Date: Fri, 3 Mar 2017 05:56:50 -0800 (PST) From: "Rodney W. Grimes" <freebsd-rwg@pdx.rh.CN85.dnsmgr.net> To: Hiroki Sato <hrs@freebsd.org> Cc: yaneurabeya@gmail.com, svn-src-head@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, src-committers@freebsd.org, ngie@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r314585 - head/usr.sbin/syslogd Message-ID: <201703031356.v23Duoiu069893@pdx.rh.CN85.dnsmgr.net> In-Reply-To: <20170303.165718.447567964094984094.hrs@allbsd.org>
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-- Start of PGP signed section. [ Charset ISO-8859-7 unsupported, converting... ] > "Ngie Cooper (yaneurabeya)" <yaneurabeya@gmail.com> wrote > in <1A3F6606-822C-4C80-ADFA-48378F0F29EE@gmail.com>: > > ya> >> How about "...accepts UDP packets sent with any source port" or I actually think this right here is the clearest one of all the ones I have seen attempted. Oh, remove the s from accepts. > ya> >> something? > ya> > > ya> > Yeah, that?s more accurate. > ya> > ya> How about this? > ya> -Ngie > ya> > ya> $ svn diff usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8 > ya> Index: usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8 > ya> =================================================================== > ya> --- usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8 (revision 314585) > ya> +++ usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8 (working copy) > ya> @@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ > ya> .Ar service > ya> of > ya> .Ql \&* > ya> -allows packets to be received from any UDP port. > ya> +allows UDP packets to be sent with any source port. > ya> The default > ya> .Ar service > ya> is > > Looks good to me though probably I am not the best person who can > judge an English expression as good or bad... > > -- Hiroki > -- End of PGP section, PGP failed! -- Rod Grimes rgrimes@freebsd.org
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