Date: Sun, 3 Jul 2005 23:30:27 GMT From: Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net> To: freebsd-www@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: www/82935: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops article Message-ID: <200507032330.j63NURor018077@freefall.freebsd.org>
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The following reply was made to PR www/82935; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net> To: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org> Cc: freebsd-www@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: www/82935: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops article Date: Mon, 4 Jul 2005 00:04:03 +0100 --f+W+jCU1fRNres8c Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Sun, Jul 03, 2005 at 10:30:20PM +0000, Giorgos Keramidas wrote: > The following reply was made to PR www/82935; it has been noted by GNATS. >=20 > From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org> > To: Daniel Gerzo <danger@rulez.sk> > Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org > Subject: Re: www/82935: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops arti= cle > Date: Mon, 4 Jul 2005 01:30:02 +0300 >=20 > On 2005-07-03 19:09, Daniel Gerzo <danger@rulez.sk> wrote: > > --- article.sgml.diff begins here --- > > --- article.sgml.orig Sun Jul 3 16:59:50 2005 > > +++ article.sgml Sun Jul 3 18:58:39 2005 > > @@ -45,8 +45,11 @@ > > <ulink url=3D"http://gerda.univie.ac.at/freebsd-laptops/">The &= os; > > Laptop Compatibility List</ulink>.</para> > > =20 > > - <para>For communications with other &os; laptop users, check out > > - the &a.mobile.name; list.</para> > > + <para>If you want to communicate with other &os; laptop users, > > + checkout the &a.mobile.name; list. You can also get additional > > + information about using Laptops on &os; at > > + <ulink url=3D"http://tuxmobil.org/mobile_bsd.html">; > > + http://tuxmobil.org/mobile_bsd.html</ulink>.</para>; > =20 > Nice diff. I only have a minor comment. When the content of a <ulink> > element is just the URL itself, it's probably better to leave the > content of the element empty -- the stylesheets will take care of > duplicating the URL in the generated link, i.e.: > =20 > <ulink url=3D"http://example.net/"></ulink>; > =20 > This doesn't duplicate the URL, making it double the effort to switch to > a different URL and twice as error-prone (i.e. update one but forget the > other). > =20 > If this looks ok to the rest of the -www people, I can commit it with > this minor change to the diff :-) I'm happy with this, although "check out" is more correct than "checkout". Ceri --=20 Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity, and I'm not sure about the former. -- Einstein (attrib.) --f+W+jCU1fRNres8c Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.1 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQFCyG7jocfcwTS3JF8RAplKAJ0fJ01lX+yO47Nb3VD3Te+7J2SDCwCgoVez pa6BraQc06nOLb3kl8k90vY= =hl70 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --f+W+jCU1fRNres8c--
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