From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Jul 9 20:58:53 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8D7E4365; Tue, 9 Jul 2013 20:58:53 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gabor@FreeBSD.org) Received: from server.mypc.hu (server.mypc.hu [87.229.73.95]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4B22A1C1C; Tue, 9 Jul 2013 20:58:53 +0000 (UTC) Received: from server.mypc.hu (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by server.mypc.hu (Postfix) with ESMTP id DD90814D250A; Tue, 9 Jul 2013 22:58:45 +0200 (CEST) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at !change-mydomain-variable!.example.com Received: from server.mypc.hu ([127.0.0.1]) by server.mypc.hu (server.mypc.hu [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with LMTP id VhTtCe65ZYdU; Tue, 9 Jul 2013 22:58:45 +0200 (CEST) Received: from [192.168.0.10] (54034B4D.catv.pool.telekom.hu [84.3.75.77]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-CAMELLIA256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by server.mypc.hu (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 4EFCE14D2410; Tue, 9 Jul 2013 22:58:45 +0200 (CEST) Message-ID: <51DC7984.4080106@FreeBSD.org> Date: Tue, 09 Jul 2013 22:58:44 +0200 From: Gabor Kovesdan User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows NT 6.1; WOW64; rv:22.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/22.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Benjamin Kaduk , Warren Block Subject: Re: svn commit: r42201 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup References: <201307090627.r696RuOg076372@svn.freebsd.org> In-Reply-To: Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 09 Jul 2013 20:58:53 -0000 Em 09-07-2013 21:13, Benjamin Kaduk escreveu: >> Remove a confusing paragraph whose net contribution is negative. >> Remove >> some   from "Ports Collection", it's unnecessary. Make one example > > Was this discussed anywhere? I am seeing a pretty long precedent for > the non-breaking space. Indeed it wasn't discussed but I think that these non-breaking spaces should be reconsidered. Typography rules and conventions are language-dependent. For example, in Hungarian it is not nice to end a line with a sentence-starting single-letter article. Afaik, English does not have such rules, except widows and orphans, which are more concerned with aesthetics. It is reasonable to avoid a line break between FreeBSD and 9.X or similar cases but probably not for such long terms as Ports Collection. Actually, it may just hit back because it may make justified paragraphs very ugly in our print formats. Gabor