From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Jul 16 12:01:47 2004 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5486D16A4CE for ; Fri, 16 Jul 2004 12:01:47 +0000 (GMT) Received: from sccrmhc13.comcast.net (sccrmhc13.comcast.net [204.127.202.64]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id ED03943D2F for ; Fri, 16 Jul 2004 12:01:46 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from zettel@acm.org) Received: from [192.168.0.6] (bgp966574bgs.derbrn01.mi.comcast.net[68.41.108.205]) by comcast.net (sccrmhc13) with ESMTP id <2004071612014501600bffqqe>; Fri, 16 Jul 2004 12:01:46 +0000 From: Leonard Zettel To: Peter Pentchev Date: Fri, 16 Jul 2004 08:02:46 -0400 User-Agent: KMail/1.6.2 References: <200406032310.12551.zettel@acm.org> <20040716083713.GD858@straylight.m.ringlet.net> In-Reply-To: <20040716083713.GD858@straylight.m.ringlet.net> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Disposition: inline Content-Type: text/plain; charset="iso-8859-1" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Message-Id: <200407160802.46405.zettel@acm.org> cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Suggested rewrite of "FreeBSD Documentation Project: SGML" X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 16 Jul 2004 12:01:47 -0000 On Friday 16 July 2004 04:37 am, Peter Pentchev wrote: > On Thu, Jun 03, 2004 at 11:10:12PM -0400, Leonard Zettel wrote: > > http://www.lenzettel.com/freebsd/sgml.html > > > > Questions, comments, criticisms? > > I like it at a first read, but it is somewhat difficult to see exactly > what changes you have made (the ones in the first couple of sentences > are obvious). Could you try to check out the FreeBSD Web site sources > from the CVS repository, edit the www/en/docproj/sgml.sgml file to > include your changes, and then send us a patch (or at least your version > of the sgml.sgml file) so we can comment on the changes themselves? :) > > Thanks for your efforts so far! > Thank you for your kind words! As an absolute newbie to FreeBSD, it has been a real struggle trying to wade through the procedural thicket to get a modified sgml file. But I'm working on it! > G'luck, Can always use that - thanks. -LenZ- > Peter