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Date: Mon, 20 Mar 2006 13:13:52 +0300
From: "Andrew Pantyukhin" <infofarmer@gmail.com>
To: "Grant Moritz" <volunteer@avcon.org.au>
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Subject: Re: Mistake in FreeBSD manual
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On 3/20/06, Grant Moritz <volunteer@avcon.org.au> wrote:
>
>    Hey,
>    In the FreeBSD manual
>    ([1]http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-
>    inetd.html) under the section "25.2.5 Security" at the end of the
>    first paragraph there is an error in grammar.
>    "Some daemons, such as fingerd, may not be desired at all because they
>    information that may be useful to an attacker."
>    Doesn't make sense to me just thought I would pass along the
>    observation you guys.
>    Thanks,
>    SectorX4
>
> References
>
>    1. http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-i=
netd.html
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What a show-stopper :-)

I think that an average english reader would not notice
that, inserting the word "provide" subconciously.

Please have a look at fdp-primer:
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/index.html

to learn how to write and patch documentation, then you
can correct the mistake and send-pr.

Thanks!