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[73.19.52.228]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id q7sm25301361pfb.98.2017.03.03.15.14.26 (version=TLS1 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES128-SHA bits=128/128); Fri, 03 Mar 2017 15:14:26 -0800 (PST) Subject: Re: svn commit: r314585 - head/usr.sbin/syslogd Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 9.3 \(3124\)) Content-Type: multipart/signed; boundary="Apple-Mail=_B1181B74-4C11-4631-B7ED-F736275311F7"; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; micalg=pgp-sha512 X-Pgp-Agent: GPGMail From: "Ngie Cooper (yaneurabeya)" In-Reply-To: Date: Fri, 3 Mar 2017 15:14:25 -0800 Cc: Hiroki Sato , svn-src-head@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, src-committers , ngie@freebsd.org Message-Id: <9EDDFC3F-80F2-4864-9DF5-BF9F81A9DB4A@gmail.com> References: <201703031356.v23Duoiu069893@pdx.rh.CN85.dnsmgr.net> To: "Rodney W. Grimes" X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.3124) X-BeenThere: svn-src-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.23 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the src tree for head/-current List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 03 Mar 2017 23:14:28 -0000 --Apple-Mail=_B1181B74-4C11-4631-B7ED-F736275311F7 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 > On Mar 3, 2017, at 15:12, Ngie Cooper (yaneurabeya) = wrote: >=20 >=20 >> On Mar 3, 2017, at 05:56, Rodney W. Grimes = wrote: >>=20 >> -- Start of PGP signed section. >> [ Charset ISO-8859-7 unsupported, converting... ] >>> "Ngie Cooper (yaneurabeya)" wrote >>> in <1A3F6606-822C-4C80-ADFA-48378F0F29EE@gmail.com>: >>>=20 >>> ya> >> How about "...accepts UDP packets sent with any source port" = or >>=20 >> I actually think this right here is the clearest one of all the ones >> I have seen attempted. Oh, remove the s from accepts. >=20 > How about this instead (it incorporates hrs=E2=80=99s suggestion and = your=E2=80=99s)? > Thanks, > -Ngie >=20 > $ svn diff syslogd.8 > Index: syslogd.8 > =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D > --- syslogd.8 (revision 314626) > +++ syslogd.8 (working copy) > @@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ > .Ar service > of > .Ql \&* > -allows packets to be received from any UDP port. > +accept UDP packets from any source port. > The default > .Ar service > is Actually, accepts is better. Although it isn=E2=80=99t clear by itself, = the sentence fragment is describing the -a option, which is singular, = not plural. Here=E2=80=99s the sentence in full context: source packet must belong = to. A service of `*' accepts UDP packets from any source = port. 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