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From: Chern Lee <chern@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Mon, 8 Oct 2001 15:35:08 -0700 (PDT)
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install chapter.sgml
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chern       2001/10/08 15:35:07 PDT

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  * Revise comma usage
  * Minor wording/technical inconsistencies
  * Remove contractions
  * Moved Slice description into Disk Organization to compliment the
    existing description
  * Remove redundancy in earlier disks naming commit
  * Moved complete list of disk device names back into Storage chapter
  * Fixed initial boot-up/probe/login text--missing FreeBSD banner
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.125     +125 -215  doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml


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