From owner-freebsd-doc Tue Aug 7 16:40:21 2001 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 431E537B405 for ; Tue, 7 Aug 2001 16:40:02 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.11.4/8.11.4) id f77Ne2B92574; Tue, 7 Aug 2001 16:40:02 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats) Received: from localhost.localdomain (host68.207.55.120.aadsl.com [207.55.120.68]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9110637B40C for ; Tue, 7 Aug 2001 16:30:17 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from swear@aa.net) Received: (from jojo@localhost) by localhost.localdomain (8.11.3/8.11.3) id f77NWSb50108; Tue, 7 Aug 2001 16:32:28 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from swear@aa.net) Message-Id: <0fk80fv438.80f@localhost.localdomain> Date: 07 Aug 2001 16:32:27 -0700 From: swear@aa.net (Gary W. Swearingen) Reply-To: swear@aa.net To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Subject: docs/29522: Handbook: A few changes related to cvsup collections. Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org >Number: 29522 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Handbook: A few changes related to cvsup collections. >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Tue Aug 07 16:40:01 PDT 2001 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Gary W. Swearingen >Release: FreeBSD 4.3-STABLE i386 >Organization: none >Environment: n/a ================ >Description: In the "mirrors" chapter: 1) "described here", where "here" is a link, doesn't translate well to ASCII. 2) The description of the "doc-all" collection doesn't warn people that it doesn't include the FreeBSD.org web site. Those who read that the site's files are part of the Documentation Project might not read far to the end of the list to read that "doc-all" doesn't mean all of the FDP's docs. 3) Mention of the "www" collection as "WWW data" is rather nebulous. ================ >How-To-Repeat: n/a ================ >Fix: patch -d /*/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors < this-PR *** /tmp/chapter.sgml Tue Aug 7 14:56:34 2001 --- chapter.sgml Tue Aug 7 15:45:15 2001 *************** *** 1845,1852 **** The files available via CVSup are organized into named groups called collections. The collections that are ! available are described here. In this example, we wish to receive the entire main source tree for the FreeBSD system. There is a single large collection src-all which will give us all of that. --- 1845,1853 ---- The files available via CVSup are organized into named groups called collections. The collections that are ! available are described in a following section. In this ! example, we wish to receive the entire main source tree for the FreeBSD system. There is a single large collection src-all which will give us all of that. *************** *** 2408,2415 **** doc-all release=cvs ! Sources for the FreeBSD handbook and other ! documentation. --- 2409,2417 ---- doc-all release=cvs ! Sources for the FreeBSD handbook and some other ! documentation. It does not include files for the ! FreeBSD WWW site. *************** *** 3082,3088 **** www release=cvs ! The sources for the World Wide Web data. --- 3084,3090 ---- www release=cvs ! The sources for the FreeBSD WWW site. *************** *** 3119,3126 **** www release=current ! The installed World Wide Web data. Used by WWW mirror ! sites. --- 3121,3128 ---- www release=current ! The pre-processed FreeBSD WWW site files (not the ! source files). Used by WWW mirror sites. >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message