Date: Mon, 21 Feb 2005 15:32:43 -0700 (MST) From: "Jesus R. Camou" <jcamou@cox.net> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/77888: [PATCH] freebsd-questions article tweaks Message-ID: <200502212232.j1LMWhIL009452@opensea.mephis.org> Resent-Message-ID: <200502212230.j1LMUMuB025447@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 77888
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [PATCH] freebsd-questions article tweaks
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: medium
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: change-request
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Mon Feb 21 22:30:22 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Jesus R. Camou
>Release: FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD opensea.mephis.org 4.11-STABLE FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE #0: Sun Feb 13 21:22:53 MST 2005 jcamou@opensea.mephis.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/HACKED i386
>Description:
o cleatext -> clear text
o spelt -> spelled
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
--- freebsd-questions.diff begins here ---
Index: article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-questions/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.23
diff -u -r1.23 article.sgml
--- article.sgml 9 Aug 2004 19:49:16 -0000 1.23
+++ article.sgml 21 Feb 2005 11:53:55 -0000
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
<para>The password fields in the subscription form provide only mild
security, but should prevent others from messing with your
subscription. <emphasis>Do not use a valuable password</emphasis> as
- it will occasionally be emailed back to you in cleartext.</para>
+ it will occasionally be emailed back to you in clear text.</para>
</note>
<para>You will receive a confirmation message from
@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@
<para>Do not underestimate the effect that a poorly formatted mail
message has, not just on the FreeBSD-questions mailing list.
Your mail message is all people see of you, and if it is poorly
- formatted, one line per paragraph, badly spelt, or full of
+ formatted, one line per paragraph, badly spelled, or full of
errors, it will give people a poor impression of you.</para>
<para>A lot of badly formatted messages come from
--- freebsd-questions.diff ends here ---
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted:
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