From owner-freebsd-doc Thu Mar 14 0:55:50 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from straylight.ringlet.net (discworld.nanolink.com [217.75.135.248]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with SMTP id 86F8A37B416 for ; Thu, 14 Mar 2002 00:55:37 -0800 (PST) Received: (qmail 7361 invoked by uid 1000); 14 Mar 2002 08:55:48 -0000 Date: Thu, 14 Mar 2002 10:55:48 +0200 From: Peter Pentchev To: Giorgos Keramidas Cc: doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: [PATCH] Entities for FreeBSD.org addresses & lists Message-ID: <20020314105548.A1336@straylight.oblivion.bg> Mail-Followup-To: Giorgos Keramidas , doc@freebsd.org References: <20020313092728.A344@straylight.oblivion.bg> <20020313084023.GA27931@hades.hell.gr> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-md5; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="6c2NcOVqGQ03X4Wi" Content-Disposition: inline User-Agent: Mutt/1.2.5i In-Reply-To: <20020313084023.GA27931@hades.hell.gr>; from keramida@freebsd.org on Wed, Mar 13, 2002 at 10:40:23AM +0200 Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org --6c2NcOVqGQ03X4Wi Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Wed, Mar 13, 2002 at 10:40:23AM +0200, Giorgos Keramidas wrote: > On 2002-03-13 09:27, Peter Pentchev wrote: > > At http://people.FreeBSD.org/~roam/doc/fbsdmail/ [snip] > In books::faq.patch change this: >=20 > + the &a.platforms;. > + >=20 > to the following: >=20 > + the &a.platforms;. I was trying to avoid excessive whitespace changes, as per Michael Lucas's suggestions in earlier threads. In fact, I will do this as a two-step commit - one to replace long-winded descriptions with entities, and then another one to clean up whitespace. > In books::fdp-primer.patch change this: >=20 > + %mailing-lists; >=20 > to read: >=20 > + > +%mailing-lists; Oops. Thanks :) > In books::fdp-primer.patch don't let the comma have any whitespace > before it: >=20 > + let you have any) then you can e-mail &a.nik; > + , and arrange to e-mail the files >=20 > should look like: >=20 > + let you have any) then you can e-mail &a.nik;, > + and arrange to e-mail the files See above about whitespace.. > In the handbook diff, the following might look a little strange: >=20 > please contact the FreeBSD project administrators > - hubs@FreeBSD.org for more information. > + &a.hubs; for more information. >=20 > since &a.hubs; will make the output have the following text: >=20 > the FreeBSD project administrators FreeBSD mirror sites mailing > list >=20 > you might want to remove 'FreeBSD project administrators' too, to make the > output be: >=20 > the FreeBSD mirror sites mailing list Ack.. must have missed this one in the proofreading. Thanks! > Don't make changes to 'The Corporate Networkers Guide'. It's copyrighted > work, and you (or the Doc team) would have to contact the author and > published first, get their approval, if that it at all possible. >=20 > > books::corp-net-guide.patch > Yep, I have to admit that this thought crossed my mind, but I plain forgot to ask about it when writing the actual e-mail.. > Super cool work :))) Thanks :) And thanks for a super cool and useful review! G'luck, Peter --=20 Peter Pentchev roam@ringlet.net roam@FreeBSD.org PGP key: http://people.FreeBSD.org/~roam/roam.key.asc Key fingerprint FDBA FD79 C26F 3C51 C95E DF9E ED18 B68D 1619 4553 No language can express every thought unambiguously, least of all this one. --6c2NcOVqGQ03X4Wi Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.0.6 (FreeBSD) Comment: For info see http://www.gnupg.org iEYEARECAAYFAjyQZZQACgkQ7Ri2jRYZRVMgrACgkUsIgUiHvuAEtNNNUNZ45MC7 R4gAmwQhtmWU0ht8LoqRuZMoa+K93PXf =OyF0 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --6c2NcOVqGQ03X4Wi-- To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message