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Date:      Mon, 24 Dec 2012 20:35:10 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Hiroki Sato <hrs@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r40474 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/9.1R
Message-ID:  <201212242035.qBOKZAFB076159@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: hrs
Date: Mon Dec 24 20:35:10 2012
New Revision: 40474
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40474

Log:
  Regen from r244664.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/9.1R/relnotes-detailed.html

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/9.1R/relnotes-detailed.html
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/9.1R/relnotes-detailed.html	Mon Dec 24 19:14:15 2012	(r40473)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/9.1R/relnotes-detailed.html	Mon Dec 24 20:35:10 2012	(r40474)
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ alink="#0000FF">
 <p class="copyright">Copyright &copy; 2012 The FreeBSD Documentation Project</p>
 
 <p class="pubdate">$FreeBSD: stable/9/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
-244645 2012-12-24 00:08:58Z hrs $<br />
+244664 2012-12-24 20:33:37Z hrs $<br />
 </p>
 
 <div class="legalnotice"><a id="trademarks" name="trademarks"></a>
@@ -112,10 +112,12 @@ href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi
 
 <dd>
 <dl>
-<dt>3.1 <a href="#AEN1102">Upgrading using freebsd-update(8) or a source-based
+<dt>3.1 <a href="#AEN1104">Upgrading using <a
+href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=freebsd-update&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
+<span class="citerefentry">freebsd-update(8)</span></a> or a source-based
 &#09;procedure</a></dt>
 
-<dt>3.2 <a href="#AEN1118">User-visible incompatibilities</a></dt>
+<dt>3.2 <a href="#AEN1124">User-visible incompatibilities</a></dt>
 </dl>
 </dd>
 </dl>
@@ -267,7 +269,7 @@ target="_top">SA-12:08.linux</a></td>
 <hr />
 <h3 class="sect2"><a id="kernel" name="kernel">2.2 Kernel Changes</a></h3>
 
-<p>FreeBSD Jail subsystem now supports &#09;mounting <a
+<p>The FreeBSD Jail subsystem now supports &#09;mounting <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=devfs&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">devfs</span>(5)</span></a>, <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=nullfs&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
@@ -286,9 +288,9 @@ target="_top">r232728</a>]</p>
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=loader&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">loader</span>(8)</span></a>
 tunable &#09;<code class="varname">kern.eventtimer.activetick</code> has been added.
-&#09;This tunable is to specify whether each hardclock tick should &#09;be run on every
-active CPU or only one. Setting it to &#09;<tt class="literal">0</tt>, the number of
-interrupts can be reduced &#09;on SMP machines. The default value is &#09;<tt
+&#09;This tunable specifies whether each hardclock tick should &#09;be run on every
+active CPU or only one. By setting it to &#09;<tt class="literal">0</tt>, the total
+number of interrupts can be reduced &#09;on SMP machines. The default value is &#09;<tt
 class="literal">1</tt>.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234167"
 target="_top">r234167</a>]</p>
@@ -306,7 +308,7 @@ target="_top">r229723</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=filemon&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">filemon</span>(4)</span></a>
-pseudo device has &#09;been added. This allows a process to collect file operations
+pseudo-device has &#09;been added. This allows a process to collect file operations
 &#09;data of its children.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=237795"
 target="_top">r237795</a>]</p>
@@ -325,9 +327,9 @@ href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=231907"
 target="_top">r231907</a>]</p>
 
-<p>The FreeBSD Linux ABI compatibility layer &#09;now supports <code
-class="function">linux_fadvice64()</code> and &#09;<code
-class="function">linux_fadvice64_64()</code> system call.[<a
+<p>The FreeBSD Linux ABI compatibility layer &#09;now supports the <code
+class="function">linux_fadvise64()</code> and &#09;<code
+class="function">linux_fadvise64_64()</code> system calls.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=231145"
 target="_top">r231145</a>]</p>
 
@@ -343,7 +345,7 @@ target="_top">r230266</a>]</p>
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=loader&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">loader</span>(8)</span></a>
 tunable &#09;<code class="varname">kern.msgbuf_show_timestamp</code> has been added.
-&#09;When this is enabled, timestamp is added to each line of the &#09;system message
+&#09;When it is enabled, a timestamp is added to each line of the &#09;system message
 buffer. The default value is &#09;<tt class="literal">0</tt> (disabled).[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234075"
 target="_top">r234075</a>]</p>
@@ -353,7 +355,7 @@ href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">null</span>(4)</span></a> and <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zero&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">zero</span>(4)</span></a> pseudo
-&#09;device driver now supports non-blocking mode via <a
+&#09;device driver now supports non-blocking mode via the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=fcntl&sektion=2&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">fcntl</span>(2)</span></a>
 &#09;system call.[<a
@@ -363,14 +365,14 @@ target="_top">r230320</a>]</p>
 <p>The FreeBSD <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sched_ule&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sched_ule</span>(4)</span></a>
-scheduler has &#09;been improved on CPU load balancing of SMT (Simultaneous
-&#09;MultiThreading) CPUs. It gives 10-15% performance improvement &#09;when the number
+scheduler has &#09;been improved for CPU load balancing on SMT (Simultaneous
+&#09;MultiThreading) CPUs. It gives a 10-15% performance improvement &#09;when the number
 of threads is lesser than the number of &#09;logical CPUs.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233599"
 target="_top">r233599</a>]</p>
 
-<p>[sparc64] <tt class="literal">PREEMPTION</tt> kernel option is &#09;now enabled in <tt
-class="filename">GENERIC</tt> kernel.[<a
+<p>[sparc64] The <tt class="literal">PREEMPTION</tt> kernel option is &#09;now enabled in
+the <tt class="filename">GENERIC</tt> kernel.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235992"
 target="_top">r235992</a>]</p>
 
@@ -397,10 +399,10 @@ target="_top">r228445</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=boot0cfg&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">boot0cfg</span>(8)</span></a>
-utility now &#09; supports configuration of PXE boot via &#09; <tt
+utility now &#09; supports configuration of PXE boot via the &#09; <tt
 class="filename">boot0</tt> boot block temporarily on the &#09; next boot. The slice
 number <tt class="literal">6</tt> or a &#09; keyword <tt class="literal">PXE</tt> can be
-specified to enable &#09; PXE boot in the <code class="option">-s</code> option.[<a
+specified to enable &#09; PXE boot using the <code class="option">-s</code> option.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=230065"
 target="_top">r230065</a>]</p>
 
