From owner-svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Sat Feb 8 09:56:20 2020 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@mailman.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mailman.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2BFD223E231; Sat, 8 Feb 2020 09:56:20 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from carlavilla@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "Let's Encrypt Authority X3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 48F6xw0NgGz4fGl; Sat, 8 Feb 2020 09:56:20 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from carlavilla@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 088591BA6D; Sat, 8 Feb 2020 09:56:20 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from carlavilla@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id 0189uJUA040741; Sat, 8 Feb 2020 09:56:19 GMT (envelope-from carlavilla@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from carlavilla@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id 0189uJWA040740; Sat, 8 Feb 2020 09:56:19 GMT (envelope-from carlavilla@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <202002080956.0189uJWA040740@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: carlavilla set sender to carlavilla@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Sergio Carlavilla Delgado Date: Sat, 8 Feb 2020 09:56:19 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r53882 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction X-SVN-Group: doc-head X-SVN-Commit-Author: carlavilla X-SVN-Commit-Paths: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction X-SVN-Commit-Revision: 53882 X-SVN-Commit-Repository: doc MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 08 Feb 2020 09:56:20 -0000 Author: carlavilla Date: Sat Feb 8 09:56:19 2020 New Revision: 53882 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53882 Log: Small grammar edits in the Handbook's Introduction PR: 241438 Submitted by: kamalimani1623@gmail.com Patch by: kamalimani1623@gmail.com Approved by: bcr@(mentor) Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D23550 Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml Fri Feb 7 17:55:41 2020 (r53881) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml Sat Feb 8 09:56:19 2020 (r53882) @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ covers various aspects of the &os; Project, such as its history, goals, development model, and so on. - After reading this chapter, you will know: + After reading this chapter you will know: @@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ applications developed by research centers and universities around the world, often available at little to no cost. - Because the source code for &os; itself is generally + Because the source code for &os; itself is freely available, the system can also be customized to an almost unheard of degree for special applications or projects, and in ways not generally possible with operating systems from most @@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ Software Development: The basic - &os; system comes with a full complement of development + &os; system comes with a full suite of development tools including a full C/C++ Compiler @@ -752,14 +752,14 @@ The &os; Project had its genesis in the early part - of 1993, partially as an outgrowth of the Unofficial - 386BSDPatchkit by the patchkit's last 3 coordinators: Nate - Williams, Rod Grimes and Jordan Hubbard. + of 1993, partially as the brainchild of the Unofficial + 386BSDPatchkit's last 3 coordinators: Nate Williams, + Rod Grimes and Jordan Hubbard. 386BSD The original goal was to produce an intermediate snapshot - of 386BSD in order to fix a number of problems with it that - the patchkit mechanism just was not capable of solving. The + of 386BSD in order to fix a number of problems that + the patchkit mechanism was just not capable of solving. The early working title for the project was 386BSD 0.5 or 386BSD Interim in reference of that fact. @@ -897,7 +897,7 @@ least on the side of enforced access rather than the usual opposite. Due to the additional complexities that can evolve in the commercial use of GPL software we do, however, prefer - software submitted under the more relaxed BSD copyright when + software submitted under the more relaxed BSD license when it is a reasonable option to do so. @@ -986,10 +986,10 @@ and Ports Collection repositories also moved from CVS to SVN in May 2012 and July - 2012, respectively. Please refer to the Synchronizing your source - tree section for more information on obtaining - the &os; src/ repository and Obtaining the Source + section for more information on obtaining the + &os; src/ repository and Using the Ports Collection for details on obtaining the &os; Ports Collection.