From owner-svn-src-user@FreeBSD.ORG Tue May 22 23:09:53 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-src-user@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 55ACA1065673; Tue, 22 May 2012 23:09:53 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from des@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::2c]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 277728FC08; Tue, 22 May 2012 23:09:53 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id q4MN9rQq034048; Tue, 22 May 2012 23:09:53 GMT (envelope-from des@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from des@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id q4MN9qIE034046; Tue, 22 May 2012 23:09:52 GMT (envelope-from des@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201205222309.q4MN9qIE034046@svn.freebsd.org> From: Dag-Erling Smorgrav Date: Tue, 22 May 2012 23:09:52 +0000 (UTC) To: src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-user@freebsd.org X-SVN-Group: user MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Cc: Subject: svn commit: r235813 - user/des/fbce/root/lib X-BeenThere: svn-src-user@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the experimental " user" src tree" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 22 May 2012 23:09:53 -0000 Author: des Date: Tue May 22 23:09:52 2012 New Revision: 235813 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/235813 Log: Simplify the logic and improve the text in the "how do I" sections. Modified: user/des/fbce/root/lib/help Modified: user/des/fbce/root/lib/help ============================================================================== --- user/des/fbce/root/lib/help Tue May 22 22:15:39 2012 (r235812) +++ user/des/fbce/root/lib/help Tue May 22 23:09:52 2012 (r235813) @@ -29,16 +29,16 @@

How do I run?

-[% PROCESS run/when %] - -[% IF nominating == 0 %] - [% IF !user %] +[% IF nominating < 0 %] +

Come back when the application period starts, on [% INCLUDE lib/datetime dt=nominating_starts %].

+[% ELSIF nominating > 0 %] +

The application period ended on [% INCLUDE lib/datetime dt=nominating_ends %].

+[% ELSIF !user %]

You must be logged in to run for election.

- [% ELSIF !user.active %] +[% ELSIF !user.active %]

You are not registered as an active committer, and are therefore not qualified to run in the election. If you believe this is incorrect, please contact the election administrator.

- [% ELSE %] +[% ELSE %]

Click the Run link in the navigation bar (or the one right here). You will be asked to enter a slogan and a statement of intent.

- [% END %] [% END %]

How do I see who's running?

@@ -53,14 +53,14 @@

How do I vote?

-[% PROCESS vote/when %] - -[% IF voting == 0 %] - [% IF !user %] +[% IF voting < 0 %] +

Come back when the voting period starts, on [% INCLUDE lib/datetime dt=voting_starts %].

+[% ELSIF voting > 0 %] +

The voting period ended on [% INCLUDE lib/datetime dt=voting_ends %].

+[% ELSIF !user %]

You must be logged in to vote.

- [% ELSIF !user.active %] +[% ELSIF !user.active %]

You are not registered as an active committer, and are therefore not qualified to run in the election. If you believe this is incorrect, please contact the election administrator.

- [% ELSE %] +[% ELSE %]

Click the Vote link in the navigation bar (or the one right here) and select up to [% max_votes %] candidates. You can change your vote at any time until the election ends.

- [% END %] [% END %]