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I'm pretty sure that this patch is correct, but not 100%.  Comments?

Ceri
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Index: sgml-markup/chapter.sgml
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RCS file: /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup/chapt=
er.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.54
diff -u -r1.54 chapter.sgml
--- sgml-markup/chapter.sgml	20 May 2003 21:18:38 -0000	1.54
+++ sgml-markup/chapter.sgml	20 May 2003 21:20:33 -0000
@@ -674,7 +674,7 @@
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       <para>Some elements may exist in two forms, <emphasis>formal</emphas=
is>
 	and <emphasis>informal</emphasis>.  Typically, the formal version of
-	the element will consist of a title followed by the information
+	the element will consist of a title followed by the informal
 	version of the element.  The informal version will not have a
 	title.</para>
     </note>

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