From owner-freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Wed Sep 19 15:31:13 2018 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6C6A6109EE7B for ; Wed, 19 Sep 2018 15:31:13 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from rockyhotas@post.com) Received: from mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (mailman.ysv.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::50:5]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0D831857A0 for ; Wed, 19 Sep 2018 15:31:13 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from rockyhotas@post.com) Received: by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) id C6D78109EE7A; Wed, 19 Sep 2018 15:31:12 +0000 (UTC) Delivered-To: doc@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B594D109EE78 for ; Wed, 19 Sep 2018 15:31:12 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from rockyhotas@post.com) Received: from mout.gmx.com (mout.gmx.com [74.208.4.201]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (Client CN "mout.gmx.com", Issuer "GeoTrust RSA CA 2018" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 44C7E8579D for ; Wed, 19 Sep 2018 15:31:12 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from rockyhotas@post.com) Received: from [79.31.77.142] ([79.31.77.142]) by web-mail.mail.com (3c-app-mailcom-lxa05.server.lan [10.76.45.6]) (via HTTP); Wed, 19 Sep 2018 17:25:56 +0200 MIME-Version: 1.0 Message-ID: From: "Rocky Hotas" To: doc@freebsd.org Subject: Revision of LDAP server section of Handbook Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Date: Wed, 19 Sep 2018 17:25:56 +0200 Importance: normal Sensitivity: Normal X-Priority: 3 X-Provags-ID: V03:K1:UfDmsBPoufYKAL+UTmgZ7AYWK24IOx4XnUNtgUerGbCbu/g9ZYW4jQGkkDS13JL11OXSB kH6NxLqLlHfZ/HiGoBRcg3JRcSMcKN/FnaGbHa3nK8IQ7ObX5WIwsqLxUr4VJiNuJnLOJ8gsrEdM UI3+XPlYixMGgWXoJJSyTGbbonY4uzU2Inol7PzxVqoRLqyC7MFfxscpPBlRmk3RsFiF5RMyF1GT 2Hs8W4IyGWaKtnzOo3c+X7AceHxE+BDrR4ZkfKjMt2+23ql55dxOQ3zN1N4seYWE7lyHEWAems9R WY= X-UI-Out-Filterresults: notjunk:1;V01:K0:G+6IWyKbE3g=:HnXBTxWxO+ql4UxRKnqAzT QnE5n+1ecAWif2wrNusk1T8VAls73tquwnaEvI6iW5xWoS85LfC+1AvRSlKdcN7lmlJjEMD0e Mvux/pS/o06s4RiWCSd9yGNXUUCs1QU3ar3NgHsFOwd79ZDEtSqj7rGYmdsUN7/bBnUTb9909 LYAv6ajJgEMrl9YFfUXLCqGEJNHe1g137+Q9iS3wDHZRb5WSPvPMq4GpfthsiVXl7Bilq1f7Q tJ/mkxGQawJKRdY2BT37RJC4Hej6g1JRRk/bJyTR6rRmQ0zBomOjCk49rBQ0A/smnEVuyBFlW 0pe+wGnozd4vBDHcXE174M6AGVq59HNzVhL/3aAq9xoU2Cem6ImKoD/yzVg1D2LMd7g5QPC8M zZzn+0b6Z6qWvG8RYu1jZlZRjSysbWfgBilA6MYs7RbRYBHX1QJTfIN2f/ra1g67zeUiegjJD mn70VEo2PG1u5et+NoJBPGuxrJcxwnbWOfT93Y3QM1AfombVht1G X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.27 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 19 Sep 2018 15:31:13 -0000 Hello! As in the subject, about this revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D10600 (full update of OpenLDAP server installation and configuration procedure on FreeBSD) The just submitted new version of the patch tries to provide style uniformity and conciseness to the whole text. All the previous suggestions have been applied and the text is now ended. I am a newbie and I don't know anyone. Despite having submitted several corrections and written here in the ML, still no one is following this work. The patch maybe needs only a final read and review. Is there anyone who can do it? Thank you, Rocky For more information, please refer to this previous thread: https://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/freebsd-doc/2018-July/031036.html and to these comments: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D10600#367363 https://reviews.freebsd.org/D10600#367377