From owner-svn-src-all@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 13 22:18:54 2009 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-src-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 669361065676; Mon, 13 Jul 2009 22:18:54 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from rnoland@FreeBSD.org) Received: from gizmo.2hip.net (gizmo.2hip.net [64.74.207.195]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 234488FC16; Mon, 13 Jul 2009 22:18:52 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from rnoland@FreeBSD.org) Received: from [192.168.1.4] (adsl-154-199-204.ard.bellsouth.net [72.154.199.204]) (authenticated bits=0) by gizmo.2hip.net (8.14.3/8.14.3) with ESMTP id n6DMIo8D063879 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NO); Mon, 13 Jul 2009 18:18:50 -0400 (EDT) (envelope-from rnoland@FreeBSD.org) From: Robert Noland To: Joel Dahl In-Reply-To: <4A5B8544.3040405@FreeBSD.org> References: <200907111525.n6BFPDrY056196@svn.freebsd.org> <47d0403c0907112040v785b6f4se7e927809035b3b5@mail.gmail.com> <4A5B8544.3040405@FreeBSD.org> Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg="pgp-sha1"; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="=-EhnLPsL79V0sGZlpEoTu" Organization: FreeBSD Date: Mon, 13 Jul 2009 17:18:45 -0500 Message-Id: <1247523525.1745.14.camel@balrog.2hip.net> Mime-Version: 1.0 X-Mailer: Evolution 2.26.2 FreeBSD GNOME Team Port X-Spam-Status: No, score=-0.6 required=5.0 tests=AWL,BAYES_00, MIME_QP_LONG_LINE, RCVD_IN_PBL, RCVD_IN_SORBS_DUL, RDNS_DYNAMIC, SPF_SOFTFAIL autolearn=no version=3.2.5 X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.2.5 (2008-06-10) on gizmo.2hip.net Cc: svn-src-head@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, src-committers@freebsd.org, ariff@freebsd.org, Ben Kaduk Subject: Re: svn commit: r195619 - head/share/man/man4 X-BeenThere: svn-src-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire src tree \(except for " user" and " projects" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 13 Jul 2009 22:18:54 -0000 --=-EhnLPsL79V0sGZlpEoTu Content-Type: text/plain Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Mon, 2009-07-13 at 21:04 +0200, Joel Dahl wrote: > Ben Kaduk skrev: > > It would be nice to be consistent about using "and", "+" > > or neither for the parentheticals. > > Also, "LFE" does not appear to be expanded to "low frequency > > enhancement" anywhere .... >=20 > I've fixed most of the issues you reported now, thanks. I didn't expand = LFE=20 > though, because I'm not sure where I should put the explanation. I'm no writer... but what I remember from our technical writers is to just expand the acronym on first use. Once people know what it stands for they can google it for an explanation if they need it.... robert. > Btw, if you have any more suggestions, just send them over. I think the=20 > entire man page needs more love. >=20 > -- > Joel --=20 Robert Noland FreeBSD --=-EhnLPsL79V0sGZlpEoTu Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name="signature.asc" Content-Description: This is a digitally signed message part -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v2.0.11 (FreeBSD) iEYEABECAAYFAkpbssUACgkQM4TrQ4qfRONO9wCfa3dQZvT4burWEu8Q6lCbhw5q PkEAnR3Y1w9TEzFUsTH6yFb34VXGy57F =Y3GB -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --=-EhnLPsL79V0sGZlpEoTu--