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Date: Mon, 7 Jul 2003 09:30:43 -0400
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On Fri,  4 Jul 2003 01:45:40 -0700 (PDT)
jkoshy@freebsd.org (Joseph Koshy) wrote:

Hello Joseph,

Ruslan has already added more than enough comments.  One thing he
did not get is this:

> .Bx 4.1 ,
> and was subsequently revised in
> .Bx 4.4 .
> The
> .Fx
> the kernel configuration mechanism changed further in
> .Fx 4.0
> and
> .Fx 5.0 ,
> moving towards an architecture supporting dynamic (boot time
               ^
> and runtime) kernel configuration.

'towards' is not a word.  Just remove the 's'.  Thanks!

--
Tom Rhodes