@@ -423,30 +425,31 @@ metadata.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.or
 target="_top">r234693</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <tt class="filename">zfsboot</tt> boot &#09; block and <tt
-class="filename">zfsloader</tt> supports &#09; filesystems within a ZFS storage pool. In
-&#09; <tt class="filename">zfsloader</tt>, ZFS device name format now &#09; is &#09; <tt
-class="literal">zfs:<tt class="replaceable"><i>pool</i></tt>/<tt
-class="replaceable"><i>fs</i></tt></tt> &#09; and fully qualified file path is &#09; <tt
+class="filename">zfsloader</tt> support &#09; filesystems within a ZFS storage pool. In
+&#09; <tt class="filename">zfsloader</tt>, the ZFS device name format is now &#09; <tt
 class="literal">zfs:<tt class="replaceable"><i>pool</i></tt>/<tt
+class="replaceable"><i>fs</i></tt></tt> &#09; and the fully qualified file path format is
+&#09; <tt class="literal">zfs:<tt class="replaceable"><i>pool</i></tt>/<tt
 class="replaceable"><i>fs</i></tt>:/<tt
 class="replaceable"><i>path/to/file</i></tt></tt>. &#09; The <tt
-class="filename">zfsboot</tt> accepts kernel/loader name &#09; in a format &#09; <tt
-class="literal"><tt class="replaceable"><i>pool</i></tt>:<tt
+class="filename">zfsboot</tt> boot block accepts the &#09; kernel/loader name in the
+format &#09; <tt class="literal"><tt class="replaceable"><i>pool</i></tt>:<tt
 class="replaceable"><i>fs</i></tt>:<tt class="replaceable"><i>path/to/file</i></tt></tt>
 &#09; or, as before, &#09; <tt class="literal"><tt
 class="replaceable"><i>pool</i></tt>:<tt
 class="replaceable"><i>path/to/file</i></tt></tt>. &#09; In the latter case a default
-filesystem is used (the pool &#09; root or <tt class="literal">bootfs</tt> property). The
-&#09; <tt class="filename">zfsboot</tt> passes GUIDs of the selected &#09; storage pool
-and dataset to <tt class="filename">zfsloader</tt> &#09; to be used as its defaults.[<a
+filesystem is used (the pool &#09; root or a filesystem with the <tt
+class="literal">bootfs</tt> property). The &#09; <tt class="filename">zfsboot</tt> boot
+block passes &#09; the GUIDs of the selected &#09; storage pool and dataset to <tt
+class="filename">zfsloader</tt> &#09; to be used as its defaults.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=237766"
 target="_top">r237766</a>]</p>
 
-<p>[sparc64] The FreeBSD/sparc64 now &#09; supports booting from ZFS via zfsboot boot
-block and &#09; zfsloader. For example, the following commands create a &#09; mirrored
-storage pool <tt class="literal">rpool</tt> consisting of &#09; <tt
-class="literal">da0a</tt> and <tt class="literal">da0b</tt> and &#09; configure the
-storage pool as the root filesystem:[<a
+<p>[sparc64] FreeBSD/sparc64 now &#09; supports booting from ZFS via the <tt
+class="filename">zfsboot</tt> boot block and &#09; <tt class="filename">zfsloader</tt>.
+For example, the following commands create a &#09; mirrored storage pool <tt
+class="literal">rpool</tt> consisting of &#09; <tt class="literal">da0a</tt> and <tt
+class="literal">da0b</tt> and &#09; configure the storage pool as the root filesystem:[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236076"
 target="_top">r236076</a>]</p>
 
@@ -501,15 +504,15 @@ driver now &#09; supports attaching mult
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229858"
 target="_top">r229858</a>]</p>
 
-<p>[powerpc] The adm1030(4) driver &#09; for G4 MDD fan now shows its PWM parameter in
-the device &#09; <a
+<p>[powerpc] The adm1030(4) driver &#09; for G4 MDD fans now shows its PWM parameter in
+the device's &#09; <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sysctl</span>(8)</span></a>
 variable.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=230290"
 target="_top">r230290</a>]</p>
 
-<p>[arm] The cesa(4) driver for &#09; Marvell crypto engine and security accelerator has
-been &#09; added.[<a
+<p>[arm] The cesa(4) driver for the &#09; Marvell crypto engine and security accelerator
+has been &#09; added.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234559"
 target="_top">r234559</a>]</p>
 
@@ -523,7 +526,7 @@ target="_top">r230305</a>]</p>
 <p>[amd64, i386] The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=hwpmc&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">hwpmc</span>(4)</span></a> &#09;
-driver now supports Intel Sandy Bridge &#09; microarchitecture.[<a
+driver now supports the Intel Sandy Bridge &#09; microarchitecture.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234046"
 target="_top">r234046</a>]</p>
 
@@ -535,16 +538,16 @@ PMC is allowed.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236238"
 target="_top">r236238</a>]</p>
 
-<p>The pcf8563(4) driver for NXP &#09; (Philips) PCF8563 RTC has been added.[<a
+<p>The pcf8563(4) driver for the NXP &#09; (Philips) PCF8563 RTC has been added.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236078"
 target="_top">r236078</a>]</p>
 
-<p>[powerpc] FreeBSD/powerpc now &#09; supports PWM-controlled fans found on PowerMac SMU
-(System &#09; Management Unit).[<a
+<p>[powerpc] FreeBSD/powerpc now &#09; supports the PWM-controlled fans found on the
+PowerMac SMU (System &#09; Management Unit).[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233471"
 target="_top">r233471</a>]</p>
 
-<p>[arm] FreeBSD/arm now supports Atmel &#09; SAM9XE family of microcontrollers.[<a
+<p>[arm] FreeBSD/arm now supports the Atmel &#09; SAM9XE family of microcontrollers.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236081"
 target="_top">r236081</a>]</p>
 
