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Cc: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@freebsd.org>, doc-committers@freebsd.org,
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Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security
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Remko Lodder wrote:
> On Mon, July 14, 2008 10:08 am, Ganbold wrote:
>   
>> Tom Rhodes wrote:
>>     
>>> trhodes     2008-07-13 18:23:57 UTC
>>>
>>>   FreeBSD doc repository
>>>
>>>   Modified files:
>>>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml
>>>   Log:
>>>   Rewrite the IPsec section to bring it up to date and make it easier to
>>>   get a VPN up and running.  While here, remove discussion on FAST_IPSEC
>>>   since it's no longer a valid kernel option.
>>>
>>>   PR:                     121863
>>>   Quick review by:        remko
>>>
>>>   Revision  Changes    Path
>>>   1.324     +293 -829
>>> doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml
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>>>       
>> Tom,
>>
>> I think you meant:
>>
>>       <para>At this point, both networks should be available and
>>     seem to be part of the same network.  Most likely both
>>     networks are protected by a firewall, as they should be.  To
>> -    allow traffic to flow between them, rules need to be added
>> +    allow traffic flow between them, rules need to be added
>>
>> Maybe I'm wrong here.
>>
>> thanks,
>>
>> Ganbold
>>     
>
> I think the current line is right. "Traffic to flow" means that it "can
> happen", traffic flow means that it happends...
>   

You are right, probably I have just misunderstood the whole sentence's 
meaning while translating :)

Ganbold

> Cheers
> remko
>
>   


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