From owner-freebsd-doc Sat Oct 12 6:16: 1 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C3D4E37B401 for ; Sat, 12 Oct 2002 06:15:58 -0700 (PDT) Received: from postal.netaxs.com (postal.netaxs.com [207.8.186.39]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4FC6243EB3 for ; Sat, 12 Oct 2002 06:15:58 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from clear@alum.mit.edu) Received: from alum.mit.edu (root@unix5.netaxs.com [207.8.186.7]) by postal.netaxs.com (8.12.0.Beta7/8.12.0.Beta7) with ESMTP id g9CDFtkp012683 for ; Sat, 12 Oct 2002 09:15:56 -0400 (EDT) Message-ID: <3DA82087.B2234A47@alum.mit.edu> Date: Sat, 12 Oct 2002 09:15:51 -0400 From: Jed Clear Organization: Dis X-Mailer: Mozilla 4.79 [en] (Win98; U) X-Accept-Language: en,pdf MIME-Version: 1.0 To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Minor web page grammar/ports search Content-Type: multipart/signed; protocol="application/x-pkcs7-signature"; micalg=sha1; boundary="------------ms9AE52DA42465827CB0877C9B" Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org This is a cryptographically signed message in MIME format. --------------ms9AE52DA42465827CB0877C9B Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit On http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/ports.cgi?query=tripwire&stype=all there are some sentences that describe the search options, e.g. '"New" print ports which...'. I think there should either be some punctuation between "New" and print, perhaps a colon or comma. Or it should be 'prints'. All the search option descriptions on the page are the same way. The second paragraph would need 'search' changed to 'searches'. Hey, I said it was minor. -Jed --------------ms9AE52DA42465827CB0877C9B Content-Type: application/x-pkcs7-signature; name="smime.p7s" Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64 Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="smime.p7s" Content-Description: S/MIME Cryptographic Signature MIIKTAYJKoZIhvcNAQcCoIIKPTCCCjkCAQExCzAJBgUrDgMCGgUAMAsGCSqGSIb3DQEHAaCC B9gwggSiMIIEC6ADAgECAhAh2hT0UnPaoPeC0rOsgd1jMA0GCSqGSIb3DQEBBAUAMIHMMRcw FQYDVQQKEw5WZXJpU2lnbiwgSW5jLjEfMB0GA1UECxMWVmVyaVNpZ24gVHJ1c3QgTmV0d29y azFGMEQGA1UECxM9d3d3LnZlcmlzaWduLmNvbS9yZXBvc2l0b3J5L1JQQSBJbmNvcnAuIEJ5 IFJlZi4sTElBQi5MVEQoYyk5ODFIMEYGA1UEAxM/VmVyaVNpZ24gQ2xhc3MgMSBDQSBJbmRp dmlkdWFsIFN1YnNjcmliZXItUGVyc29uYSBOb3QgVmFsaWRhdGVkMB4XDTAyMDgxNDAwMDAw MFoXDTAzMDgyNTIzNTk1OVowggEUMRcwFQYDVQQKEw5WZXJpU2lnbiwgSW5jLjEfMB0GA1UE CxMWVmVyaVNpZ24gVHJ1c3QgTmV0d29yazFGMEQGA1UECxM9d3d3LnZlcmlzaWduLmNvbS9y ZXBvc2l0b3J5L1JQQSBJbmNvcnAuIGJ5IFJlZi4sTElBQi5MVEQoYyk5ODEeMBwGA1UECxMV UGVyc29uYSBOb3QgVmFsaWRhdGVkMTMwMQYDVQQLEypEaWdpdGFsIElEIENsYXNzIDEgLSBO ZXRzY2FwZSBGdWxsIFNlcnZpY2UxGDAWBgNVBAMUD0Vkd2FyZCBKLiBDbGVhcjEhMB8GCSqG SIb3DQEJARYSY2xlYXJAYWx1bS5taXQuZWR1MIGfMA0GCSqGSIb3DQEBAQUAA4GNADCBiQKB