os; 8.X or
 	9.0.  Those releases lack the required kernel driver and
@@ -758,7 +756,7 @@
 
       <p>We will attend XDC 2014 (X.Org Developer's Conference) from
 	October 8th through 10th in Bordeaux, France.  The goal is to
-	reconnect with graphics stack developers, mostly working with
+	reconnect with graphics stack developers, who are mostly working with
 	Linux these days.  We will give a presentation on the current
 	state of this stack on &os;.  See the XDC website in the Links
 	section for the program and live streaming.</p>
@@ -877,10 +875,10 @@
 	<tt>USES</tt> format.  Several options, such as support for
 	<tt>easy_install</tt>, were deprecated or removed to make the
 	infrastructure easier to maintain and less complex for
-	maintainers.</p>
+	port maintainers.</p>
 
       <p>The Python ports were refactored and simplified to improve
-	maintenance and to get rid of long-standing issues due to the
+	maintainability and to get rid of long-standing issues due to the
 	previously complex and error-prone build process.</p>
 
       <p>The Python 2 branch was updated to Python 2.7.8 and
@@ -2302,8 +2300,8 @@
 
       <p>We published our fourth issue of the FreeBSD Journal.  We
 	have over 4500 subscriptions to date.  Work continued on
-	adding support for the Dynamic Edition and will be available
-	soon.  The fifth issue is due out soon.</p>
+	adding support for the Dynamic Edition which will be available
+	soon.  The fifth issue is also due out soon.</p>
 
       <p>Foundation staff member Konstantin Belousov wrapped up the
 	PostgreSQL performance investigation project.  Kostik reran
@@ -2313,7 +2311,7 @@
 	the 10.1 release.  Kostik also committed a variety of virtual
 	memory and file system bug fixes and improvements.</p>
 
-      <p>Over the quarter, Foundation staff member Edward Napiera?a
+      <p>Over the quarter, Foundation staff member Edward Napierała
 	refined the new autofs-based automounter and incorporated
 	feedback from testers in enterprise and university contexts.
 	The automounter is available in the development branch of
@@ -2342,22 +2340,22 @@
 	which allows &os; virtual machine disk images to be produced
 	by default as part of the release process.</p>
 
-      <p>Put a plan together for the upcoming Secure Boot work.</p>
+      <p>A plan has been put together for the upcoming Secure Boot work.</p>
 
-      <p>Purchased more hardware to support &os; infrastructure at NYI
+      <p>More hardware has been purchased to support &os; infrastructure at NYI
 	and Sentex.</p>
 
-      <p>Announced a collaboration between Foundation and Cavium to
+      <p>We announced a collaboration between the Foundation and Cavium to
 	deliver a &os; ARMv8 based implementation.</p>
 
-      <p>Signed a license agreement with Oracle to get access to the
+      <p>We signed a license agreement with Oracle to get access to the
 	TCKs for Java 7 and 8.</p>
 
       <p>Robert Watson ran and organized the Cambridge Developer
 	Summit.  We provided a travel grant to a Google Summer of Code
 	student to attend the summit.</p>
 
-      <p>Provided a travel grant to a developer who organized and ran
+      <p>We provided a travel grant to a developer who organized and ran
 	BSDDay in Argentina.</p>
 
       <p>We were a Gold Sponsor for EuroBSDCon 2014 and sponsored the
@@ -2368,7 +2366,7 @@
 	sessions.  We held our Fall Fundraising campaign there and
 	raised over $2,000 in donations from attendees.</p>
 
-      <p>Organized the Silicon Valley Vendor/Developer Summit that is
+      <p>We organized the Silicon Valley Vendor/Developer Summit that is
 	happening November 3 and 4.</p>
 
       <p>Kirk McKusick, Robert Watson, and George Neville-Neil
@@ -2376,7 +2374,7 @@
 	of the FreeBSD Operating System."</p>
 
       <p>Kirk McKusick presented a 2-day tutorial on the &os; kernel
-	and gave a talk on implementation of ZFS at EuroBSDCon.</p>
+	and gave a talk on the implementation of ZFS at EuroBSDCon.</p>
 
       <p>Dru Lavigne attended Fossetcon: September 11-13
 	(fossetcon.org).</p>
@@ -2384,7 +2382,7 @@
       <p>We created new recruiting fliers for upcoming events,
 	including the Grace Hopper conference.</p>
 
-      <p>Started sending out Foundation monthly update emails to keep
+      <p>We started sending out Foundation monthly update emails to keep
 	the &os; community informed on some of the activities we did
 	the previous month to support &os;.</p>
     </body>
@@ -2405,8 +2403,7 @@
       <p>The &os; Cluster Administration Team consists of the people
 	responsible for administering the machines that the project
 	relies on for its distributed work and communications to be
-	synchronised.  In this quarter, the team has worked on the
-	following:</p>
+	synchronised.  In this quarter, the team has worked on:</p>
 
       <ul>
 	<li>Implemented a central, &os;&nbsp;cluster-specific package