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From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>
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murray      2003/05/04 02:10:25 PDT

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Improve recently committed GDBE section.
  
  * Capitalize section titles.
  * Use more descriptive DocBook tags.
  * Improve a few references.
  * Improve a few sentences.
  
  PR:             docs/51598
  Submitted by:   bmah (mostly)
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.151     +17 -15    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml