Date: Fri, 10 Jan 2014 14:49:35 +0100 From: Remko Lodder <remko@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r43464 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail Message-ID: <A8EE88BD-2842-4C9E-B3AA-13505568F834@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <201401101348.s0ADma4i021124@svn.freebsd.org> References: <201401101348.s0ADma4i021124@svn.freebsd.org>
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[-- Attachment #1 --] On 10 Jan 2014, at 14:48, Remko Lodder <remko@FreeBSD.org> wrote: > Author: remko > Date: Fri Jan 10 13:48:36 2014 > New Revision: 43464 > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43464 > > Log: > Correct a typo and rewrap the paragraph a bit so that it is > conform the FDP. > > PR: 185632 > Submitted by: Jack Force Since this is partially under worktime I should add: Facilitated by: Snow B.V. Apologies for forgetting that. > > Modified: > head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml > > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml > ============================================================================== > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml Fri Jan 10 11:03:44 2014 (r43463) > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml Fri Jan 10 13:48:36 2014 (r43464) > @@ -1028,10 +1028,9 @@ www.example.org</programlisting> > > <para>Out of the box, one can send email to external hosts as > long as <filename>/etc/resolv.conf</filename> is configured or > - the network has access to a configured > - <acronym>DNS</acronym> server. If order to have mail > - delivered to the <acronym>MTA</acronym> on the &os; host, > - do one of the following:</para> > + the network has access to a configured <acronym>DNS</acronym> > + server. To have email delivered to the <acronym>MTA</acronym> > + on the &os; host, do one of the following:</para> > > <itemizedlist> > <listitem> -- /"\ Best regards, | remko@FreeBSD.org \ / Remko Lodder | remko@EFnet X http://www.evilcoder.org/ | / \ ASCII Ribbon Campaign | Against HTML Mail and News [-- Attachment #2 --] -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Comment: GPGTools - http://gpgtools.org iQIcBAEBAgAGBQJSz/pwAAoJEKjD27JZ84ywjEQP/2Ul8ODu8paRW4pG6U4g4ECd JOPTEbKY3QGNZxcSrq93QzSglBTsPjQLtgq5pP0M0+9Sht+/u0Wn/ObxlC48qj4f ERqpE1Pcb+uRWCCuUqCrMx2siCvsVpAa3JLcpzjGOS3MVtPhMpZlmiPqMQPdhn6c Z4NuBxg1OmQ36tHue2SfkPpCZiuQm8dymxuIbVMnqTiokHpsEBYnK4Mq8IrIkdhS /FdWQpBAORL/hmtVVcOmF/Knmuj27QR2stmVGkqITV81mOfpb4OYQaCjXf5JSewv PEuxAaK9PqBPGY7uXAIB3KiUoWDCZ6dfoEnsFTrUgJf9qjvTcSuvVK2puiNIocw6 AcHvqXpOiEpYkRRtmhFtynRPYG2thbXEXsRsUYeswVusGcKmO/cPJA0oiUovDiFx /0juqKWo8i4GeMiOYbFCEKQoc75do/Vg+chw45e8YM2g9W4fL+iCduvvi4UZjADH 8ovzeRtZ63oEbqbyX4lP13avpZ4uJhKmLZV3VZlpp9mfr9aRfg4I7dQqQeqL0VJN xtj1NSPyLePe2q7hzAviogAZtj9yDmvYoYV+MfNSi8rGWoyApF0Js0eX1jNMVDwj X1d+umb0DCk4Yg7dumScswjR82QCjD8d9EQp6U1ApAUEbarEJzdDGTABr+F5HqjC HhMArBlRutmHVub/JQC7 =7yQE -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----
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