@@ -553,11 +556,12 @@ href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sysctl</span>(8)</span></a> &#09;
 variables have been added: <code class="varname">kern.proc.env</code> &#09; for
 environment strings, <code class="varname">kern.proc.auxv</code> &#09; for ELF auxiliary
-vectors from a process stack, &#09; <code class="varname">kern.proc.groups</code> for
+vectors from a process's stack, &#09; <code class="varname">kern.proc.groups</code> for
 process groups, &#09; <code class="varname">kern.proc.rlimit</code> for process resource
-&#09; limits, and <code class="varname">kern.proc.ps_strings</code> for &#09; ps_strings
-location, <code class="varname">kern.proc.osrel</code> for &#09; osreldate for process
-binary.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=230754"
+&#09; limits, <code class="varname">kern.proc.ps_strings</code> for the &#09; ps_strings
+location, and <code class="varname">kern.proc.osrel</code> for &#09; the osreldate of the
+process's binary.[<a
+href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=230754"
 target="_top">r230754</a>, <a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233950"
 target="_top">r233950</a>]</p>
@@ -565,7 +569,7 @@ target="_top">r233950</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=usb&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">usb</span>(4)</span></a> driver
-now &#09; handles suspend and resume correctly with no need of reloading &#09; the kernel
+now &#09; handles suspend and resume correctly with no need to reload &#09; the kernel
 module.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229100"
 target="_top">r229100</a>, <a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229369"
@@ -581,7 +585,7 @@ target="_top">r230302</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=viawd&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">viawd</span>(4)</span></a> driver,
-which &#09; supports watchdog timer found in VIA south bridge (VT8251, &#09; CX700,
+which &#09; supports the watchdog timer found in VIA south bridges (VT8251, &#09; CX700,
 VX800, VX855, VX900), has been added.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229927"
 target="_top">r229927</a>]</p>
@@ -589,7 +593,7 @@ target="_top">r229927</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=wbwd&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">wbwd</span>(4)</span></a> driver,
-which &#09; supports watchdog timer found in Winbond Super I/O chips, &#09; has been
+which &#09; supports the watchdog timer found in Winbond Super I/O chips, &#09; has been
 added.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235926"
 target="_top">r235926</a>]</p>
 
@@ -597,7 +601,7 @@ target="_top">r235926</a>]</p>
 <hr />
 <h5 class="sect4"><a id="mm" name="mm">2.2.2.1 Multimedia Support</a></h5>
 
-<p>The drm2(4) Intel GPU driver, &#09; which supports GEM, KMS, and works with new
+<p>The drm2(4) Intel GPU driver, &#09; which supports GEM and KMS and works with new
 generations of &#09; GPUs such as IronLake, SandyBridge, and IvyBridge, has been &#09;
 added. The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=agp&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
@@ -613,10 +617,10 @@ target="_top">r239965</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=snd_hda&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">snd_hda</span>(4)</span></a>
-driver has been &#09; updated. It now supports HDMI, new volume control, &#09; automatic
-recording source selection, runtime &#09; reconfiguration, more then 4 PCM devices on a
-controller, &#09; multichannel recording, additional playback/record &#09; streams,
-higher bandwidth, and more informative device &#09; names.[<a
+driver has been &#09; updated. It now supports and provides HDMI, new volume control,
+&#09; automatic recording source selection, runtime &#09; reconfiguration, more then 4
+PCM devices on a controller, &#09; multichannel recording, additional playback/record
+&#09; streams, higher bandwidth, and more informative device &#09; names.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=232798"
 target="_top">r232798</a>]</p>
 
@@ -637,7 +641,7 @@ href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=snd_csa&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">snd_csa</span>(4)</span></a>
 drivers have been replaced with &#09; BSD-licensed one. These drivers are now fully &#09;
-BSD-licensed and included in <tt class="filename">GENERIC</tt> &#09; kernel on
+BSD-licensed and included in the <tt class="filename">GENERIC</tt> &#09; kernel on
 FreeBSD/amd64 and FreeBSD/i386.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=230964"
 target="_top">r230964</a>, <a
@@ -653,17 +657,17 @@ target="_top">r235769</a>]</p>
 <hr />
 <h5 class="sect4"><a id="net-if" name="net-if">2.2.2.2 Network Interface Support</a></h5>
 
-<p>A bug in <a
+<p>A bug in the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ae&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE"><span
  class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ae</span>(4)</span></a> driver which
-could &#09; prevent from working under certain conditions has been &#09; fixed.[<a
+could &#09; prevent it from working under certain conditions has been &#09; fixed.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229520"
 target="_top">r229520</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=axe&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">axe</span>(4)</span></a> driver
-now supports &#09; TX/RX checksum offloading support for ASIX AX88772B &#09;
+now supports &#09; TX/RX checksum offloading support for the ASIX AX88772B &#09;
 controller.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229106"
 target="_top">r229106</a>]</p>
 
@@ -680,8 +684,8 @@ target="_top">r229864</a>]</p>
 </li>
 
 <li>
-<p>A bug has been fixed. It could &#09;&#09;prevent IPMI from working when the interface
-was &#09;&#09;marked as down.[<a
+<p>A bug has been fixed which could &#09;&#09;prevent IPMI from working when the
+interface was &#09;&#09;marked as down.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236216"
 target="_top">r236216</a>]</p>
 </li>
@@ -690,7 +694,7 @@ target="_top">r236216</a>]</p>
 <p>It now supports remote PHYs, &#09;&#09;which allow the controller to perform MDIO type
 accesses &#09;&#09;to a remote transceiver by using message pages defined
 &#09;&#09;through MRBE (MultiRate Backplane Ethernet). This is &#09;&#09;found on
-machines such as Dell PowerEdge M610 &#09;&#09;Blade.[<a
+machines such as the Dell PowerEdge M610 &#09;&#09;Blade.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235818"
 target="_top">r235818</a>]</p>
 </li>
@@ -699,24 +703,24 @@ target="_top">r235818</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=bge&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">bge</span>(4)</span></a> and
-brgphy(4) driver have been &#09; improved:</p>
+brgphy(4) drivers have been &#09; improved:</p>
 
