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From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Sun, 15 Jun 2003 03:12:00 -0700 (PDT)
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml
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murray      2003/06/15 03:12:00 PDT

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Use lower case indexterms, and correct an egregious entry :
  
  -    <indexterm><primary>Configuring the <command>cron</command> utility</primary></indexterm>
  +    <indexterm><primary>cron</primary>
  +      <secondary>configuration</secondary></indexterm>
  
  This is wrong for many many reasons :
  
  * The indexterm is way too long and is a direct copy of the title
    of the section it resides in.  The index is not a table of contents.
  * Two columns of index terms should fit at the back of the printed
    book, so four words is almos always out of the question.
  * indexterms relating to cron should appear near (as a subterm of) the
    'cron' entry, not as a new 'Configuration blah' entry.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.114     +11 -10    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml