From owner-svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Apr 3 18:43:58 2015 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher AECDH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id C72DA536 for ; Fri, 3 Apr 2015 18:43:58 +0000 (UTC) Received: from mail-wi0-x22b.google.com (mail-wi0-x22b.google.com [IPv6:2a00:1450:400c:c05::22b]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (Client CN "smtp.gmail.com", Issuer "Google Internet Authority G2" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 684E216D for ; Fri, 3 Apr 2015 18:43:58 +0000 (UTC) Received: by wizk4 with SMTP id k4so51291065wiz.1 for ; Fri, 03 Apr 2015 11:43:56 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=eitanadler.com; s=0xdeadbeef; h=mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:from:date:message-id :subject:to:cc:content-type; bh=BVxvgggYQhq6iGDwQEid8cX4ZFJXO2NMd69NkG8zJEI=; b=fjuJoIDvLpHe7rCDbym12vA57Wk7MS376Zu+Z1E3DrsgUzBPB8vR0Bocry02o/0Qsc pcMQwopbwxAxgQ/sGcj0pPxu7m03K1vxnrvxfIanLpIsmA6fyTVGvXRCE36P9vnTRgL3 L754wgNDnTs+b0VKYLXXKHU494zMQYE/WmjPk= X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20130820; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:from :date:message-id:subject:to:cc:content-type; bh=BVxvgggYQhq6iGDwQEid8cX4ZFJXO2NMd69NkG8zJEI=; b=J5OauXT7IRLYA0CwfuFRFqXmxsfbuLkXuc+KLFhVwDCi3n+OiCfHojGMU5WEU/duU/ QBWhP4vY1ND7+YGviyDuLD1D2SN9ZQjVTxgnUrIxccgaI1nqLOn1FW1wX3zl8E9gw5WF Q3YZhvF3llpsvVzXBbu1MowAxt9JdDKOXl0k/AmWV5sb/ltlExh+frY55T7trcr3GF+I E6lJ1Qr+fcl7DOZITYC7amSBuoEXKTR0IPT4F2prd2jvyh4pHCUzJkwrX6tVyTQsU2Yd ALesLZw6aGTQ69J7T/oeyDS2FQjaqI/pUwzadR9bdvQVSOYYwessn6ZybYADJR5rKn2j SYXA== X-Gm-Message-State: ALoCoQmiY5KMpQci17G6V01rdi6DVP/Cej+xWA2tOt6/oyYUmcY1Dcnaamk0Rd5P6shtdYqCkyRy X-Received: by 10.180.83.195 with SMTP id s3mr37110111wiy.54.1428086636870; Fri, 03 Apr 2015 11:43:56 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Sender: lists@eitanadler.com Received: by 10.28.211.135 with HTTP; Fri, 3 Apr 2015 11:43:26 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: <2293373.FuObg3DdlU@ralph.baldwin.cx> References: <201504010508.t3158WPX043648@svn.freebsd.org> <2293373.FuObg3DdlU@ralph.baldwin.cx> From: Eitan Adler Date: Fri, 3 Apr 2015 14:43:26 -0400 X-Google-Sender-Auth: 4RoNIWZJA67gqJJFkWpUJZp_Nug Message-ID: Subject: Re: svn commit: r46400 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall To: John Baldwin Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18-1 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 03 Apr 2015 18:43:58 -0000 On 3 April 2015 at 12:51, John Baldwin wrote: > On Wednesday, April 01, 2015 05:08:32 AM Eitan Adler wrote: >> Author: eadler >> Date: Wed Apr 1 05:08:31 2015 >> New Revision: 46400 >> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46400 >> >> Log: >> Minimum Hardware Requirements: installation instructions >> >> Sacrifice some technical pedanticness to simplify the description of amd64 and >> i386. For the users whom are actually confused as to which system they should >> use, using more plain language (such as 32-bit vs 64-bit) and referencing the >> vendors directly would be more helpful. >> >> Also, stop mentioning that both UP and SMP are supported. OpenBSD finished that >> project in 2004. > > Mostly looks good, some nits: ... Excellent. I've implemented your suggestions in r46452. -- Eitan Adler Source, Ports, Doc committer Bugmeister, Ports Security teams