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Author: rene
Date: Mon Feb 11 00:08:08 2013
New Revision: 40928
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40928

Log:
  Some 'igor -z' improvements.
  
  Approved by:	gjb (mentor)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/smp/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/smp/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/smp/chapter.xml	Mon Feb 11 00:07:29 2013	(r40927)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/smp/chapter.xml	Mon Feb 11 00:08:08 2013	(r40928)
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>
-      <title>Read Locks versus Write Locks</title>
+      <title>Read Locks Versus Write Locks</title>
 
     <indexterm><primary>read locks</primary></indexterm>
     <indexterm><primary>write locks</primary></indexterm>
@@ -655,7 +655,7 @@
 	needed.
 	Those items that do not matter if the race is won or lost will
 	not be locked, since they tend to be read all over the place
-	(e.g. &man.device.get.softc.9;).  There will be relatively few
+	(e.g., &man.device.get.softc.9;).  There will be relatively few
 	changes to the newbus data structures, so a single lock should
 	be sufficient and not impose a performance penalty.</para>
     </sect2>