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From: Ross Lippert <ripper@eskimo.com>
Subject: Re: docs/40841: the PPP primer gives a very wrong ppp.conf example, I think
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The following reply was made to PR docs/40841; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Ross Lippert <ripper@eskimo.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, ripper@eskimo.com
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/40841: the PPP primer gives a very wrong ppp.conf example, I think
Date: Thu, 25 Jul 2002 04:58:05 -0700 (PDT)

 This is a followup on how to fix the documentation.  The following
 script modified the book.sgml sources to produce more RFC conformant
 examples.  I chose 10.0.0.x dummy addresses because they are more
 similar to the ppp.conf.sample file currently in use in 4.6-RELEASE.
 
 #!/bin/sh
 for dir in ` find /usr/doc -type d -name ppp-primer` ; do
    mv "$dir/book.sgml" "$dir/book.sgml.orig"
    sed -e 's/127\.1\.1/10.0.0/g;s/127\.2\.2/10.0.0/g' "$dir/book.sgml.orig" > "$dir/book.sgml"
 done 
 
 I've checked, and it does not look like this clobbers anything it shouldn't
 and it hits what it should.
 
 I suggest someone with commit bits apply this patch and commit it.
 
 
 -r
 
 
 
 

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