gQDBLYza4iTrH4ttwwU1bhbk6NgCmXr9yuq8eKX3r2xbqd6DwQ6ULXOmtOUUUpTIqe8SEy28 CooXW6bAfiH6TD5QCuF1gBl8fWAw8Ix0FOVMWG5oaeFH3PeM+NPdqI3qOis7BIbek5dQSkaU CLiyr3RR/ys9MrgzCllSCVboAeG6aQIDAQABo4IBODCCATQwCQYDVR0TBAIwADCBrAYDVR0g BIGkMIGhMIGeBgtghkgBhvhFAQcBATCBjjAoBggrBgEFBQcCARYcaHR0cHM6Ly93d3cudmVy aXNpZ24uY29tL0NQUzBiBggrBgEFBQcCAjBWMBUWDlZlcmlTaWduLCBJbmMuMAMCAQEaPVZl cmlTaWduJ3MgQ1BTIGluY29ycC4gYnkgcmVmZXJlbmNlIGxpYWIuIGx0ZC4gKGMpOTcgVmVy aVNpZ24wEQYJYIZIAYb4QgEBBAQDAgeAMDAGCmCGSAGG+EUBBgcEIhYgN2Q4NGVmYWNlZWFm MTg1NzFmNzFjY2VjMWE3YmMwMzAwMwYDVR0fBCwwKjAooCagJIYiaHR0cDovL2NybC52ZXJp c2lnbi5jb20vY2xhc3MxLmNybDANBgkqhkiG9w0BAQQFAAOBgQCm8+RaAwJlZhcadXnrHxtW NSWO5FtMtWGezondtUoEf1Zao27u7yTQi8mAiROA2jgCFxA+JE58xwv5M2E4VROxkqrdRyPa j2Cd8Ad+GPHkboaLmsXFzzbvPyc6FnecACDxwo2w6engukh/dP7nyGrsNJ9RpX/4PnoO7qnF T+SoBjCCAy4wggKXoAMCAQICEQDSdi6NFAw9fbKoJV2v7g11MA0GCSqGSIb3DQEBAgUAMF8x CzAJBgNVBAYTAlVTMRcwFQYDVQQKEw5WZXJpU2lnbiwgSW5jLjE3MDUGA1UECxMuQ2xhc3Mg MSBQdWJsaWMgUHJpbWFyeSBDZXJ0aWZpY2F0aW9uIEF1dGhvcml0eTAeFw05ODA1MTIwMDAw MDBaFw0wODA1MTIyMzU5NTlaMIHMMRcwFQYDVQQKEw5WZXJpU2lnbiwgSW5jLjEfMB0GA1UE CxMWVmVyaVNpZ24gVHJ1c3QgTmV0d29yazFGMEQGA1UECxM9d3d3LnZlcmlzaWduLmNvbS9y ZXBvc2l0b3J5L1JQQSBJbmNvcnAuIEJ5IFJlZi4sTElBQi5MVEQoYyk5ODFIMEYGA1UEAxM/ VmVyaVNpZ24gQ2xhc3MgMSBDQSBJbmRpdmlkdWFsIFN1YnNjcmliZXItUGVyc29uYSBOb3Qg VmFsaWRhdGVkMIGfMA0GCSqGSIb3DQEBAQUAA4GNADCBiQKBgQC7WkSKBBa7Vf0DeootlE8V eDa4DUqyb5xUv7zodyqdufBou5XZMUFweoFLuUgTVi3HCOGEQqvAopKrRFyqQvCCDgLpL/vC O7u+yScKXbawNkIztW5UiE+HSr8Z2vkV6A+HthzjzMaajn9qJJLj/OBluqexfu/J2zdqyErI CQbkmQIDAQABo3wwejARBglghkgBhvhCAQEEBAMCAQYwRwYDVR0gBEAwPjA8BgtghkgBhvhF AQcBATAtMCsGCCsGAQUFBwIBFh93d3cudmVyaXNpZ24uY29tL3JlcG9zaXRvcnkvUlBBMA8G A1UdEwQIMAYBAf8CAQAwCwYDVR0PBAQDAgEGMA0GCSqGSIb3DQEBAgUAA4GBAIi4Nzvd2pQ3 AK2qn+GBAXEekmptL/bxndPKZDjcG5gMB4ZbhRVqD7lJhaSV8Rd9Z7R/LSzdmkKewz60jqrl Cwbe8lYq+jPHvhnXU0zDvcjjF7WkSUJj7MKmFw9dWBpJPJBcVaNlIAD9GCDlX4KmsaiSxVhq wY0DPOvDzQWikK5uMYICPDCCAjgCAQEwgeEwgcwxFzAVBgNVBAoTDlZlcmlTaWduLCBJbmMu MR8wHQYDVQQLExZWZXJpU2lnbiBUcnVzdCBOZXR3b3JrMUYwRAYDVQQLEz13d3cudmVyaXNp Z24uY29tL3JlcG9zaXRvcnkvUlBBIEluY29ycC4gQnkgUmVmLixMSUFCLkxURChjKTk4MUgw RgYDVQQDEz9WZXJpU2lnbiBDbGFzcyAxIENBIEluZGl2aWR1YWwgU3Vic2NyaWJlci1QZXJz b25hIE5vdCBWYWxpZGF0ZWQCECHaFPRSc9qg94LSs6yB3WMwCQYFKw4DAhoFAKCBsTAYBgkq hkiG9w0BCQMxCwYJKoZIhvcNAQcBMBwGCSqGSIb3DQEJBTEPFw0wMjEwMTIxMzE1NTFaMCMG CSqGSIb3DQEJBDEWBBTtbSeTdB92Xdd/HIlRcAQbXAEWoDBSBgkqhkiG9w0BCQ8xRTBDMAoG CCqGSIb3DQMHMA4GCCqGSIb3DQMCAgIAgDAHBgUrDgMCBzANBggqhkiG9w0DAgIBQDANBggq hkiG9w0DAgIBKDANBgkqhkiG9w0BAQEFAASBgJI7/YTUDnXBKD3U+e+E7EgCbHmX/WyeToql frgNXmyQDY1HA+SC/4963oTikM7IELHdzHjv8vMk9+DvKj5ja4VYMEGbGe+LHJ3YVUwqdcnV OXRJc4z02iH0DNqnod7mXk+FzXIwCMAWdqvv0DElxHmrpwh9rQouhg6++wp6lSjP --------------ms9AE52DA42465827CB0877C9B-- To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message