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Subject: [Bug 218069] Small Typos in Introduction Chapters
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https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=3D218069

            Bug ID: 218069
           Summary: Small Typos in Introduction Chapters
           Product: Documentation
           Version: Latest
          Hardware: Any
                OS: Any
            Status: New
          Severity: Affects Only Me
          Priority: ---
         Component: Documentation
          Assignee: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org
          Reporter: djpetti@me.com

Created attachment 181145
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The diff file for the chapter that I changed.

In the introduction chapter of the Handbook, particularly, under the list of
companies that use FreeBSD, there seem to be some small typos.

First of all, the Stormshield section is written in the first person, which
does not seem correct.

Second, the Weather Channel section is missing an apostrophe.

I've included a diff of the chapter.xml file for the introduction which fix=
es
the problem.

Furthermore, here is a link to the relevant page:

https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/nutshell.html

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