 <ul>
 <li>
-<p>A bug which could prevent the &#09;&#09;DMA functionality from working correctly, has
-been &#09;&#09;fixed.[<a
+<p>A bug which could prevent &#09;&#09;DMA functionality from working correctly has been
+&#09;&#09;fixed.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229350"
 target="_top">r229350</a>]</p>
 </li>
 
 <li>
-<p>It now works with PCI-X BCM 5704 &#09;&#09;controller that connected to AMD-8131 PCI-X
-bridge.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233495"
+<p>It now works with a PCI-X BCM 5704 &#09;&#09;controller that is connected to AMD-8131
+PCI-X bridge.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233495"
 target="_top">r233495</a>]</p>
 </li>
 
 <li>
-<p>It now supports &#09;&#09;BCM 5720 and BCM 5720C PHY, and BCM 57780 1000BASE-T
+<p>It now supports &#09;&#09;the BCM 5720 and BCM 5720C PHY, and the BCM 57780 1000BASE-T
 &#09;&#09;media interface.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229357"
 target="_top">r229357</a>, <a
@@ -743,11 +747,11 @@ href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">cxgbe</span>(4)</span></a> and
 &#09; <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=cxgb&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
-<span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">cxgb</span>(4)</span></a> driver
-has been updated to firmware version &#09; 1.5.2.0. This now supports device
+<span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">cxgb</span>(4)</span></a> drivers
+have been updated to firmware version &#09; 1.5.2.0. They now support device
 configuration via a &#09; plain text configuration file, IPv6 hardware checksumming,
-&#09; IPv6 TSO and LRO, <tt class="literal">loadfw</tt> command in the &#09; cxgbetool(8)
-utility which allows to install a firmware to &#09; the card, <a
+&#09; IPv6 TSO and LRO, a <tt class="literal">loadfw</tt> command in the &#09;
+cxgbetool(8) utility which allows installing a firmware to &#09; the card, and <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sysctl</span>(8)</span></a>
 variables under &#09; <code class="varname">dev.t4nex.<tt
@@ -761,7 +765,7 @@ target="_top">r237925</a>]</p>
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=dc&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE"><span
  class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">dc</span>(4)</span></a> driver now
 supports &#09; NVIDIA (ULi) M5261/M5263 PCI FastEthernet controllers, which &#09; are
-found on ULi M1563 South Bridge and M1689 Bridge.[<a
+found on the ULi M1563 South Bridge and M1689 Bridge.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229334"
 target="_top">r229334</a>]</p>
 
@@ -774,8 +778,8 @@ href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi
 from working has been fixed. A new &#09; <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sysctl</span>(8)</span></a>
-variables under &#09; <code class="varname">dev.et.<tt
-class="replaceable"><i>N</i></tt>.stats</code> &#09; have been added for hardware MAC
+variable under &#09; <code class="varname">dev.et.<tt
+class="replaceable"><i>N</i></tt>.stats</code> &#09; has been added for hardware MAC
 statistics.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229711"
 target="_top">r229711</a>, <a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229717"
@@ -804,8 +808,8 @@ href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">miibus</span>(4)</span></a> bus
 driver now &#09; supports device hints &#09; <code class="varname">hint.miibus.<tt
 class="replaceable"><i>N</i></tt>.phymask</code> &#09; for PHY addresses being probed.
-This is useful to manually &#09; probe PHYs which do not implement basic register set of
-&#09; IEEE 802.3. Also, the <a
+This is useful to manually &#09; probe PHYs which do not implement basic the register set
+of &#09; IEEE 802.3. Also, the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=miibus&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">miibus</span>(4)</span></a> driver
 has been &#09; changed to a hinted bus, allowing to add child devices via &#09; hints and
@@ -834,7 +838,7 @@ target="_top">r232137</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=oce&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">oce</span>(4)</span></a> driver,
-which &#09; supports Emulex OneConnect 10Gbit Ethernet card, has been &#09; added.[<a
+which &#09; supports Emulex OneConnect 10Gbit Ethernet cards, has been &#09; added.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=231663"
 target="_top">r231663</a>]</p>
 
@@ -848,8 +852,8 @@ target="_top">r236004</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=re&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE"><span
  class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">re</span>(4)</span></a> driver now
-&#09; supports RTL8411 PCIe Gigabit Ethernet controller. A bug &#09; which could prevent
-WoL (Wake-on-LAN) from working on &#09; RTL8168E has been fixed.[<a
+&#09; supports the RTL8411 PCIe Gigabit Ethernet controller. A bug &#09; which could
+prevent WoL (Wake-on-LAN) from working on &#09; RTL8168E has been fixed.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229529"
 target="_top">r229529</a>, <a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=231731"
@@ -870,8 +874,8 @@ controllers, has been added.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=228100"
 target="_top">r228100</a>]</p>
 
-<p>The smcphy(4); driver now supports &#09; Seeq Technology 80220 PHY. This is found on
-Adaptec &#09; AIC-6915 Starfire Ethernet controller supported by the &#09; <a
+<p>The smcphy(4) driver now supports the &#09; Seeq Technology 80220 PHY. This is found
+on Adaptec &#09; AIC-6915 Starfire Ethernet controllers supported by the &#09; <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sf&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE"><span
  class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sf</span>(4)</span></a> driver.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233485"
@@ -880,24 +884,24 @@ target="_top">r233485</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ti&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE"><span
  class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ti</span>(4)</span></a> driver now
-&#09; supports <a
+&#09; supports the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=altq&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">altq</span>(4)</span></a>
-framework, reporting link-state &#09; change, and <a
+framework, reporting link-state &#09; changes, and <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sysctl</span>(8)</span></a>
 variables under &#09; <code class="varname">dev.ti.<tt
-class="replaceable"><i>N</i></tt></code> for &#09; the interrupt moderation
-parameters.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229417"
+class="replaceable"><i>N</i></tt></code> for &#09; interrupt moderation parameters.[<a
+href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229417"
 target="_top">r229417</a>, <a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229438"
 target="_top">r229438</a>]</p>
 
