From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Feb 1 21:20:01 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 53C6F1065672 for ; Mon, 1 Feb 2010 21:20:01 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::28]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2E2D08FC0A for ; Mon, 1 Feb 2010 21:20:01 +0000 (UTC) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.3/8.14.3) with ESMTP id o11LK1Er013348 for ; Mon, 1 Feb 2010 21:20:01 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.3/8.14.3/Submit) id o11LK14M013347; Mon, 1 Feb 2010 21:20:01 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Mon, 1 Feb 2010 21:20:01 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <201002012120.o11LK14M013347@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Warren Block Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 048971065670 for ; Mon, 1 Feb 2010 21:16:30 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (www.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::21]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E34128FC23 for ; Mon, 1 Feb 2010 21:16:30 +0000 (UTC) Received: from www.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by www.freebsd.org (8.14.3/8.14.3) with ESMTP id o11LGUN8032103 for ; Mon, 1 Feb 2010 21:16:30 GMT (envelope-from nobody@www.freebsd.org) Received: (from nobody@localhost) by www.freebsd.org (8.14.3/8.14.3/Submit) id o11LGU2H032102; Mon, 1 Feb 2010 21:16:30 GMT (envelope-from nobody) Message-Id: <201002012116.o11LGU2H032102@www.freebsd.org> Date: Mon, 1 Feb 2010 21:16:30 GMT From: Warren Block To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: www-3.1 Cc: Subject: docs/143454: [patch] mtree.8 man page errors X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 01 Feb 2010 21:20:01 -0000 >Number: 143454 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [patch] mtree.8 man page errors >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Mon Feb 01 21:20:00 UTC 2010 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Warren Block >Release: 8-STABLE >Organization: >Environment: FreeBSD lightning 8.0-STABLE FreeBSD 8.0-STABLE #0: Sun Jan 31 11:43:29 MST 2010 root@lightning:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/LIGHTNING i386 >Description: Missing words and confused tenses in the mtree(8) man page. >How-To-Repeat: man 8 mtree >Fix: Patch attached. Beyond this, someone more familiar with mtree could improve this man page by adding a simple example of creating a spec and comparing it. Patch attached with submission follows: --- mtree.8.orig 2010-02-01 13:25:32.000000000 -0700 +++ mtree.8 2010-02-01 14:07:30.000000000 -0700 @@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ specification. .It Fl i Indent the output 4 spaces each time a directory level is descended when -create a specification with the +creating a specification with the .Fl c option. This does not affect either the /set statements or the comment before each @@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ except a status of 2 is returned if the file hierarchy did not match the specification. .It Fl w -Make some errorconditions non-fatal warnings. +Make some error conditions non-fatal warnings. .It Fl x Do not descend below mount points in the file hierarchy. .It Fl f Ar file @@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ .Pp If this option is specified twice, the two specifications are compared to each other rather than to the file hierarchy. -The specifications be sorted like output generated using +The specifications will be sorted like output generated using .Fl c . The output format in this case is somewhat remniscent of .Xr comm 1 , >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: