From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Apr 3 18:43:59 2015 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher AECDH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 15F28538 for ; Fri, 3 Apr 2015 18:43:59 +0000 (UTC) Received: from mail-wg0-x232.google.com (mail-wg0-x232.google.com [IPv6:2a00:1450:400c:c00::232]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (Client CN "smtp.gmail.com", Issuer "Google Internet Authority G2" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 949E016E for ; Fri, 3 Apr 2015 18:43:58 +0000 (UTC) Received: by wgdm6 with SMTP id m6so117156977wgd.2 for ; Fri, 03 Apr 2015 11:43:56 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=eitanadler.com; s=0xdeadbeef; h=mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:from:date:message-id :subject:to:cc:content-type; bh=BVxvgggYQhq6iGDwQEid8cX4ZFJXO2NMd69NkG8zJEI=; b=fjuJoIDvLpHe7rCDbym12vA57Wk7MS376Zu+Z1E3DrsgUzBPB8vR0Bocry02o/0Qsc pcMQwopbwxAxgQ/sGcj0pPxu7m03K1vxnrvxfIanLpIsmA6fyTVGvXRCE36P9vnTRgL3 L754wgNDnTs+b0VKYLXXKHU494zMQYE/WmjPk= X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20130820; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:from :date:message-id:subject:to:cc:content-type; bh=BVxvgggYQhq6iGDwQEid8cX4ZFJXO2NMd69NkG8zJEI=; b=MfD5OtfHh5i2R6VDG3pTru6wF+4X4db6qyVZnKM5kbXi4sGP1PHBNz1YH7hrUiBcUB hAQejTSum9/M3RCMsqeGb8ykNQTgV4xOBo2eBejkFbnYQENJ+XPLnBXXQyUH4z0gpS62 x6LUlJwKq25SxlHEaFEBsIV9iMNOKBIPAejDUjwEz81sD7YjgFh+mURQAk0HE8yQ4LvP nXN93AXIhz1ZPMqORv17tfyDYGie/OLipVf4KcUN+fetnJgfqHEn8oQrxGjx+OinSgx9 +dh+6CuacuaRTSt+16eOseX33xY1awDlSrZgED2cUnLNnOf7C76j8xWz05owAsRL3DKI 4IWg== X-Gm-Message-State: ALoCoQkGBO14jU9WAcfRaONfWmzfT2eNb8HbH6mfXnlLCaSxABwjjtbMaPJ3C7p2Axt8pFdF6Vx6 X-Received: by 10.180.83.195 with SMTP id s3mr37110111wiy.54.1428086636870; Fri, 03 Apr 2015 11:43:56 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Sender: lists@eitanadler.com Received: by 10.28.211.135 with HTTP; Fri, 3 Apr 2015 11:43:26 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: <2293373.FuObg3DdlU@ralph.baldwin.cx> References: <201504010508.t3158WPX043648@svn.freebsd.org> <2293373.FuObg3DdlU@ralph.baldwin.cx> From: Eitan Adler Date: Fri, 3 Apr 2015 14:43:26 -0400 X-Google-Sender-Auth: 4RoNIWZJA67gqJJFkWpUJZp_Nug Message-ID: Subject: Re: svn commit: r46400 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall To: John Baldwin Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18-1 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 03 Apr 2015 18:43:59 -0000 On 3 April 2015 at 12:51, John Baldwin wrote: > On Wednesday, April 01, 2015 05:08:32 AM Eitan Adler wrote: >> Author: eadler >> Date: Wed Apr 1 05:08:31 2015 >> New Revision: 46400 >> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46400 >> >> Log: >> Minimum Hardware Requirements: installation instructions >> >> Sacrifice some technical pedanticness to simplify the description of amd64 and >> i386. For the users whom are actually confused as to which system they should >> use, using more plain language (such as 32-bit vs 64-bit) and referencing the >> vendors directly would be more helpful. >> >> Also, stop mentioning that both UP and SMP are supported. OpenBSD finished that >> project in 2004. > > Mostly looks good, some nits: ... Excellent. I've implemented your suggestions in r46452. -- Eitan Adler Source, Ports, Doc committer Bugmeister, Ports Security teams