-<p>A bug in <a
+<p>A bug in the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ti&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE"><span
  class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ti</span>(4)</span></a> driver which
-could &#09; prevent it from working correctly with <tt class="literal">PAE</tt> &#09;
-kernel option, has been fixed.[<a
+could &#09; prevent it from working correctly with the <tt class="literal">PAE</tt> &#09;
+kernel option has been fixed.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229441"
 target="_top">r229441</a>]</p>
 
@@ -919,7 +923,7 @@ target="_top">r229641</a>]</p>
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=xnb&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">xnb</span>(4)</span></a> Xen
 Paravirtualized &#09; Backend Ethernet Driver (netback) has been updated. This is &#09;
-attached via newbus framework and works properly in both &#09; HVM and PVM mode.[<a
+attached via the newbus framework and works properly in both &#09; HVM and PVM mode.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=231697"
 target="_top">r231697</a>]</p>
 </div>
@@ -932,8 +936,8 @@ target="_top">r231697</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=if_bridge&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">if_bridge</span>(4)</span></a>
-pseudo interface &#09; now supports reporting link-state change depending on status &#09;
-of the member interfaces.[<a
+pseudo-interface &#09; now supports reporting link-state changes depending on the status
+&#09; of the member interfaces.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236051"
 target="_top">r236051</a>]</p>
 
@@ -949,36 +953,36 @@ target="_top">r234597</a>]</p>
 skipto tablearg ip from any to any via table(42) in
 </pre>
 
-<p>FreeBSD <a
+<p>The FreeBSD <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ip6&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ip6</span>(4)</span></a> protocol
-stack now has been improved in terms &#09; of its performance. Benchmarking can be found
-at <a href="http://people.freebsd.org/~bz/bench/"
+stack has been improved in terms &#09; of its performance. Benchmarking can be found at
+<a href="http://people.freebsd.org/~bz/bench/"
 target="_top">http://people.freebsd.org/~bz/bench/</a>.</p>;
 
-<p>FreeBSD <a
+<p>The FreeBSD <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ip6&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ip6</span>(4)</span></a> protocol
-stack now &#09; supports multiple FIB.[<a
+stack now &#09; supports multiple FIBs.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=232292"
 target="_top">r232292</a>]</p>
 
 <p>An IPv6 default route configured via &#09; Router Advertisement messages is now
 reinstalled correctly &#09; when the default route is manually removed and then another
-&#09; same RA message is received.[<a
+&#09; RA message is received for the same route.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=230604"
 target="_top">r230604</a>]</p>
 
-<p>A bug which could return an incorrect &#09; value of <tt
+<p>A bug which could return an incorrect &#09; value for the <tt
 class="literal">IPV6_MULTICASE_HOPS</tt> socket option &#09; has been fixed.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=227885"
 target="_top">r227885</a>]</p>
 
 <p>A new <a
-href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
-<span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sysctl</span>(8)</span></a> &#09;
-<tt class="literal">NET_RT_IFLISTL</tt> has been added. This &#09; queries the address
-list and works on extended and &#09; extensible structures <code
+href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&sektion=3&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
+<span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sysctl</span>(3)</span></a> name
+&#09; <tt class="literal">NET_RT_IFLISTL</tt> has been added. This &#09; queries the
+address list and works on extended and &#09; extensible structures <code
 class="varname">if_msghdrl</code> and &#09; <code class="varname">ifa_msghdrl</code>
 without breaking the &#09; ABI.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=231768"
@@ -992,7 +996,7 @@ href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi
  class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">em</span>(4)</span></a>, lem(4), &#09;
 <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=igb&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
-<span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">igb</span>(4)</span></a>. and <a
+<span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">igb</span>(4)</span></a>, and <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=re&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE"><span
  class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">re</span>(4)</span></a> drivers now
 support this &#09; framework. The technical details can be found at <a
@@ -1003,7 +1007,7 @@ target="_top">r231650</a>, <a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235527"
 target="_top">r235527</a>]</p>
 
-<p>FreeBSD <a
+<p>The FreeBSD <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sctp&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sctp</span>(4)</span></a> protocol
 stack now &#09; supports a new <a
@@ -1013,39 +1017,40 @@ variable &#09; <code class="varname">net
 to <tt class="literal">1</tt>, no <tt class="literal">ABORT</tt> is sent &#09; back in
 response to an incoming <tt class="literal">INIT</tt>. If &#09; this is set to <tt
 class="literal">2</tt>, no &#09; <tt class="literal">ABORT</tt> is sent back in response
-to an out &#09; of the blue packet. If set to <tt class="literal">0</tt> &#09; (the
+to an &#09; out-of-the-blue packet. If set to <tt class="literal">0</tt> &#09; (the
 default), <tt class="literal">ABORT</tt>s are sent.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=231045"
 target="_top">r231045</a>]</p>
 
 <p>A bug which could cause a system panic &#09; when <tt
 class="literal">SCTP_RECVINFO</tt> or &#09; <tt class="literal">SCTP_NXTINFO</tt> is
-specified to &#09; <a
+specified to the &#09; <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=getsockopt&sektion=2&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">getsockopt</span>(2)</span></a>
-system call, has been fixed.[<a
+system call has been fixed.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=231049"
 target="_top">r231049</a>]</p>
 
-<p>FreeBSD <a
+<p>The FreeBSD <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sctp&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sctp</span>(4)</span></a> protocol
-stack now &#09; supports <tt class="literal">SCTP_REMOTE_UDP_ENCAPS_PORT</tt> &#09;
+stack now &#09; supports the <tt class="literal">SCTP_REMOTE_UDP_ENCAPS_PORT</tt> &#09;
 socket option.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=231070"
 target="_top">r231070</a>, <a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=231140"
 target="_top">r231140</a>]</p>
 
-<p><tt class="literal">SO_PROTOCOL</tt> and &#09; <tt class="literal">SO_PROTOTYPE</tt>
-socket options have been &#09; added. These returns the socket protocol number.[<a
+<p>The <tt class="literal">SO_PROTOCOL</tt> and &#09; <tt
+class="literal">SO_PROTOTYPE</tt> socket options have been &#09; added. These return the
+socket protocol number.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=232805"
 target="_top">r232805</a>]</p>
 
-<p><tt class="literal">TCP_KEEPINIT</tt>, &#09; <tt class="literal">TCP_KEEPIDLE</tt>,
-&#09; <tt class="literal">TCP_KEEPINTVL</tt>, and &#09; <tt
-class="literal">TCP_KEEPCNT</tt> socket options have been &#09; added. These allow to
-control initial timeout, idle time, &#09; idle resend interval, and idle send count in a
-per-socket &#09; basis.[<a
+<p>The <tt class="literal">TCP_KEEPINIT</tt>, &#09; <tt
+class="literal">TCP_KEEPIDLE</tt>, &#09; <tt class="literal">TCP_KEEPINTVL</tt>, and
+&#09; <tt class="literal">TCP_KEEPCNT</tt> socket options have been &#09; added. These
+allow controlling initial timeout, idle time, &#09; idle resend interval, and idle send
+count on a per-socket &#09; basis.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=232945"
 target="_top">r232945</a>]</p>
 </div>
@@ -1081,7 +1086,7 @@ href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi
 driver now supports old <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=loader&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">loader</span>(8)</span></a>
-tunables, &#09; <code class="varname">hw.ata.ata_dma</code> and &#09; <code
+tunables &#09; <code class="varname">hw.ata.ata_dma</code> and &#09; <code
 class="varname">hw.ata.atapi_dma</code>, for backward &#09; compatibility.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=231251"
 target="_top">r231251</a>]</p>
@@ -1124,11 +1129,11 @@ href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi
 supports &#09; Audio CDs in the same way as <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=acd&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">acd</span>(4)</span></a> did. It
-will &#09; report 2352-byte sector to <a
+will &#09; report a 2352-byte sector size to the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=geom&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">geom</span>(4)</span></a>
-subsystem and use &#09; <tt class="literal">READ CD</tt> command for reading the data.
-&#09; This fixes an interoperability issue with <a
+subsystem and use &#09; the <tt class="literal">READ CD</tt> command for reading the
+data. &#09; This fixes an interoperability issue with <a
 href="http://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/ports/head/multimedia/vlc/pkg-descr?revision=HEAD"><tt
 class="filename">multimedia/vlc</tt></a>.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=230014"
@@ -1146,7 +1151,7 @@ device instance. The following &#09; val
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236677"
 target="_top">r236677</a>]</p>
 
-<div class="informaltable"><a id="AEN630" name="AEN630"></a>
+<div class="informaltable"><a id="AEN632" name="AEN632"></a>
 <table border="0" frame="void" width="100%" class="CALSTABLE">
 <col />
 <col />
@@ -1191,7 +1196,7 @@ target="_top">r236677</a>]</p>
 </table>
 </div>
 
-<p>When it was <tt class="literal">NONE</tt>, the device did not &#09; report the logical
+<p>When it was <tt class="literal">NONE</tt>, the device did not &#09; report logical
 block provisioning support via respective &#09; VPD pages. One can set a specific method
 for testing and it &#09; will be disabled automatically when not supported on the &#09;
 device.</p>
@@ -1199,9 +1204,9 @@ device.</p>
 <p>The <b class="application">MIRROR</b> &#09; <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=geom&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">geom</span>(4)</span></a> class
-now supports &#09; <tt class="literal">BIO_DELETE</tt>. This means &#09; <tt
-class="literal">TRIM</tt> command will be issued on the &#09; supported devices when
-deleting data.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=238500"
+now supports &#09; <tt class="literal">BIO_DELETE</tt>. This means the &#09; <tt
+class="literal">TRIM</tt> command will be issued on &#09; supported devices when deleting
+data.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=238500"
 target="_top">r238500</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The &#09; <b class="application">MULTIPATH</b> <a
@@ -1212,7 +1217,7 @@ hybrid of Active/Active and &#09; Active
 the &#09; geom provider, manual configuration without on-disk &#09; metadata, and <tt
 class="command">add</tt>, &#09; <tt class="command">remove</tt>, <tt
 class="command">fail</tt>, &#09; <tt class="command">restore</tt>, <tt
-class="command">configure</tt> &#09; subcommands in <a
+class="command">configure</tt> &#09; subcommands in the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=gmultipath&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">gmultipath</span>(8)</span></a>
 utility to manage the &#09; configured paths.[<a
@@ -1224,13 +1229,13 @@ target="_top">r234916</a>]</p>
 <p>The &#09; <b class="application">PART_LDM</b> <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=geom&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">geom</span>(4)</span></a> class
-has &#09; been added. This partition scheme supports for Logical Disk &#09; Manager,
+has &#09; been added. This partition scheme has support for Logical Disk &#09; Manager,
 which is also known as dynamic volumes in Microsoft &#09; Windows NT. Note that JBOD,
 RAID0, and RAID5 volumes are &#09; not supported yet.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234406"
 target="_top">r234406</a>]</p>
 
-<p><b class="application">PART_MBR</b> &#09; <a
+<p>The <b class="application">PART_MBR</b> &#09; <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=geom&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">geom</span>(4)</span></a> class
 now allows a primary or extended Linux &#09; swap partition to be used as the system dump
@@ -1240,21 +1245,21 @@ target="_top">r230763</a>]</p>
 <p>[amd64, i386] The &#09; <b class="application">RAID</b> <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=geom&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">geom</span>(4)</span></a> class is
-now &#09; included in <tt class="filename">GENERIC</tt> kernel.[<a
+now &#09; included in the <tt class="filename">GENERIC</tt> kernel.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235877"
 target="_top">r235877</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <b class="application">RAID</b> &#09; <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=geom&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">geom</span>(4)</span></a> class
-now supports disks with over 2TB capacity &#09; for Intel metadata format.[<a
+now supports disks with over 2TB capacity &#09; for the Intel metadata format.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=230244"
 target="_top">r230244</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <b class="application">RAID</b> &#09; <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=geom&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">geom</span>(4)</span></a> class
-now supports DDF metadata format, which &#09; is defined in the SNIA Common RAID Disk
+now supports the DDF metadata format, which &#09; is defined in the SNIA Common RAID Disk
 Data Format &#09; Specification v2.0.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235874"
 target="_top">r235874</a>]</p>
@@ -1265,8 +1270,8 @@ href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi
 and &#09; the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=mkulzma&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">mkulzma</span>(8)</span></a>
-utility have been added. This class &#09; supports lzma compressed images like &#09; <b
-class="application">UZIP</b> <a
+utility have been added. This class &#09; supports lzma compressed images like the &#09;
+<b class="application">UZIP</b> <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=geom&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">geom</span>(4)</span></a> class
 and the &#09; <a
@@ -1300,15 +1305,15 @@ target="_top">r230019</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ixgbe&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ixgbe</span>(4)</span></a> driver
-now supports &#09; Intel X540 adapter.[<a
+now supports &#09; the Intel X540 adapter.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=230775"
 target="_top">r230775</a>]</p>
 
-<p>A bug in <a
+<p>A bug in the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=mfi&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">mfi</span>(4)</span></a> driver
-has been &#09; fixed. It could cause some inconsistency due to missing of &#09; interrupt
-acknowledge and output the following log &#09; message:[<a
+has been &#09; fixed. It could cause some inconsistencies due to missed &#09; interrupt
+acknowledgements and output the following log &#09; message:[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=227533"
 target="_top">r227533</a>]</p>
 
@@ -1372,7 +1377,7 @@ target="_top">r229107</a>]</p>
 <li>
 <p>It now supports a timeout on &#09; positive name cache entries on the client side. A
 new &#09; mount option <code class="varname">nametimeo</code> has been added &#09; and
-set to <tt class="literal">60</tt> (in second) by &#09; default.[<a
+set to <tt class="literal">60</tt> (in seconds) by &#09; default.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233326"
 target="_top">r233326</a>]</p>
 </li>
@@ -1386,8 +1391,8 @@ target="_top">r234740</a>]</p>
 <li>
 <p>A bug has been fixed. When a &#09; process writes to an mmap-backed file on an NFS
 &#09; filesystem, flushing changes to the data could fail &#09; under some circumstances
-such as errors due to &#09; permission mismatch and this failure could not detected &#09;
-as an error. A new <a
+such as errors due to &#09; permission mismatch, and this failure could not be detected
+&#09; as an error. A new <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sysctl</span>(8)</span></a>
 variable &#09; <code class="varname">vfs.nfs.nfs_keep_dirty_on_error</code> has &#09;
@@ -1402,13 +1407,13 @@ target="_top">r233730</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=nfsv4&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">nfsv4</span>(4)</span></a>
-filesystem now &#09; supports a new <a
+filesystem now &#09; supports a <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sysctl</span>(8)</span></a>
 variable &#09; <code class="varname">vfs.nfsd.disable_checkutf8</code>. This &#09;
-disables the check for a UTF-8 compliance in the &#09; filenames. This is disabled by
-default. Note that &#09; enabling this may help some interoperability issue but &#09;
-results in an NFSv4 server that is non-RFC 3530 &#09; compliant.[<a
+disables the check for UTF-8 compliance in &#09; filenames. This is disabled by default.
+Note that &#09; enabling this may help wht some interoperability issues but &#09; results
+in an NFSv4 server that is not RFC 3530 &#09; compliant.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229799"
 target="_top">r229799</a>]</p>
 </li>
@@ -1424,19 +1429,19 @@ target="_top">r234511</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=tmpfs&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">tmpfs</span>(5)</span></a>
-filesystem now &#09; supports a new <a
+filesystem now &#09; supports a <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sysctl</span>(8)</span></a>
-variable &#09; <code class="varname">vfs.tmpfs.memory_reserved</code> to set amount &#09;
-of required free pages when <a
+variable &#09; <code class="varname">vfs.tmpfs.memory_reserved</code> to set the amount
+&#09; of required free pages when <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=tmpfs&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">tmpfs</span>(5)</span></a>
 attempts to &#09; allocate a new node.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234849"
 target="_top">r234849</a>]</p>
 
-<p>FreeBSD ZFS filesystem has been &#09; updated by merging improvements in illumos
-project. The &#09; following changes are made:[<a
+<p>FreeBSD's ZFS filesystem has been &#09; updated by merging improvements from the
+illumos project. The &#09; following changes are made:[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229578"
 target="_top">r229578</a>, <a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=232328"
@@ -1449,25 +1454,25 @@ class="literal">written</tt>, have been 
 </li>
 
 <li>
-<p><a
+<p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zfs&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">zfs</span>(8)</span></a> <tt
-class="command">send</tt> command &#09; now reports estimated size of the stream.</p>
+class="command">send</tt> command &#09; now reports an estimated size of the stream.</p>
 </li>
 
 <li>
-<p><a
+<p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zfs&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">zfs</span>(8)</span></a> <tt
-class="command">destroy</tt> command &#09; now reports estimated space which would be
-reclaimed when &#09; <code class="option">-n</code> flag is specified.</p>
+class="command">destroy</tt> command &#09; now reports an estimate of the space which
+would be reclaimed, &#09; when <code class="option">-n</code> is specified.</p>
 </li>
 
 <li>
-<p><a
+<p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zfs&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">zfs</span>(8)</span></a> <tt
-class="command">get</tt> command now &#09; supports <code class="option">-t <tt
+class="command">get</tt> command now &#09; supports the <code class="option">-t <tt
 class="replaceable"><i>type</i></tt></code> &#09; flag to specify the data type.</p>
 </li>
 </ul>
@@ -1475,7 +1480,7 @@ class="replaceable"><i>type</i></tt></co
 <p>A simple script &#09; <tt class="filename">zfsboottest.sh</tt> has been added to the
 &#09; source tree. This checks if the system is configured &#09; correctly when using ZFS
 as the root filesystem. The script &#09; is located at &#09; <tt
-class="filename">/usr/src/tools/tools/zfsboottest.sh</tt> and &#09; it uses <tt
+class="filename">/usr/src/tools/tools/zfsboottest.sh</tt> and &#09; it uses the <tt
 class="filename">zfsboottest</tt> binary program in the &#09; same directory.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=227705"
 target="_top">r227705</a>]</p>
@@ -1500,7 +1505,7 @@ class="replaceable"><i>poolname</i></tt>
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sysctl</span>(8)</span></a>
 variable &#09; <code class="varname">vfs.zfs.txg.timeout</code> has been changed from
-&#09; read-only to writable one.</p>
+&#09; read-only to writable.</p>
 </div>
 </div>
 
