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Subject: Re: docs/37453: more suitable command-line in
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From: Hideyuki KURASHINA <rushani@bl.mmtr.or.jp>
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Hi,

I think following is more suitable.

Index: article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /usr/CURRENT/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/releng/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.22
diff -u -r1.22 article.sgml
--- article.sgml	18 Apr 2002 18:59:03 -0000	1.22
+++ article.sgml	25 Apr 2002 14:09:53 -0000
@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@
         <literal>RELENG_X</literal> sources that you want to branch
         <emphasis>from</emphasis>.</para>
       
-      <screen>/usr/src&prompt.root; <userinput>cvs up -rRELENG_4 -P -d</userinput></screen>
+      <screen>/usr/src&prompt.root; <userinput>cvs update -rRELENG_4 -P -d</userinput></screen>
       
       <para>The next step is to create a branch point
         <emphasis>tag</emphasis>, so that diffs against the start of


>>> On Thu, 25 Apr 2002 07:09:56 -0700 (PDT), Hideyuki KURASHINA <rushani@bl.mmtr.or.jp> said:

> 
> >Number:         37453
> >Category:       docs
> >Synopsis:       more suitable command-line in articles/releng/article.sgml
> >Confidential:   no
> >Severity:       non-critical
> >Priority:       low
> >Responsible:    freebsd-doc
> >State:          open
> >Quarter:        
> >Keywords:       
> >Date-Required:
> >Class:          change-request
> >Submitter-Id:   current-users
> >Arrival-Date:   Thu Apr 25 07:10:01 PDT 2002
> >Closed-Date:
> >Last-Modified:
> >Originator:     Hideyuki KURASHINA
> >Release:        FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE i386
> >Organization:
> Nagaoka National College of Technology
> >Environment:
> >Description:
> 'cvs up' seems to work as well as 'cvs update', but cvs(1) doesn't describe it.
> I think 'cvs update' is more suitable than 'cvs up' as an article.
> 
> >How-To-Repeat:
> In articles/releng/article.sgml, look '2.2.1 Creating the Release Branch' and
> find following command-line;
> 
>     /usr/src# cvs up -rRELENG_4 -P -d
> 
> >Fix:
>       
> >Release-Note:
> >Audit-Trail:
> >Unformatted:

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kura

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