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Author: eadler
Date: Sat Jun  1 16:21:52 2013
New Revision: 41817
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41817

Log:
  Woops, this is in the 'Changes from the First Edition' section, not a generic introduction.
  
  Really, this entire section should be removed from the online edition...

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.xml	Sat Jun  1 16:20:06 2013	(r41816)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.xml	Sat Jun  1 16:21:52 2013	(r41817)
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@
 	    System</quote>) has been completely rewritten with an
 	  emphasis on using modern desktop technologies such as
 	  <application>KDE</application> and
-	  <application>GNOME</application> on &xorg;.</para>
+	  <application>GNOME</application> on &xfree86; 4.X.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
 	<para><xref linkend="boot"/> (<quote>The &os; Booting