From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Feb 12 05:36:27 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id EB21B9C2; Tue, 12 Feb 2013 05:36:27 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@mit.edu) Received: from dmz-mailsec-scanner-4.mit.edu (DMZ-MAILSEC-SCANNER-4.MIT.EDU [18.9.25.15]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4EDA633A; Tue, 12 Feb 2013 05:36:27 +0000 (UTC) X-AuditID: 1209190f-b7f586d000000915-0f-5119d3a8ab6a Received: from mailhub-auth-4.mit.edu ( [18.7.62.39]) by dmz-mailsec-scanner-4.mit.edu (Symantec Messaging Gateway) with SMTP id C5.6F.02325.8A3D9115; Tue, 12 Feb 2013 00:31:20 -0500 (EST) Received: from outgoing.mit.edu (OUTGOING-AUTH-1.MIT.EDU [18.9.28.11]) by mailhub-auth-4.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.9.2) with ESMTP id r1C5VKAb014462; Tue, 12 Feb 2013 00:31:20 -0500 Received: from multics.mit.edu (SYSTEM-LOW-SIPB.MIT.EDU [18.187.2.37]) (authenticated bits=56) (User authenticated as kaduk@ATHENA.MIT.EDU) by outgoing.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.12.4) with ESMTP id r1C5VIg2016448 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Tue, 12 Feb 2013 00:31:19 -0500 Received: (from kaduk@localhost) by multics.mit.edu (8.12.9.20060308) id r1C5VHHK020441; Tue, 12 Feb 2013 00:31:17 -0500 (EST) Date: Tue, 12 Feb 2013 00:31:17 -0500 (EST) From: Benjamin Kaduk To: Dru Lavigne Subject: Re: svn commit: r40947 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems In-Reply-To: <201302111458.r1BEwYW7034821@svn.freebsd.org> Message-ID: References: <201302111458.r1BEwYW7034821@svn.freebsd.org> User-Agent: Alpine 1.10 (GSO 962 2008-03-14) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; format=flowed; charset=US-ASCII X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFnrPIsWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUixG6nrrvismSgwe3VIhY/Ph5isuhqUrW4 sWg/k8Xu/l5mBxaPGZ/mswQwRnHZpKTmZJalFunbJXBlXHzziqVgn2DFip4HjA2MTXxdjJwc EgImEjseH2aFsMUkLtxbz9bFyMUhJLCPUWLJt0esEM5GRomdD2azQDiHmCTufZgMlWlglOja fom9i5GDg0VAW+L42jyQUWwCKhIz32xkA7FFBBQlnn7dywhiMwtESexZ2gi2TlggWOJX9wqw Vk4BK4nXJw1BTF4BB4mPV2RAKoQELCV6rv0C6xQV0JFYvX8KC4jNKyAocXLmExaIiZYS/9b+ Yp3AKDgLSWoWktQCRqZVjLIpuVW6uYmZOcWpybrFyYl5ealFuiZ6uZkleqkppZsYQeHKKcm/ g/HbQaVDjAIcjEo8vA2ikoFCrIllxZW5hxglOZiURHmLzgOF+JLyUyozEosz4otKc1KLDzFK cDArifAu+ygRKMSbklhZlVqUD5OS5mBREue9mnLTX0ggPbEkNTs1tSC1CCYrw8GhJME74RLQ UMGi1PTUirTMnBKENBMHJ8hwHqDh10BqeIsLEnOLM9Mh8qcYFaXEeVeDJARAEhmleXC9sHTy ilEc6BVh3qUgVTzAVATX/QpoMBPQYM4ccZDBJYkIKakGRtUHz/qvu/l2iwksc+CUES8oaZg0 NXBR415nB161zbePGYoJn7pZsujnuyaxQ8vK1UM61RP037h9usy4+80Vxkt3/sa/ND4V8j1+ o4pt3OrNQvYmfwWCf8quuv/uuxjnX75XydMlvx79sOqN9WOhnKiPtX3NgY4cBt6qjiFbpqhI 93EK+yxnVGIpzkg01GIuKk4EAPRGsM0CAwAA Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 12 Feb 2013 05:36:28 -0000 On Mon, 11 Feb 2013, Dru Lavigne wrote: > Modified: > head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.xml > > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.xml > ============================================================================== > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.xml Mon Feb 11 14:50:33 2013 (r40946) > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.xml Mon Feb 11 14:58:34 2013 (r40947) > @@ -27,32 +27,30 @@ > + They allow users to upload and store files, provide access > + to data, and make hard drives useful. Different operating > + systems differ in their native file system. Traditionally, the > + native &os; file system has been the Unix File System > + UFS which has been recently modernized as > + UFS2. Since &os; 7.0, the Z File UFS2 is recent only in a very relative sense -- I used it (for non-root filesystems, I suppose) when I first picked up FreeBSD 5.2 in 2004. We can probably just say "which has been modernized as UFS2" at this point. > + System ZFS is also available as a native file > system. > > @@ -529,37 +509,34 @@ errors: No known data errors > > Data Verification > > - As previously mentioned, ZFS uses > + ZFS uses > checksums to verify the integrity of Hmm, checksums probably doesn't need markup, here. > - stored data. They are enabled automatically upon creation > + stored data. These are enabled automatically upon creation > of file systems and may be disabled using the following > command: > > @@ -571,43 +548,39 @@ config: > + ZFS supports different types of quotas: the refquota, > + the general quota, the user quota, and the group quota. > + This section explains the basics of each type and includes > + some usage instructions. Grammar is pretty lousy in this section, but you were just reformatting so I'll skip the details. Some things to look at for the next pass, I guess. -Ben