From owner-cvs-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Jun 21 10:52:16 2008 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3A0CB106564A; Sat, 21 Jun 2008 10:52:16 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from marc@blackend.org) Received: from abigail.blackend.org (ns0.blackend.org [82.227.222.164]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 76AA28FC21; Sat, 21 Jun 2008 10:52:09 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from marc@blackend.org) Received: from gothic.blackend.org (gothic.blackend.org [192.168.1.203]) by abigail.blackend.org (8.13.4/8.13.3) with ESMTP id m5LAq8ej047158; Sat, 21 Jun 2008 12:52:08 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from marc@abigail.blackend.org) Received: from gothic.blackend.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by gothic.blackend.org (8.14.2/8.14.1) with ESMTP id m5LAq8Z8001298; Sat, 21 Jun 2008 12:52:08 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from marc@gothic.blackend.org) Received: (from marc@localhost) by gothic.blackend.org (8.14.2/8.14.1/Submit) id m5LAq8Pg001297; Sat, 21 Jun 2008 12:52:08 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from marc) Date: Sat, 21 Jun 2008 12:52:08 +0200 From: Marc Fonvieille To: Gabor PALI Message-ID: <20080621105208.GB1058@gothic.blackend.org> References: <200806210831.m5L8VgsG091493@repoman.freebsd.org> <20080621100650.GA1058@gothic.blackend.org> <485CDAEE.8020200@FreeBSD.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <485CDAEE.8020200@FreeBSD.org> X-Useless-Header: blackend.org X-Operating-System: FreeBSD 7.0-STABLE User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.18 (2008-05-17) Cc: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq book.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the doc and www trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 21 Jun 2008 10:52:16 -0000 On Sat, Jun 21, 2008 at 12:41:50PM +0200, Gabor PALI wrote: > Marc Fonvieille wrote: > > This should be avoided; in our docset (e.g., mail chapter in the > > Handbook) "sendmail" is used not "Sendmail. We don't change the case of > > a command/daemon/application cause of the beginning of a sentence, if we > > have to start a sentence we use "The Nm. utility" scheme. This helps > > consistency and prevents confusions when it comes to type a command. > > Thank you for your comment. Would you approve my fix? (See [1]) > > > :g > > [1] > http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/for_review/2008-06-21/books.faq.patch.193.diff > I'd add some words, see below: Index: book.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.1003 diff -u -r1.1003 book.sgml --- book.sgml 21 Jun 2008 08:36:19 -0000 1.1003 +++ book.sgml 21 Jun 2008 10:39:43 -0000 @@ -3370,7 +3370,7 @@ - Why does Sendmail give me an error reading + Why does sendmail give me an error reading mail loops back to myself? @@ -6020,7 +6020,7 @@ - Sendmail is + The sendmail is ^ |_ server the default mail-server software for FreeBSD, but you can easily replace it with one of the other MTA (for instance, an MTA installed from the ports). @@ -8197,7 +8197,7 @@ - Sendmail is listening on port 587 as well as the + The sendmail is listening on port 587 as well as the ^ |_ daemon standard port 25! What is going on? -- Marc