From owner-freebsd-www@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 3 17:10:10 2005 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-www@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-www@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8FCF516A41C for ; Sun, 3 Jul 2005 17:10:10 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5608843D49 for ; Sun, 3 Jul 2005 17:10:10 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.3/8.13.3) with ESMTP id j63HAAAG078072 for ; Sun, 3 Jul 2005 17:10:10 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.3/8.13.1/Submit) id j63HAAHC078070; Sun, 3 Jul 2005 17:10:10 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Sun, 3 Jul 2005 17:10:10 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200507031710.j63HAAHC078070@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-www@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Daniel Gerzo Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0B21216A41C for ; Sun, 3 Jul 2005 17:09:26 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from danger@rulez.sk) Received: from mail.rulez.sk (DaEmoN.RuLeZ.sK [84.16.32.226]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C0AAB43D4C for ; Sun, 3 Jul 2005 17:09:25 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from danger@rulez.sk) Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mail.rulez.sk (Postfix) with ESMTP id 37ADE1CD50 for ; Sun, 3 Jul 2005 19:09:24 +0200 (CEST) Received: by mail.rulez.sk (Postfix, from userid 1001) id E992A1CD4C; Sun, 3 Jul 2005 19:09:20 +0200 (CEST) Message-Id: <20050703170920.E992A1CD4C@mail.rulez.sk> Date: Sun, 3 Jul 2005 19:09:20 +0200 (CEST) From: Daniel Gerzo To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Cc: Subject: www/82935: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops article X-BeenThere: freebsd-www@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: Daniel Gerzo List-Id: FreeBSD Project Webmasters List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 03 Jul 2005 17:10:10 -0000 >Number: 82935 >Category: www >Synopsis: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops article >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-www >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun Jul 03 17:10:09 GMT 2005 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Daniel Gerzo >Release: FreeBSD 5.4 i386 >Organization: rulez.sk >Environment: System: FreeBSD daemon.rulez.sk #2: Fri May 27 23:16:31 CEST 2005 danger@daemon.rulez.sk:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/daemon i386 >Description: The doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop/article.sgml doesn't use proper english. I have also included little update for this article. >How-To-Repeat: check out: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop/article.html >Fix: --- article.sgml.diff begins here --- --- article.sgml.orig Sun Jul 3 16:59:50 2005 +++ article.sgml Sun Jul 3 18:58:39 2005 @@ -45,8 +45,11 @@ The &os; Laptop Compatibility List. - For communications with other &os; laptop users, check out - the &a.mobile.name; list. + If you want to communicate with other &os; laptop users, + checkout the &a.mobile.name; list. You can also get additional + information about using Laptops on &os; at + + http://tuxmobil.org/mobile_bsd.html. &xorg; --- article.sgml.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: