Date: Sun, 3 Jul 2005 22:30:20 GMT From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org> To: freebsd-www@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: www/82935: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops article Message-ID: <200507032230.j63MUKEE011444@freefall.freebsd.org>
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The following reply was made to PR www/82935; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org> To: Daniel Gerzo <danger@rulez.sk> Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Subject: Re: www/82935: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops article Date: Mon, 4 Jul 2005 01:30:02 +0300 On 2005-07-03 19:09, Daniel Gerzo <danger@rulez.sk> wrote: > --- article.sgml.diff begins here --- > --- article.sgml.orig Sun Jul 3 16:59:50 2005 > +++ article.sgml Sun Jul 3 18:58:39 2005 > @@ -45,8 +45,11 @@ > <ulink url="http://gerda.univie.ac.at/freebsd-laptops/">The &os; > Laptop Compatibility List</ulink>.</para> > > - <para>For communications with other &os; laptop users, check out > - the &a.mobile.name; list.</para> > + <para>If you want to communicate with other &os; laptop users, > + checkout the &a.mobile.name; list. You can also get additional > + information about using Laptops on &os; at > + <ulink url="http://tuxmobil.org/mobile_bsd.html"> > + http://tuxmobil.org/mobile_bsd.html</ulink>.</para> Nice diff. I only have a minor comment. When the content of a <ulink> element is just the URL itself, it's probably better to leave the content of the element empty -- the stylesheets will take care of duplicating the URL in the generated link, i.e.: <ulink url="http://example.net/"></ulink> This doesn't duplicate the URL, making it double the effort to switch to a different URL and twice as error-prone (i.e. update one but forget the other). If this looks ok to the rest of the -www people, I can commit it with this minor change to the diff :-) - Giorgos
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