From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 7 06:57:03 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5EE1237B401; Mon, 7 Jul 2003 06:57:03 -0700 (PDT) Received: from pittgoth.com (14.zlnp1.xdsl.nauticom.net [209.195.149.111]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5359E43FA3; Mon, 7 Jul 2003 06:57:02 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from trhodes@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mobile.pittgoth.com (acs-24-154-229-196.zoominternet.net [24.154.229.196]) by pittgoth.com (8.12.9/8.12.9) with SMTP id h67Dv0kR058990; Mon, 7 Jul 2003 09:57:01 -0400 (EDT) (envelope-from trhodes@FreeBSD.org) Date: Mon, 7 Jul 2003 09:30:43 -0400 From: Tom Rhodes To: jkoshy@FreeBSD.org (Joseph Koshy) Message-Id: <20030707093043.17383167.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <20030704084540.104CA37B401@hub.freebsd.org> References: <20030704084540.104CA37B401@hub.freebsd.org> X-Mailer: Sylpheed version 0.8.10claws (GTK+ 1.2.10; i386-portbld-freebsd5.1) Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: [review request] New config.5 manual page X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 07 Jul 2003 13:57:03 -0000 On Fri, 4 Jul 2003 01:45:40 -0700 (PDT) jkoshy@freebsd.org (Joseph Koshy) wrote: Hello Joseph, Ruslan has already added more than enough comments. One thing he did not get is this: > .Bx 4.1 , > and was subsequently revised in > .Bx 4.4 . > The > .Fx > the kernel configuration mechanism changed further in > .Fx 4.0 > and > .Fx 5.0 , > moving towards an architecture supporting dynamic (boot time ^ > and runtime) kernel configuration. 'towards' is not a word. Just remove the 's'. Thanks! -- Tom Rhodes