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>Number:         50664
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Handbook 12.4.1 (CCD) needs work
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Apr 07 02:00:31 PDT 2003
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Murray Stokely
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.8-RC i386
>Organization:
FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD builder.freebsdmall.com 4.8-RC FreeBSD 4.8-RC #21: Sun Mar 23 14:37:00 PST 2003 murray@builder.freebsdmall.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/BUILDER i386
>Description:

The section on Software RAID / CCD in Chapter 12 is unclear, uses the
first person, and includes a lot of irrelevant personal information
about the author.

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:

Rework this chapter to improve clarify and professionalism.
Sorry, no patch at this time. ;)
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted: