Date: Tue, 11 Sep 2012 17:53:03 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r39521 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems Message-ID: <201209111753.q8BHr3SN001146@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: wblock Date: Tue Sep 11 17:53:02 2012 New Revision: 39521 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39521 Log: Remove some extraneous uses of "the". Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.sgml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.sgml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.sgml Tue Sep 11 13:28:59 2012 (r39520) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.sgml Tue Sep 11 17:53:02 2012 (r39521) @@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ vfs.zfs.vdev.cache.size="5M"</programlis <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>zpool create example /dev/da0</userinput></screen> - <para>To view the new pool, review the output of the + <para>To view the new pool, review the output of <command>df</command>:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>df</userinput> @@ -291,7 +291,7 @@ example/compressed on /example/compresse &prompt.root; <userinput>zfs set copies=2 example/data</userinput></screen> <para>It is now possible to see the data and space utilization - by issuing the <command>df</command> again:</para> + by issuing <command>df</command> again:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>df</userinput> Filesystem 1K-blocks Used Avail Capacity Mounted on @@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ example/data 17547008 0 175 <para>Notice that each file system on the pool has the same amount of available space. This is the reason for using - the <command>df</command> through these examples, to show + <command>df</command> through these examples, to show that the file systems are using only the amount of space they need and will all draw from the same pool. The <acronym>ZFS</acronym> file system does away with concepts @@ -351,7 +351,7 @@ example/data 17547008 0 175 &man.df.1; commands as before. More disk devices may have been allocated by adding them to the end of the list above. Make a new file system in the pool, called - <literal>home</literal> where user files will eventually be + <literal>home</literal>, where user files will eventually be placed:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>zfs create storage/home</userinput></screen> @@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ example/data 17547008 0 175 <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>zfs rollback storage/home@08-30-08</userinput></screen> - <para>To get a list of all available snapshots, run the + <para>To get a list of all available snapshots, run <command>ls</command> in the file system's <filename class="directory">.zfs/snapshot</filename> directory. For example, to see the previously taken @@ -406,7 +406,7 @@ example/data 17547008 0 175 <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>zfs destroy storage/home@08-30-08</userinput></screen> - <para>There is no reason, after all of this testing, we should + <para>After all of this testing, there is no reason we should keep <filename class="directory">/storage/home</filename> around in its present state. Make it the real <filename class="directory">/home</filename> file
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