Date: Fri, 13 Oct 2006 15:06:27 +0100 From: Shaun Amott <shaun@FreeBSD.org> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/104381: [PATCH] Handbook security chapter: minor grammatical fixes Message-ID: <1160748387.1522@charon.picobyte.net> Resent-Message-ID: <200610131410.k9DEAG6V033624@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 104381
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [PATCH] Handbook security chapter: minor grammatical fixes
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Fri Oct 13 14:10:16 GMT 2006
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Shaun Amott
>Release: FreeBSD 6.2-PRERELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
>Description:
The security chapter of the handbook has a few minor grammatical errors.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
--- security-chapter.diff begins here ---
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.299
diff -u -r1.299 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml 10 Oct 2006 02:43:40 -0000 1.299
+++ chapter.sgml 12 Oct 2006 14:42:19 -0000
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
servers — meaning that external entities can connect and talk
to them. As yesterday's mini-computers and mainframes become
today's desktops, and as computers become networked and
- internetwork, security becomes an even bigger issue.</para>
+ inter-networked, security becomes an even bigger issue.</para>
<para>System security also pertains to dealing with various forms of
attack, including attacks that attempt to crash, or otherwise make a
@@ -2296,6 +2296,9 @@
Issued Expires Principal
Aug 27 15:37:58 Aug 28 01:37:58 krbtgt/EXAMPLE.ORG@EXAMPLE.ORG</screen>
+ <para>The ticket can then be revoked when you have finished:</para>
+
+ <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>k5destroy</userinput>
</sect2>
<sect2>
@@ -2319,7 +2322,7 @@
<application>Kerberos</application> enabled daemons and a
workstation — the server must have a
<filename>keytab</filename> file. This file
- contains the servers host key, which allows it and the
+ contains the server's host key, which allows it and the
<acronym>KDC</acronym> to verify each others identity. It
must be transmitted to the server in a secure fashion, as the
security of the server can be broken if the key is made public.
@@ -2349,8 +2352,8 @@
you can use <command>kadmin</command> from the
<application>Kerberos</application> server. The
<command>add --random-key</command> command will let you add the
- servers host principal, and the <command>ext</command> command
- will allow you to extract the servers host principal to its own
+ server's host principal, and the <command>ext</command> command
+ will allow you to extract the server's host principal to its own
keytab. For example:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>kadmin</userinput>
--- security-chapter.diff ends here ---
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