From owner-freebsd-doc Sun May 5 8:30:21 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.FreeBSD.org [216.136.204.21]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A992737B407 for ; Sun, 5 May 2002 08:30:03 -0700 (PDT) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.11.6/8.11.6) id g45FU3k54981; Sun, 5 May 2002 08:30:03 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats) Received: from gothic.blackend.org (blackend.org [212.11.50.35]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9D5AA37B404 for ; Sun, 5 May 2002 08:25:05 -0700 (PDT) Received: from gothic.blackend.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by gothic.blackend.org (8.12.3/8.12.3/ - 15/04/02) with ESMTP id g45FNSkQ091313 for ; Sun, 5 May 2002 17:23:28 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from marc@gothic.blackend.org) Received: (from marc@localhost) by gothic.blackend.org (8.12.3/8.12.3/Submit) id g45FNSQB091312; Sun, 5 May 2002 17:23:28 +0200 (CEST) Message-Id: <200205051523.g45FNSQB091312@gothic.blackend.org> Date: Sun, 5 May 2002 17:23:28 +0200 (CEST) From: Marc Fonvieille Reply-To: Marc Fonvieille To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Subject: docs/37767: Punctuation problems in section 2.5.2 of the Handbook Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org >Number: 37767 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Punctuation problems in section 2.5.2 of the Handbook >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun May 05 08:30:03 PDT 2002 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Marc Fonvieille >Release: FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD gothic.blackend.org 4.5-STABLE FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE #0: Fri Apr 19 12:13:41 CEST 2002 marc@gothic.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/GOTHIC i386 >Description: In section 2.5.2 of the Handbook, instead of colons wrong ponctuation signs are used. Read the following patch and http://www.freebsd.org/handbook/install-steps.html for more details. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: Apply the patch to handbook/install/chapter.sgml --- chapter.sgml.diff begins here --- --- chapter.sgml.org Sun May 5 16:27:49 2002 +++ chapter.sgml Sun May 5 16:29:02 2002 @@ -1530,7 +1530,7 @@ Call A the root filesystem. If you used the ls command to view the contents of this directory you would see two subdirectories, A1 and - A2. The directory tree looks like this. + A2. The directory tree looks like this: / | @@ -1542,7 +1542,7 @@ filesystem. So now suppose that you mount filesystem B on to the directory A1. The root directory of B replaces A1, - and the directories in B appear accordingly. + and the directories in B appear accordingly: / | @@ -1562,7 +1562,7 @@ unmounted from A. If B had been mounted on A2 - then the diagram would look like this; + then the diagram would look like this: / | @@ -1580,7 +1580,7 @@ Filesystems can be mounted on top of one another. Continuing the last example, the C filesystem could be mounted on top of the B1 directory in the B - filesystem, leading to this arrangement. + filesystem, leading to this arrangement: / | @@ -1598,7 +1598,7 @@ Or C could be mounted directly on to the A filesystem, under the A1 - directory. + directory: / | --- chapter.sgml.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message