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From: Dima Dorfman <dima@unixfreak.org>
Subject: Re: docs/29852: Two mistypings in fdp-primer 
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The following reply was made to PR docs/29852; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Dima Dorfman <dima@unixfreak.org>
To: Vladimir Tchoukharev <chu@h33.erkki.ton.tut.fi>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/29852: Two mistypings in fdp-primer 
Date: Sun, 19 Aug 2001 16:56:30 -0700

 Vladimir Tchoukharev <chu@h33.erkki.ton.tut.fi> writes:
 > --- /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build/chapter.sgml.orig
 > 	Sat Aug 18 22:47:06 2001
 > +++ /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build/chapter.sgml	Sat Aug
 >  18 22:47:13 2001
 > @@ -130,7 +130,7 @@
 >      </itemizedlist>
 >  
 >      <para><application>Make</application> syntax is quickly revised as
 > -      the we explore these types.</para>
 > +      then we explore these types.</para>
 
 I can't make sense out of this paragraph before or after the change.
 This document doesn't revise make(1) syntax!  Unless somebody can
 figure out what it's trying to say, I'm going to nuke it in a few
 days.  It doesn't seem to serve any useful purpose.
 
 >      <sect2 id="sub-make">
 >        <title>Subdirectory Makefiles</title>
 > --- /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/the-website/chapter.sgml.orig
 > 	Sat Aug 18 22:43:17 2001
 > +++ /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/the-website/chapter.sgml
 > 	Sat Aug 18 22:43:27 2001
 > @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
 >  	  space.</para>
 >  	
 >  	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mkdir /var/tmp/webbuild</userinput>
 > -&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /var/tmp/webuild</userinput></screen>
 > +&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /var/tmp/webbuild</userinput></screen>
 
 This I've fixed, thanks!

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