From owner-freebsd-doc Mon Aug 28 10:56: 5 2000 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mail.ruhr.de (in-ruhr2.ruhr.de [141.39.224.60]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with SMTP id 6C2E237B42C for ; Mon, 28 Aug 2000 10:56:01 -0700 (PDT) Received: (qmail 88988 invoked by alias); 28 Aug 2000 18:00:21 -0000 Received: (from ue@localhost) by nathan.ruhr.de (8.11.0/8.11.0) id e7SHvEA22657 for freebsd-doc@freebsd.org; Mon, 28 Aug 2000 19:57:14 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from ue) Date: Mon, 28 Aug 2000 19:57:14 +0200 From: Udo Erdelhoff To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Request for Review - NIS netgroups Message-ID: <20000828195714.C280@nathan.ruhr.de> References: <200008181520.IAA74938@freefall.freebsd.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline User-Agent: Mutt/1.2.4i In-Reply-To: <200008181520.IAA74938@freefall.freebsd.org>; from alex@FreeBSD.org on Fri, Aug 18, 2000 at 08:20:35AM -0700 Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk X-Loop: FreeBSD.org Hi, On Fri, Aug 18, 2000 at 08:20:35AM -0700, Alexander Langer wrote: > The result is a very fine NIS tutorial, which is supposed to be extended > by NIS Netgroups content written by Udo Erdelhoff soon (at least he > promised that :-]) the first review-worthy version of the netgroup-related changes is available at http://www.ruhr.de/home/nathan/FreeBSD/netgroup.diff I'm reasonably certain that the technical information and the markup are OK; I'm not so sure about my grammar and the accessibility of the information. I'd appreciate some comments by natural speakers and people with or without experience with NIS and netgroups. Many thanks in advance. /s/Udo -- Rome wasn't built by doing homework and taking tests. It was built by killing all those who opposed them. To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message