Date: Thu, 15 Sep 2005 13:16:30 -0400 From: John Baldwin <jhb@FreeBSD.org> To: Gary W.@ Swearingen <garys@opusnet.com> Cc: doc@freebsd.org, Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org>, Kevin Oberman <oberman@es.net> Subject: Re: RFC: second try at improving Handbook's boot manager text Message-ID: <200509151316.31399.jhb@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <cnhdcngw8x.dcn@mail.opusnet.com> References: <cnhdcngw8x.dcn@mail.opusnet.com>
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On Wednesday 14 September 2005 05:44 pm, Gary W. Swearingen wrote: > A couple of people didn't agree with my grammar and one had some other > comments about the boot manager text of the Handbook (and my change). > So here's another go at it, before I've committed it this time. > There's considerably more to criticize now. :) Looks ok to me. -- John Baldwin <jhb@FreeBSD.org> <>< http://www.FreeBSD.org/~jhb/ "Power Users Use the Power to Serve" = http://www.FreeBSD.org
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