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Date: Thu, 2 Aug 2001 19:58:18 +0100
From: Nik Clayton <nik@freebsd.org>
To: Nik Clayton <nik@freebsd.org>
Cc: cvs-committers@freebsd.org, doc@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing chapter.sgml
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On Wed, Aug 01, 2001 at 07:32:18PM -0700, Nik Clayton wrote:
> nik         2001/08/01 19:32:18 PDT
>=20
>   Modified files:
>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing chapter.sgml=20
>   Log:
>   Revamp the synopsis, and move some of the other text in to the top of t=
he
>   introduction.

Anyone got any feedback on these changes?  The intent is that each
chapter in the Handbook will start with a synopsis that follows an
identical format, an introduction that introduces the material, and
then sections that deal with specific topics within the material.

For examples, see the printing, users, booting, kernel configuration, and s=
ound
chapters in the Handbook;

    http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot.html
    http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users.html
    http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig.=
html
    http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing.html
    http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/sound.html

N
--=20
FreeBSD: The Power to Serve             http://www.freebsd.org/
FreeBSD Documentation Project           http://www.freebsd.org/docproj/

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