From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Dec 31 10:01:23 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id D02CB6E5; Tue, 31 Dec 2013 10:01:23 +0000 (UTC) Received: from smtp5-g21.free.fr (smtp5-g21.free.fr [IPv6:2a01:e0c:1:1599::14]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5123613D5; Tue, 31 Dec 2013 10:01:20 +0000 (UTC) Received: from emphyrio.blackend.org (unknown [88.179.1.53]) by smtp5-g21.free.fr (Postfix) with ESMTP id 13D8BD4813F; Tue, 31 Dec 2013 11:01:12 +0100 (CET) Received: from emphyrio.blackend.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by emphyrio.blackend.org (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id rBVA19jf001933; Tue, 31 Dec 2013 11:01:10 +0100 (CET) (envelope-from marc@emphyrio.blackend.org) Received: (from marc@localhost) by emphyrio.blackend.org (8.14.5/8.14.5/Submit) id rBVA19PW001932; Tue, 31 Dec 2013 11:01:09 +0100 (CET) (envelope-from marc) Date: Tue, 31 Dec 2013 11:01:09 +0100 From: Marc Fonvieille To: Warren Block Subject: Re: svn commit: r43404 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall Message-ID: <20131231100109.GA1900@emphyrio.blackend.org> References: <201312301751.rBUHpsRX041814@svn.freebsd.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: X-Useless-Header: blackend.org X-Operating-System: FreeBSD 9.1-RELEASE User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.21 (2010-09-15) Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 31 Dec 2013 10:01:23 -0000 On Mon, Dec 30, 2013 at 05:39:43PM -0700, Warren Block wrote: > On Mon, 30 Dec 2013, Marc Fonvieille wrote: > > > Author: blackend > > Date: Mon Dec 30 17:51:54 2013 > > New Revision: 43404 > > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43404 > > > > Log: > > Add some missing tags, and remove useless "". > > > > Modified: > > head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml > > > > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml > > ============================================================================== > > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Mon Dec 30 17:10:07 2013 (r43403) > > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Mon Dec 30 17:51:54 2013 (r43404) > > @@ -1353,7 +1353,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is > > > > BSD > > BSD Labels without an MBR, sometimes called > > - "dangerously dedicated mode". See > > + dangerously dedicated mode. See > > &man.bsdlabel.8;. > > > > > > @@ -1494,7 +1494,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is > > for a 20G target disk. If more space is available on the > > target disk, larger swap or /var > > partitions may be useful. Labels shown here are prefixed > > - with ex for "example", but readers > > + with ex for example, but readers > > should use other unique label values as described > > above. > > On this one, there should be quotes. It's not "for example" but > "ex" standing for "example". So > Indeed, I thought at it later this night. Just fixed it. -- Marc