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Author: rene
Date: Mon Feb 11 00:07:29 2013
New Revision: 40927
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40927

Log:
  Some 'igor -z' improvements.
  
  Approved by:	gjb (mentor)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/scsi/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/scsi/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/scsi/chapter.xml	Mon Feb 11 00:06:40 2013	(r40926)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/scsi/chapter.xml	Mon Feb 11 00:07:29 2013	(r40927)
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 id="scsi-general">
-    <title>General architecture</title>
+    <title>General Architecture</title>
 
     <indexterm><primary>Common Access Method (CAM)</primary></indexterm>
 
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@
       bus?  The answer given in the comments to the CAM code is:
       either way, as the driver's author prefers.</para>
 
-    <para>The arguments are:
+    <para>The arguments are:</para>
       <itemizedlist>
 
         <listitem><para><function>action_func</function> - pointer to
@@ -226,7 +226,6 @@
           depth. It depends on the abilities of the SCSI
           adapter.</para></listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
-    </para>
 
     <indexterm><primary>SCSI</primary><secondary>adapter</secondary></indexterm>
     <para>Finally we register the SCSI buses associated with our SCSI
@@ -238,7 +237,7 @@
     }</programlisting>
 
     <para>If there is one <structname>devq</structname> structure per
-      SCSI bus (i.e. we consider a card with multiple buses as
+      SCSI bus (i.e., we consider a card with multiple buses as
       multiple cards with one bus each) then the bus number will
       always be 0, otherwise each bus on the SCSI card should be get a
       distinct number. Each bus needs its own separate structure
@@ -562,7 +561,7 @@
           to zero.</para></listitem>
 
 	<listitem><para><emphasis>tag_action</emphasis> - the kind
-	  of tag to use:
+	  of tag to use:</para>
 
 	  <itemizedlist>
 	  <listitem><para>CAM_TAG_ACTION_NONE - do not use tags for this
@@ -574,7 +573,7 @@
 	  itself</para></listitem>
 	  </itemizedlist>
 
-	  </para></listitem>
+	  </listitem>
 
       </itemizedlist>