@@ -1518,7 +1523,7 @@ target="_top">r238481</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=camcontrol&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">camcontrol</span>(8)</span></a>
-utility now &#09;supports <tt class="command">fwdownload</tt> subcommand for firmware
+utility now &#09;supports a <tt class="command">fwdownload</tt> subcommand for firmware
 &#09;update on SCSI devices from Hitachi, HP, IBM, Plextor, &#09;Quantum, and Seagate.
 This subcommand will reprogram the &#09;firmware on devices connected over an ATA/SATA
 transport.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=237740"
@@ -1539,14 +1544,15 @@ target="_top">r230597</a>]</p>
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=dump&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">dump</span>(8)</span></a> utility
 now uses 53 &#09;characters for the device names in &#09;<tt
-class="filename">/etc/dumpdates</tt>. This was limited to 32 &#09;characters.[<a
+class="filename">/etc/dumpdates</tt>. This was previously limited to 32
+&#09;characters.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=230047"
 target="_top">r230047</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=fetch&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">fetch</span>(1)</span></a> utility
-now correctly &#09;supports percent-encoded user and password part in a &#09;URL.[<a
+now correctly &#09;supports a percent-encoded user and password part in a &#09;URL.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235253"
 target="_top">r235253</a>]</p>
 
@@ -1563,8 +1569,8 @@ target="_top">r230410</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=fopen&sektion=3&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">fopen</span>(3)</span></a>
-function now supports &#09;<code class="option">x</code> (an exclusive create-and-open
-mode) option &#09;in ISO/IEC 9899:2011, C11 standard.[<a
+function now supports &#09;the <code class="option">x</code> (an exclusive
+create-and-open mode) option &#09;in the ISO/IEC 9899:2011 and C11 standards.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229845"
 target="_top">r229845</a>]</p>
 
@@ -1572,14 +1578,14 @@ target="_top">r229845</a>]</p>
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=gcc&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">gcc</span>(1)</span></a> compiler
 has &#09;been fixed. It could lead to incorrect calculations when &#09;<code
-class="option">-ffast-math</code> flag is specified.[<a
+class="option">-ffast-math</code> is specified.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234023"
 target="_top">r234023</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=hastd&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">hastd</span>(8)</span></a> daemon
-now supports to specify filename of the process ID file in <a
+now supports specifying the filename of its process ID file in <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=hast.conf&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">hast.conf</span>(5)</span></a>.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229509"
@@ -1588,7 +1594,7 @@ target="_top">r229509</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ifconfig&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ifconfig</span>(8)</span></a>
-utility now &#09;supports <tt class="literal">vlanhwcsum</tt> parameter to set or
+utility now &#09;supports a <tt class="literal">vlanhwcsum</tt> parameter to set or
 &#09;reset checksum offloading capability on VLANs.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=231221"
 target="_top">r231221</a>]</p>
@@ -1596,15 +1602,14 @@ target="_top">r231221</a>]</p>
 <p>A bug in the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ifconfig&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ifconfig</span>(8)</span></a>
-utility &#09;which could display an error message in a jail with no IPv6 &#09;support,
-has been fixed.[<a
-href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=238872"
+utility &#09;which could display an error message in a jail with no IPv6 &#09;support has
+been fixed.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=238872"
 target="_top">r238872</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ifconfig&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ifconfig</span>(8)</span></a>
-utility now &#09;supports <tt class="literal">carp &#09;<tt
+utility now &#09;supports a <tt class="literal">carp &#09;<tt
 class="replaceable"><i>state</i></tt></tt> parameter to set &#09;the state to <tt
 class="literal">backup</tt> or &#09;<tt class="literal">master</tt> forcibly.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=232486"
@@ -1613,7 +1618,7 @@ target="_top">r232486</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=jail&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">jail</span>(8)</span></a> utility
-now supports &#09;configuration file (<a
+now supports a &#09;configuration file (<a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=jail.conf&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">jail.conf</span>(5)</span></a>)
 for complex &#09;configurations.[<a
@@ -1623,16 +1628,16 @@ target="_top">r235839</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=kdump&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">kdump</span>(1)</span></a> utility
-now supports &#09;<code class="option">-p <tt class="replaceable"><i>pid</i></tt></code>
-option to &#09;accept either a process ID or a thread ID.[<a
-href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=237789"
+now supports a &#09;<code class="option">-p <tt
+class="replaceable"><i>pid</i></tt></code> option to &#09;accept either a process ID or a
+thread ID.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=237789"
 target="_top">r237789</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=kenv&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">kenv</span>(1)</span></a> utility
-now supports &#09;<code class="option">-v</code> flag to display an entry in &#09;<tt
-class="literal">name=value</tt> format, and <code class="option">-N</code> &#09;flag to
+now supports a &#09;<code class="option">-v</code> flag to display an entry in &#09;<tt
+class="literal">name=value</tt> format, and a <code class="option">-N</code> &#09;flag to
 display only the name.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236118"
 target="_top">r236118</a>]</p>
@@ -1640,12 +1645,12 @@ target="_top">r236118</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=kldload&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">kldload</span>(8)</span></a>
-utility now supports &#09;<code class="option">-n</code> flag to ignore the error status
-when the &#09;specified module is already loaded.[<a
+utility now supports a &#09;<code class="option">-n</code> flag to ignore the error
+status when the &#09;specified module is already loaded.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233560"
 target="_top">r233560</a>]</p>
 
-<p><b class="application">libedit</b> has &#09;been updated to NetBSD snapshot as of 28
+<p><b class="application">libedit</b> has &#09;been updated to a NetBSD snapshot as of 28
 December, &#09;2009.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=237738"
 target="_top">r237738</a>]</p>
@@ -1687,18 +1692,18 @@ target="_top">r230919</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=pciconf&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">pciconf</span>(8)</span></a>
-utility now supports &#09;<code class="option">-e</code> flag to display PCI error
-details in the &#09;listing mode. When this is specified, the status of any error

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