From owner-freebsd-doc  Mon Jun  4  2:53:40 2001
Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org
Received: from nothing-going-on.demon.co.uk (pc-62-31-42-140-hy.blueyonder.co.uk [62.31.42.140])
	by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2501937B405
	for <doc@FreeBSD.org>; Mon,  4 Jun 2001 02:53:37 -0700 (PDT)
	(envelope-from nik@nothing-going-on.demon.co.uk)
Received: (from nik@localhost)
	by nothing-going-on.demon.co.uk (8.11.3/8.11.3) id f549noE20805;
	Mon, 4 Jun 2001 10:49:50 +0100 (BST)
	(envelope-from nik)
Date: Mon, 4 Jun 2001 10:49:50 +0100
From: Nik Clayton <nik@freebsd.org>
To: Chris Costello <chris@calldei.com>
Cc: doc@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: FAQ patch #1: Repairing all the stuff between <question> tags
Message-ID: <20010604104949.A20450@catkin.nothing-going-on.org>
References: <20010603220925.H80472@holly.calldei.com>
Mime-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-md5;
	protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="k1lZvvs/B4yU6o8G"
Content-Disposition: inline
User-Agent: Mutt/1.2.5i
In-Reply-To: <20010603220925.H80472@holly.calldei.com>; from chris@calldei.com on Sun, Jun 03, 2001 at 10:09:25PM -0500
Organization: FreeBSD Project <URL:http://www.freebsd.org/>
Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG
Precedence: bulk
List-ID: <freebsd-doc.FreeBSD.ORG>
List-Archive: <http://docs.freebsd.org/mail/> (Web Archive)
List-Help: <mailto:majordomo?subject=help> (List Instructions)
List-Subscribe: <mailto:majordomo?subject=subscribe%20freebsd-doc>
List-Unsubscribe: <mailto:majordomo?subject=unsubscribe%20freebsd-doc>
X-Loop: FreeBSD.org


--k1lZvvs/B4yU6o8G
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii
Content-Disposition: inline
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

On Sun, Jun 03, 2001 at 10:09:25PM -0500, Chris Costello wrote:
>    Please give me suggestions or reviews as to what needs to
> change with my patch.
>=20
>      http://people.freebsd.org/~chris/faq-question.patch

 * In the IBM Thinkpad question, I wouldn't remove the "A, T, or X series"
   from the question text.

 * "How come I cannot install from tape?"  ->  "Why can I not install
   from tape?"

   That occurs in a couple of places (in some of "Why does" would be
   better replacement text.

 * "<literal>Missing Operating System</literal>" -> "<errorname>..."

   There are several areas where "<literal>" should become "<errorname>"

   I'll add "Produce a 'table of error messages'" to my list of things
   to do.

 * "<literal>F?</literal> prompt" -> "<prompt>F?</prompt> prompt"

Apart from those nits, great.

N
--=20
FreeBSD: The Power to Serve             http://www.freebsd.org/
FreeBSD Documentation Project           http://www.freebsd.org/docproj/

          --- 15B8 3FFC DDB4 34B0 AA5F  94B7 93A8 0764 2C37 E375 ---

--k1lZvvs/B4yU6o8G
Content-Type: application/pgp-signature
Content-Disposition: inline

-----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE-----
Version: GnuPG v1.0.5 (FreeBSD)
Comment: For info see http://www.gnupg.org

iEYEARECAAYFAjsbWVwACgkQk6gHZCw343W+PgCeJkAlcvdtfFbnaaw1M5i8NJNA
/2gAn0ErMySBddieVnGlCF6kxasbQWTY
=SUNp
-----END PGP SIGNATURE-----

--k1lZvvs/B4yU6o8G--

To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org
with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message