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From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Wed, 4 Jan 2012 13:42:27 +0000 (UTC)
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall
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bcr         2012-01-04 13:42:27 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  A few updates found while translating:
  
  - add &nbsp; between number and unit
  - move a sentence stop out of an ulink description
  - use &windows; in titles to be consistent (although the "tm" won't show up)
  - Use author entity in Kris Moore's case
  - Replace FreeBSD with &os; in a few places
  - Add an extra space between a ) and the next word and
  - de-capitalize daemon to be consistent [1]
  
  [1] reported by:    lme
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.24      +10 -10    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.sgml